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Reviews for Explosion

By : MistahSandman
  • From JulCan1987 on April 14, 2012
    When are you going to finish this story, there aren't that many, if any, Temari x oc stories out there, so please update.
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  • From ANON - . on January 09, 2007
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  • From ANON - shade on September 05, 2006
    come on come on!!! MORE MORE!!
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Grendel on August 22, 2006
    A jajajajajajaja

    Pretty good fic.....needs to be UPDATED though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2006
    Good, but not great
    More please
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  • From ANON - c0p13r on July 31, 2005
    you're still a loser
    your friend,
    copier copycat
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  • From ANON - c0p13r on April 08, 2005
    jeez, u suck the last time this fiction was updated was the first time it was put on here u suck!!
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  • From ANON - Blisblop on January 18, 2005
    Hello.I want more!lots more.There are noTemari/gaara that I can find,though the guy you invented was appealing
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  • From ANON - Shadow on December 05, 2004
    okay, not to be offensive or be a bastard or anything, but, i would believe you on that NC-17 thing in later chapters if... there were some more chapters... i mean, c'mon... it's kind of nerve wracking... i see things... horrible things...
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  • From ANON - Shadow on December 01, 2004
    it's been too long... write more chapters already!... be more writer like, man!... respect gaara and temari's fanfics... respect them all... and respect yours... make more, yes?... signed- Shadow of www.geocities.com/promark2003
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  • From ANON - lain on September 19, 2004
    ...more...More...MORE...
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  • From ANON - Sunlit A Colony on September 19, 2004
    You need to earn that NC-17 rating you gave your fic buddy. Turn things up a notch. *wink wink*
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  • From MistahSandman on September 18, 2004
    Thanks!I'll try to improve.
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  • From FlameArchanist on September 18, 2004
    Interesting concept. You have a love affair with commas I suggest you try to make that less obvious. As with all new authors I strongly suggest you find a beta reader to fine tune your story and make you less eligible for flames. If you need help just ask.
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