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By : phoenixsdark
  • From ANON - lalala on July 30, 2004
    I am afraid of an Jiraiya Iruka pairing. there almost 30 years apart.
    as for pairings, I suggest a triangle betwNejiNeji Naruto and Sasuke (neji and sasuke both liknarunaruto).
    How about Gaara for another ninja?
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  • From ANON - siw-wa on July 30, 2004
    Jiraiya with Iruka? Interesting. I think your idea might just work though I still like to see some loving between Iruka and Naruto!!

    Love the story, btw. ^O^
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  • From ANON - stranj100 on July 30, 2004
    This is looking good. I haven't read anything quite like this. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Oso on July 30, 2004
    frankly this is very good *luvs* I never expected the story to be like throm rom the summary ^^;
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  • From ANON - evvy on July 30, 2004
    OOoooh, very interesting! I like how the plot is set up. I'd prefer Sasuke/Naruto pairing^^
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  • From ANON - atarii on July 30, 2004
    Wow...that was really something! Not many fan are are interesting enough to even remember the title, but this one's going to stay with me for a long time. ^^

    I absolutely loved the plot. It was so original! No more of that " Lik Like, Naruto and his frends are in hi skool and their t out outkasts and every1 hates them! What r they gonna do?!" junk. Or the "Character1 decides to leave and Cha Chaer 2er 2 is realising their feelings for C1, what will C2 do now?".

    THANK YOU. I've been sifting through junk fic after junk fic, and the lack of originality is traumatizing. But here, I click on the link for 'Missing' and what do I get? An original fanfic!! I almost died from the shock of it all. Thank you SO much for actually taking your time to consider that itty bitty detail called Plot.

    It was also really nice how you didn't have a huge, two page author's note at the top of the page, or bottom. You got straight to the fanfic, which I greatly appreciated.

    Furthermore, your writing style is absolutely fantastic. You don't throw in random Japanese words just to make yourself sound smarter, your sense of timing and flow is impeccable, and the characters are believable. The only exception I saw to that was Tsunade: From what we've seen in the manga and anime, she seems (to me) the type who really respects individuals, and values the human life. I can't really imagine her ever doing this sort of thing. Perhaps she was forced into doing it by a council, or the villagers? It's absolutely necessary that the decission be made (for that annoying detail, plot), yes, but I can't see Tsunade being the person who did it. But I'm no fanfiction writer, so what do I know? ^^
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    I loved seeing this side of Jiraiya. It's nice to be reminded that, although he's kinda goofy, and he acts like a perverted old man a lot, he is still one of the three legendary ninjas, and he does have that serious side to him.

    I'll wrap this up (before I get carried away pointing oul thl the great aspects of your fanfic) by saying that I really enjoyed this story, and have got my fingers crossed for a sequel. (Hopefully soon! ^^) Please do get get discouraged by anything nasty homophobes, stuck up copycats, or preteen fangirls say. You're story was an absolute delight to read, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. (Not that that means much, but hey. ^^;) My two requests? Get the next chapter out as soon as you can comfortably do so, and don't be persuaded by any ranting reviewers to change your pairings, storyline, writing style, or anything else that they might try to persuade you to change. I have absolute faith in you, our guide through this story, and I know that you'll do everything for a purpose, not just to please reviewers.

    Eagerly awaiting the next chapter,
    -Atarii (aim ichigokumaguro)

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  • From ANON - Blaise on July 30, 2004
    Ah! How could she?!
    Very interesting so far :) Well I have one suggestion for your other ninja's, how about Gaara (loves him) With his past and present situation I can see him with our merry band of runaways and not making it to far fetched.
    Jiraiya and Iruka pairing you say? XD I'll like to see how you pull that one off. If you do decide to add Gaara, a gaaraXnaruto pairing is always nice ^_^ Though sasukeXnaruto is good to. Well it your choice
    I'll be looking forward to your future updates
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  • From ANON - jen on July 30, 2004
    I love it! Please continue soon! How could they think of doing that to Sasuke and Naruto!? Im glad they are getting away!
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  • From ANON - Gakifang on July 30, 2004
    Dude, this is...this is totally kick ass! Awesomely well written, a horribly plausible scenario, and wonderful characterization. I love how well put together this chapter is. Please say there is going to be a lot more of this story because, damn is it good.
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  • From ANON - Michiru on July 29, 2004
    Hello. :) This seems like it will be an interesting story! And a original plot, too. ^^ Well, my favourite pairing is SasuNaru. To me, they seem like the most believable and compatible pair of the series.. (although, of course, Sasuke will probably end up with Sakura... blah. -.-;) But Neji x Naruto is somewhat interesting, too. Maybe a love triangle? ^^ Both Sasuke and Neji interested in Naruto? Yeah.. it's probably overdone, but I still find it entertaining, anyway. :p But if nothing else, I opt for SasuNaru. :) And... Iruka x Jiraiya? o.o;; Wow.. that really is a new one. I can't really see it, but I'm all for it if you can make it work.. ^^
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  • From ANON - Vampia Zee on July 29, 2004
    AH! How could Tsunade do that ;o; I'm glad Jiraiya was there to make everything...semi-oki again lol I think this and i hope to see more soon! Do you think you can put in SasuNaru *shifty eyes, shifty eyes* o___o; sorry I just love the pairing but its your fic! *thumbs up Gai/Lee style* xD
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on July 29, 2004
    Hi!!! *huggles* I am so excited to see more from you! Hehehe, at one point I was thinking about the mission impossible theme, because I was like *make it, damn it, make it XD!! I find the plot interesting. I like the fact that Jiraiya is breaking the rules as usual and taking the boys with him, I doubt Sasuke wants to be bred like a horse, Naruto wants to be half asleep all his life and Neji stay a caged bird. Ohh your pairing is evil Iruka and Jiraiya...

    I am wondering who you have in mind to join them...Shikamaru? Kiba? Shino (oh my goth, that would be so cool, he is way underepresented in fanfics!)

    I can't wait to read more!
    Alma
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  • From ANON - Amanda on July 29, 2004
    Well if you are asking for two more people to join I would say haku and zabiu
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