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Reviews for The One I Still Loved...

By : Legacy
  • From ANON - Regress on January 10, 2006
    I AGREE TOTALLY!

    Sasuke, while yeah, he's had some tough times, is still just a arrogant little prick. I can understand HOW he's gotten the way he is, but it's still his problem to deal with, and having the world revolve around him as it seems to in Naruto is disgusting.

    Great story too, I like how the entire thing isn't solely dedicated to the smut, it's got plot and emotion and you bring it out very well. Your a talenter writer, good job.

    Keep up the good work, down with Sasuke!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
    Hey Great story but please finish i've seen too many good storys go un-finished so please end the wait and tell us whats going to happen next!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    Hey I totally understand I hate Sasuke to great story I'll try to check out the other one you said update soon man I'll be waiting p.s great cliffi
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  • From ANON - Rachael Edwards on November 10, 2005
    All hail the Sausuke-haters!
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  • From ANON - Steven on November 02, 2005
    Love your story man
    Sasuke realy is just a grumpy BASTARD
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  • From ANON - soldier_of_louisiana on October 25, 2005
    great storie i enjoyed it greatly and could you e mail me where to find that other stories at exactly please
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  • From ANON - Rachael Edwards on October 02, 2005
    Yeah for hating Sasuke!
    Also, I really enjoyed this fic. Clearly written, nice grammer, interesting take on a subject,all in all well done.
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  • From ANON - Jon on September 10, 2005
    Finally, a fellow Sasuke hater, Sasuke's a dickhead and that's that. Liked your story by the way, very well written.
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  • From ANON - Daniel on August 26, 2005
    This is a good fic, you should really consider finishing it. Dropping it would be a loss.
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  • From ANON - Mirro on June 19, 2005
    I hate Sasuke, too. I don't understand why anyone could call Sakura 'annoying' in contrast to that punk! >=D
    Lovely writing~
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  • From ANON - ernilriel on May 07, 2005
    That was awesome! and I hate sasuke too! the tratior! cool story.
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  • From ANON - Naru/Saku on April 25, 2005
    Write the next chapter!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - master11 on April 06, 2005
    not bad at all i hope u update this soon. yah i can see y u hate sasuke so much. i REALY hope he gets kiled by his bro. its not that i hate him it will just help the anime along well i better stop im rampling. update asap please
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  • From ANON - mariam on February 09, 2005
    Yeah for Sasuke hating! ^__________^ I hate that jerk too!
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  • From ANON - KuroKen on January 28, 2005
    I am greatly impressed by this piece. I agree there are not all that many Saku/Naru pairings out there, but this one argueably makes up for the shortage.

    I am not sure how I feel about Sasuke-and no I'm not trying to be difficult- but as a writer I must credit you with doing the character a great service in justifying his flaws and evolving him from a troubled youth into an abusive adult. It is a solid piece of character development and one thing that I personally value greatly in fanfics is how interpretation of accepted canon of the series/book/movie can be interpreted to create a plausible situation. Some of the Sasu/Saku writers out there interpret his demeanor as more of a protective shell that eventually is shattered by the purity and strenght of Sakura's undying love; once again this as nothing more than a matter of interpretation and writing skill determine the plausibility of the story. The Sasu/Naru relationship is fairly cliched, you on the other hand, chose the road less traveled and executed the work with aplomb and a great deal of heart.

    The erotic bits are very evocative and emotional -which is what makes the difference between smut and erotica, at least in my opinion- the use of first person narrative is a bit unusual and a welcome change of pace, add to that the change of character narrating the tale and it achieves a subtle element of literary style that most people pay for at their favorite paperback store.

    Are you planinng in writing some of the remainder of the story from Sasuke's point of view? If so, godspeed. In my personal experience it is much harder to write from a disturbed or villanous character's perspective and make it convincing, since most of us are fairly well adapted (that is, unless you are writing all this from some correctional facility out in Texas or something)

    Hope to read the next chapter soon.

    P.S. For the record I am rather fond of the Naru/Hina pairing (personal, life experience motives weight in this matter) and while I grive a bit for the girl, it was a nice touch to use this relationship as background color for your current story.




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