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Reviews for Through the Window

By : Jiro
  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on October 14, 2005
    Oh wow, that was great. Good fics have been so hard to find, lately. All the ones that I like are taking a while to update, and then this one pops up. Excellent writing, and I think you did VERY well with the "sex" scene, especially if it was only your first time writing one. Now I'm really eager for another chapter of this. I'll hope for one soon.

    Love the way you write both Sasuke and Naruto, by the way. You've kept them both in character while still maturing them a bit for the time frame of the fic. Good work. *goes to add to reccomended fics*
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  • From ANON - Suki on October 14, 2005
    Multi chapter all the way! How embarrassing for Sasuke-kun! =) Your lemon was really good. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself! Yeah, update when you have time.
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  • From ANON - lalalala on October 14, 2005
    It was AWESOME. I remember reading this on ffnet forever and a day ago, and waiting desperately for you to update it. The only spelling mistake I caught was Mapple instead of Maple. I don't catch alot of mistakes when I'm reading fanfic unless it's really bad.
    I love your fic, so please update it this time rather then leave me hanging!
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  • From ANON - yianne-21 on October 14, 2005
    this aint a one shot right!? good. hehe. good story.
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  • From ANON - stephanie on October 04, 2005
    That was very good if thats one of ur first fics like that i congradulate u as much as i enjoyed ur story i cant write the stuff i get uber cheezy so i think ur pretty good please make this a multi chap fic i know ill read it but i also have an annoyin ahbit of not reviewing

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  • From ANON - Sasuke Fangirl #343 on July 11, 2005
    Oh. My. God. ::uber nosebleed:: O_o That was SO hot!! xD
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  • From ANON - Nissie on July 10, 2005
    Please please pleaaaaaaase make this into a multi chaptered story! Ah, this is such a good lemon *fans herself*

    I can't believe this was your first one! Damn, I'm jealous. Well, I don't have much hope for a continuation, since you haven't updated this in a while... but it'd be soooo cool if you did! That last sentence... Damn again! That was perfect!
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  • From ANON - P1 on July 05, 2005
    Are you kidding!! This was greeeeaaaat!!!!! I loved it so much!! I want a sequel! Can I have a sequel? Please? It's just so good and now Naruto knows Sasuke did something (with someone? -his thoughts) and Sasuke's realized his attraction...
    There has to be more!!! You've started an addiction, you can't let it END there!!!!
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  • From ANON - nike on June 18, 2005
    I wish you had continued this. You could have had Sasuke freaking out during the dinner, or having dreams, or any number of interesting things. Personally, I love the idea of seeing Sasuke squirm in fanfictions (probably because he always has such a stick up his arse in the manga, eh?) Alwell, this is a great one shot as it is (did you really NOT have a beta? I couldn't find a mistake if I tried...).
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  • From ANON - nike on June 01, 2005
    Aw...you never continued it! That's too bad, I thought you did a great job on this, I never would have guessed that you were a first time lemon-writter. Damn, I really would have liked to have seen how dinenr went, or at least found out what popped into Naruto's head after making that last observation. Alwell, if you ever get an idea of what happens next, would you pleeeeeeease try writting it? *puppy face*
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  • From ANON - Diane on April 23, 2005
    I can't help myself, I'm desperately drowling in front of my computer.
    What will be of Sasuke and Naruto now?
    Will there ever be a second chapter? I would like that so much!
    Thank you for this great drowling time.
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  • From ANON - Typhoon Jax on March 27, 2005
    Hello!
    I just wanted to drop you a little note telling you that I found your ability to capture erotica very impressive. So if this is your first time, I feel that you will only improve with practice, and really I can't wait to see more.
    Stop saying you're awful, lmao. I read this a few times, in fact. And to boot, this may be only the third or fourth review I've taken the time to write up! Don't stop, it's very very *very* nice..! (Maybe someday I'll get up the guts to write too, lol.)
    ~
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  • From ANON - T.K-kun on March 12, 2005
    this story is really interesting in a perverted nice way. heheh (no offense intended ^^) keep up the story! update soon! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Demon on March 09, 2005
    i was good you are a good writer and for one of your first sex scene it was good
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  • From ANON - Natsu on February 06, 2005
    Ahhh loved it. XD Very very yummy yummy. :D
    Please write more chapters, it doesnt suck! Tis GREAT. =3
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