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Reviews for All Those Little Things

By : lynnxlady
  • From UbakeNeko on December 08, 2007
    Rar! I liked this a lot... Mostly because I love JirTsu, but also because it was remarkably well done. I enjoyed the referances to Tsunades previous relationship, and how much it preyed on her mind, even with Jiraiya. Bravo!
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  • From Miffietills1988 on September 20, 2007
    I love it. Wonderful story.
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  • From Hotnspicyfox on August 19, 2007
    That was...hands down, *the* best JiraTsu story out there. I love your writing style, it really keeps a reader's interest, and it just fits these two. The last line is simple and touching. 10/10.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2007
    Finally,someone thought of this pairing. Good one!
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  • From TripleS on January 31, 2006
    Actually, this was the first TsunadeXJiraiya adult fic I've read, and I loved it! Great sex!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    You need to write more.

    This is too good to do as a one shot. :)
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  • From ANON - Yumi on July 01, 2005
    this is a beautifully written smut story! i really loved it, you should write more!
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  • From ANON - Sailor Comet on December 08, 2004
    That was hot. (Well, Jiraiya is already hot, but the writing was definitely _very nice_.)

    Beyond that, I like that he stayed in the morning.

    ~Sam
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  • From ANON - RFEC43 on September 17, 2004
    Porn WITH plot- which is actually the best kind. You have the characters down pat. Great great job- I love the pairing. It's hot!
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  • From ANON - kilmorden on September 15, 2004
    Wow, this was great. Can't think of a single damned 'constructive criticism'. Well written and entertaining, J & T seemed very much in character, the whole story was entirely believeable - it was a great read :)
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on September 14, 2004
    the first Tsunade/Jiraiya ficcie I have ever read, it was good! I hope to see some more het pairings from youthe the future. sorry I am not more verbose, am on allergy medicine, just wanted to let you know I read and I liked
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  • From persepolis130 on September 13, 2004
    Alright, I flat-out LOVE this fic! Thole ole thing about there being a definate reason why Tsunade didn't have sex with Jiraiya but her not quite remembering what it was really grabbed me. Even at half her age, I look back and wonder like that sometimes. Also, I liked Jiraiya's pondering about the fact that he might have ied ied her if things had been different; fic writers tend to forget his serious side. The atmosphere was excellent, both Tsunade and Jiraiya seemed really in character, and I completely adore how you fit these two together as a couple. The sex scene was flawless! There were a few times when I had to pause and figure out exactly what you were trying to say (the phrasing was a bit off), but the plot was so plausable and flowed so well that it really didn't bother me. The best Naruto het lemon fic I've ever read! Hope to read more from you soon!!
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  • From FireSpark on September 13, 2004
    Oh, I LOVED this story! It was my favorite character in all of anime, who is largely neglected by the fandom, it was short and erotic and yet meaningful and emoal aal and definitely not shallow, and it left a sense of closure while also leaving the end open for more to happen!

    BRAVO!

    And, though few reviewers go so far as to actually say this out loud: the sex scene was good. Good descriptions of feelings and sensations. Awkwardness indeed created realism, though you were a bit too heavy on the awkwardness-- Jiraiya should be experienced enough know better than to dive right in without any real heavy foreplay. And look what happened, baka! Nice guys don't finish last, but they make sure that their nice girls finish first. Next time "prime the engine" a bit.

    But that's a detail. Well written!
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  • From ZiriOkamiotoko on September 13, 2004
    That was pretty good. There ought to be more Jiraiya/Tsunade love, thanks for writing some, it's badly needed. I like Tsunade-sama's comments at the end, it was cute.
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  • From ANON - alphawerewolf on September 13, 2004
    Still like the story, and appreciate the fact that they /do/ make mistakes, and aren't stinking drunk when they finally have sex. Such a nice cha..
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