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Reviews for Through the Window

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 06, 2005
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  • From ANON - Ziph on January 29, 2005
    ...wow.

    just, wow.

    I, for one, would die for a next part. It was like, the perfect smut if you ask me. ^^
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  • From ANON - macy on January 23, 2005
    kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! that was so hot!!! sizzling. hoee~~~ please write more? please please?
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 12, 2005
    This is one of the best fics on the site.Of course you should write more,lots more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2005
    this was so good
    i hope you update
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  • From ANON - Nikolita on December 29, 2004
    Best. Ending. Sentence. Ever. XD
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  • From ANON - Mikke on December 29, 2004
    It's very very well written and I liked it thoroughly. And the sex scene isn't bad at all. I totally forgot that you mentioned it was your first and just figured you were doing that thing a lot. But now I have to say it was extra good since you obviously said you'd never done that sort of thing...
    Very very good story...
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  • From ANON - lillilly on December 06, 2004
    Okay, so that was soooo good! I liked it, and I hope that you don't intend on stopping here. I would love to see how Sasu handles eating with Naru with the images of what just happned going through his mind. Um maybe even some naru desert after dinner? Please continue

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2004
    I think you should defintely coutunie this fic!! It's amazing! And it's funny too. Poor Sasuke, now he's utterly confused about how to handle his newly developed crush on Naruto... 'Course, we all know if Naruto found out, he'd just up and jump Sasuke's bones *snkrs* So yes, please write more, because this was excellent for a first try. And we all know Preactice makes perfect! ^^
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  • From ANON - Eye of Aurora on November 22, 2004
    Hey, I thought this was incrediably wonderful! You are a fabulous writer, and I think you did everything perfectly! Awesome description - just enough of it - before you eased into the erotica. It was very enjoyable and arousing and made my fangirly day. I love Naruto...it's an amazing series. You really did a good job with keeping everyone in character and explaining anyhting (like how Naruto had an advanced sense of smell and how he'd previously gotten over his crush on Sakura and realized his attraction to Sasuke) I loved it. I really hope you write more! You have a new fan!

    EoA
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  • From ANON - hino on November 20, 2004
    i'd love to see this made into a mulit-part story!! the story itself was done well...practice does make perfect and i think you are well on your way! please write more! ja

    hino
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  • From ANON - shinigami shinobi on November 19, 2004
    DUDE!!

    you must seriouly
    continue this wonderful
    story of yours!!

    it is well written and
    i loved it!! so i wiil for
    you to continue with
    the story please!!

    i am so happy
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  • From ANON - silverlook on November 19, 2004
    that was your first lemon 0o?.... wao! it was quit good for a first try...i love the way you describe things, so dond make the chapters longer or shorter, they are perfect ^^

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  • From ANON - LemonKitty on November 18, 2004
    Very nice. Loved Sasuke's reaction when he realized what he did. *snickers* And Naruto was just hot as always.... *drools* Will there be a 2nd chapter? Please? ^ ^
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on November 18, 2004
    whoa. That it?
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