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Reviews for Damned Souls Infernal Rage, Lust and Desires

By : Gelionlegends
  • From ANON - Base on February 17, 2005
    Great story, I was lost on the first chapter but the second one was much more clear. More Lemons in the next chapter please
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  • From ANON - Leno on January 16, 2005
    Where are you? I wanna read Naruto screwing Haku's mom's brains out.
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  • From ANON - black on December 09, 2004
    Jeez..If only my lil' daydreams can get that real. Update soon. The plot still seems really cool too. Haku is a girl in this story? Great. Cause that whole thing about him being a guy was really weird. Kishimoto even gave him friggen girly legs. Da hells with that? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - black on December 09, 2004
    Though it was obvious to tell who was talking simply because the manner of speech between the two are vastly different, doesnt mean you shouldn't use "%%". Well, it looks really interesting so far. Next chappie wipee!
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  • From ANON - Morsamare on December 06, 2004
    ... You really really really need a proofreader for this. This story is unreadable in it's current context, half the worlds you have to guess at what they're supposed to be... make sure you read your own works after running them through the spell checker
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  • From ANON - A Fan on November 21, 2004
    good lemon... I want more though...
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  • From ANON - Lacky d on October 20, 2004
    THis chapter was way better! Maybe it was cause' there wasnt much talking..But when when there were it was nice and easy to follow. Knew exactly whos talking. ANd goodness, he's been training for 3 millas? as? How much power would he have now? Goodn wit with that much time he could probably rival (if not stronger) the powers in the Dragonball Z world.
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  • From ANON - Lacky D on October 20, 2004
    Um, it had an interesting plot so far but, could you start usiing these "Blah" ? I had a real hard time following this, hell at one point you used the dash thingy "--" and that cleared it up a bit. But you didnt..so..Please?
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  • From ANON - maoloch on October 20, 2004
    Great story. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Yangee on October 14, 2004
    Those lyrics at the end are wrong, these are the correct ones.

    Not dead which eternal
    Str
    Stranger eons, death may die
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  • From ANON - Yangee on October 14, 2004
    Those lyrics at the end are wrong, these are the correct ones.

    Not dead which eternal lie
    Stranger eons, death may die
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  • From ANON - Zelinko on October 13, 2004
    Um... could you quotation marks... I got lost in the story... But from what I read I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2004
    Nice. I hope the new chapter will be there soon. You could make it a naru/hina , It would be nice. And the chapters longer ok$

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