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Reviews for Sand and Wind

By : FlameArchanist
  • From ANON - campurr on December 22, 2004
    I have never found a garra and tamara story,looks like i still haven't.I doubt tamari would guard the
    uchiha.
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  • From on December 22, 2004
    I got a bit confused at first when you were talking about how Sasuke had transformed into Gaara, but the rest of it was wonderful! It took you forever to update, and I have been looking forward to it for awhile! You should make the chapters longer...^^; I love what you have done already!

    Yeah, I was thinking that he was getting a smidge OOC too. Nice save! :D

    Much love, and I am looking forward to the next update!

    -Mitsu
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  • From ANON - Spitfire666 on December 22, 2004
    GAAH! That's cruel of you! You made it seem like it was Gaara being so sweet in the last chapter, and then it turns out to be SASUKE! *fumes* Why doesn't he just, jump off a cliff or something?! *takes a deep breath*

    Sorry about the ranting...it's just been so long since you updated, and you ended it with a cliffhanger! That's truly evil of you. ^_^ And about your characterization...I guess that depends on the reader. I personally don't like the idea of a Sadist-Gaara mixed with rape, so I thought he was pretty much in character throughout the fic. HOWEVER, if people ARE into rapish Gaara, then I guess he seemed a little OOC.

    But it's up to you how he turns out! Anyway, I really, really hope you update soon! I'll feel sorry for Temari in the mean while. -_-;; UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - DarkFeenix on November 29, 2004
    oh you updated :) Good fic, with every chapter, I like it more ;) Temari and Sasuke had a fight? Well, we'll hear more about that in future, right? Keep on writing
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  • From ANON - Hajime on November 25, 2004
    You're writing skills are fascinating. Gaara has been kept in character up to until your last update.( I rarely see anyone surpass that.) I admire this fanfic. Please, write more. :D
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  • From ANON - a fan on November 21, 2004
    post the teachers email address!
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  • From ANON - Toki Mirage on November 10, 2004
    So glad yo updated. ^^ Update again soon? Kudasai? *sniff* T-T *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Spitfire666 on November 10, 2004
    YAY!!! YOU UPDATED! ^_^! Poor Temari! I want Gaara to MURDER Sasuke, the stupid horny Uchiha bastard! *rants* DIE DIE DIE!!! Anyway, Gaara was...so...sweet...;_; heh heh, bet he tasted sweet too, eh Temari? Ha ha, that was pretty kinky and BOLD of her, doing that to him.

    I'm dying to know what's going through Gaara's head right now. I can't blame you for your delay in posting this chapter, though. I've been busy as hell, trying to just keep UP with school. But I really, REALLY liked this chapter, and I pray that you update soon!

    (P.S. KILL SASUKE!!! >_
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  • From lleb0929 on November 10, 2004
    This is interesting to read i like it. update soon
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  • From ANON - confused,maybe stupid on November 10, 2004
    I do not understand what exactly happened
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  • From ANON - Spitfire666 on November 06, 2004
    O_O Dude, what's up? I'm freaked out about your lack of updates! Is it writer's block? Lack of ideas? E-mail me if you want and maybe I can help you out. Since there are basically only three other Gaara/Temari fics in existance, most of which aren't great or involve rape, (which I HATE) I'm really hoping you continue this, since it's definitely the best one.

    *sigh* As soon as I get my own computer, I'll start writing some Gaara/Temari. I'm pretty tired of seeing yaoi in EVERYTHING. But anyway, I REALLY hope you continue this soon. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Spitfire666 on September 16, 2004
    Yay! 4 hours of biology homework later, I find that you updated! OOH! Bastard Sasuke! KILL HIM GAARA! Damn it, that was an evil cliffhanger! Run away Temari! *relishes in the thought of Gaara mangling Sasuke* I love your descriptions in here, and I can't wait to read the descriptions of Gaara kicking Sasuke's ass all over the place!

    Great job so far!
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  • From ANON - WaterBookLover on September 16, 2004
    SasukeTemari? o_0 I never considered that coupling as a good one... But now that I think about it.... I think you would do a good job writing it! Can the next fic you write be SasukeTemari?
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  • From ANON - Janice on September 15, 2004
    I like it so far keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkFeenix on September 08, 2004
    this is a very good fic :) best gaara/temari I'veI've read so far(don't get to cocky, I haven't read many fics about these 2 ;)) You write well and your update times are good. Also your descriptions are right on the mark which, IMO is the hardest part... I'll be waiting for future chapters :)
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