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Reviews for Shattered

By : caro8
  • From ANON - YamiJay on November 21, 2004
    Wo! I think that Sasuke and Naruto needs to talk a lot and alone. Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Yum on November 19, 2004
    Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah another chapter!!!
    So he had a Psychological punishment... not that bad...
    Lee, Lee, Lee... I can't wait to read the next chapter!! I like Lee spirit but he really need a change in his style of close and his hair cut... It's really lame!!! Will you change something about that?

    Your mission if you accept it, is to update as soon as possible. As always if you are sick or got insomnie because of overwork on this project, I would denie all responsibilities! Good luck Caro...
    this review will destroy itself in 5...4...3...2...1 poof
    (sorry, I think I watch too much the old serie on TV ^^)
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on November 19, 2004
    coolsa.
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  • From ANON - YamiJay on November 17, 2004
    Wow! I really want to read more of this story.
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  • From ANON - Yum on November 12, 2004
    Finally you choose Saku/Lee... Very good choise... I don't know why but I like this pairing...
    I really like the way Naruto acts mature but not too much!!
    I'm really curious of the villager's reaction about Sasuke raturn, especially the other rookies one! will Sasuke be punish for runnig away from the village?
    so please update soo!! :D
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  • From ANON - Curious... on November 11, 2004
    Okay, now I am a bit curious.
    You have a M/F warning on your summery - meaning Male / Female pairing.
    And so far, I haven't seen any. Okay, so Lee and Sakura is together, however the story seem to concentrate on team 7. Not Lee ..
    If this is another M/M action you might want to warn people.. I don't like reading those, simply because Male doing Male sexually/intimatly doesn't do anything for me.

    I'll continue reading though, unless you put up that warning.

    CeeCee
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on November 10, 2004
    This is a really good story. I hope that this is going to be a SasuNaru NaruSasu fic. Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sean on November 10, 2004
    I just wanted to say, you have done a lot better on an den detail than most. I don't understand why so many authors have trouble making action scenes comprehendable to readers. So, good job :) *thumbs up* I understood yours
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  • From ANON - aodi on November 09, 2004
    this is a good story u should keep continuing

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  • From ANON - Yum on November 09, 2004
    No.. I won't kill you because you like Sakura... It's not like it's some kind of disease... actually I don't hate her that much I dislike her when she's on Sasuke-kun's fan's mode... she seems to lost all her brain control!!!
    I have a bad time for read your story... It wouldn't let me read the third chapter in FF.net so... Thank that you update here too!!!
    It was... Awesome... Sasuke Return... and now will we have some kind of explanation about his 'new way'?
    He finaly stop chasing his brother shadow... like it say 'It's never too late'!!^^
    Hope you update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Wrathchlde on November 09, 2004
    Not too shabby. Read somewhat like an rp but not bad all the same. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - kabuki on November 04, 2004
    Hi! I'm french, so sorry for my english!
    I just wanted to say that your story is cool! And I didn't see a review from a sasuxsaku fan! I'm one of them... So I hope it's about that couple!!!
    Anyway, go on!
    Ja, bye bye!
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  • From ANON - Yum on November 04, 2004
    Hi re-me!!! Yeah Sasuke had return!! I'm super happy!!!^^ (no I'm not really a Sasuke fan... I'm an Itachi and Naruto fan...)
    So last time you say you've not decided pairing, personaly I don't like pairing involving Sakura because... I kind dislike her... a lot!
    This chapter was interesting!!!
    Continue!! Up date sooooooooooooooooooooon
    Ps : I saw you update in ff.net too... GREAT!!! I don't review there because I'm too lazy...
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  • From ANON - Wrathchylde on November 03, 2004
    *mumbles about cliffhangers and kicks rocks impatiently as he waits for the next chap*


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  • From ANON - sapphire on November 03, 2004
    very evil more pls
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