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By : phoenixsdark
  • From ANON - Haru on August 06, 2004
    Freaking good. I can't wait for the next installment! Jiraiya Iruka owo~!? Hee hee, interesting :D though, I've always been a Kaka/Iru fan myself X3. Hee hee hee! Update sooon!
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  • From ANON - arkanefyre on August 04, 2004
    Lovely start. I see wonderful potentials here. I can't see Tsunade as such a bitch, but its an interesting plot.

    Pairings. I'm all for SasuNaru, but since Neji's here, why not Sasuke/Neji/Naruto? It'll be mean leaving Neiji out XD

    Again, great plot. I'm interested to see how this turns out. Definately reading the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2004
    This is a really good story! I feel so sorry for them! Please write more soon!!! I like this
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  • From ANON - Hasuka on August 04, 2004
    Wow! This fic is so original! It's very cool and well written... hmm... I think JiraiyaxIruka could be interesting! But whatut Nut Naruto? Neji or Sasuke? ^_^; Doneep eep us in sespence too long! I can't wait for more. EDIT: NejixNarutoxSasuke Threesome!!! XD .> hehe ^_^;
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  • From ANON - Hasuka on August 04, 2004
    Wow! This fic is so original! It's very cool and well written... hmm... I think JiraiyaxIruka could be interesting! But what about Naruto? Neji or Sasuke? ^_^; Don't keep us in sespence too long! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - aiko on August 04, 2004
    i really like your story so far. as for pairings go...i really like sasu/naru or even sasu/naru/neji. but i as for any others i think i would wait until the story deepens and other characters are introduced.
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  • From ANON - Excell and Lina on August 01, 2004
    OMG! OMG! OMG! We like your fic lots! ^^
    ((key: Normal writing = Excell-sama, Lina's yami.
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  • From on July 31, 2004
    Really awesome story!!! I think it'd be even more awesome with a Sasu/Naru pairing ^^. Anyway, that's my vote and... I wonder what's gonna happen next... the story does seem really interesting. But more importantly, Sasu/Naru!!! ^^;; Anyway, update soon.
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  • From ANON - cfox on July 31, 2004
    What a nice stoy to see .Very different from the norm I hope you countinue it and that is is very long.

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  • From ANON - Christina on July 31, 2004
    So good! You write with such ease and the words just seem to flow. I've read many pieces with rhetorical comments/concepts incorporated and have found them either too flowery or too unrealistic (mine included. hehehehe). But you've truly captured the essence of enslavement without being either of those things. I find that very impressive. Please keep this up. I'm looking forward to your next update. Oh, is there any way to be informed of an incoming update?
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  • From ANON - Rolie on July 31, 2004
    I think Gaara and Shino should join.. Gaara knows how the others feel..
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  • From ANON - Ghostninja85 on July 30, 2004
    Hey, Interesting story. While I disagree with your characterization of Tsunade, I really like the start of this fic. Could you perhaps be persuaded to post on fanfiction.net as well, just without the lemons? It's just that this fic is really good, but aff.net is kind of unreliable. l

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    Update soon! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. As to the other two joining, could they perhaps be Gaara and Haku?

    P.S. as far as pairings go, I love SasuNaru. So I vote for SasuNaru and NeijiGaara or NeijiHaku (If he's alive).
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  • From ANON - ssj4sailormenz on July 30, 2004
    *applaudes* This is a whole new twist that i never thought of as to what could have happened after Naruto, Neji, Shikamaru, Kiba, Chouji, Lee, Gaara, Temari and Kankuro (they all deserve praise hence why i named each individual) brought Sasuke back. This fic is unique, original and most certainly compelling. I look forward to reading the rest of your fic, that is if you're going to update it.

    Two more ninjas? I wouldn't suggest Ino or Sakura 'cause they would just insist on going just to stay with Sasuke. Tenten is a maybe as is Shikamaru. Both would be useful in the future but they would be reluctant to leave Konoha. Kiba, Shino ahoujhouji seem like the type of people who would help the others with their getaway.

    Truthfully, i can think of three ninjas who would go along with this band of merry men. Hinata, Lee and Kakashi.

    Um...if it's ok wiith you would you consider making this yaoi? Cheers.


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  • From ANON - Sexy Kaged One on July 30, 2004
    Please hurry and update!!!!!!!!!!!!
    NOW YOUV'E GOT MY ATTENTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    This sounds like it's gonna rock!
    *Give the puppy face and a boyish smile*
    I'm so interested in this fic!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - Shez on July 30, 2004
    Tsunade is very OOC.. so so very OOC... o_o; But other than that, it's good. ^^ As for pairings, I vote Naruto being uke and Neji and Sasuke pinning after him, ending with Sasunaru. ^^; It's my fav pair, so... ^^;;;
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