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By : phoenixsdark
  • From ANON - Haru on September 01, 2004
    .......EEE!
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  • From ANON - Ghostninja85 on August 30, 2004
    Yay! An update! Thats so sad about Shino, and I'm glad you fixed Tsunade's OOCness. Update soon, and I vote for SasuNaru NaruSasu!
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  • From ANON - ichigo_bokki on August 29, 2004
    Nicely written, interesting plot. Keep going! ^_^
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on August 27, 2004
    A really great chapter. I never thought of Shika as an addition and the whole 'plot' ws interesting. Well thought out and written.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - Procrastinator on August 27, 2004
    I love your story. It is so refreshing from the PWPs and the ordinary Naruto leave and comes back stronger lalala crap.
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  • From ANON - Dancing Kitsune on August 26, 2004
    ((When they were checking for new chapters in their favorite fanfics...))
    Lina and Excell: ::stands up, pushes chairs back, slams hands on table, and takes a very loud gasp in 2 seconds, sincrenized::

    Lina: ::cries in happieness:: Updates are beautiful...!!!

    Excell: Finnaly! I thought it was going to become a one-shot/abandoned fic!

    ((After reading))

    L: Did you really have to make Shikamaru-sama the spy?

    E: Atleast the living eye-brow didn't go-

    L: DO NOT INSULT THE GREAT LEE-SAMA!!!! ::kills Excell::

    Momigi: Since they are having a lovers quarrel (Excell in backroung: WE ARE NOT LOVERS!), I, Momigi Ikaido, will do the rest of the review, since I read it over their shoulders. ^^

    Smart Moves:
    1. How Shkamaru made his entrence. The shadow trap.
    2. Shikamaru as a spy. They wouldn't suspect him. ( Sorry, Shika-babi.. No one -- ever -- suspects you, hun.. | E&L in backround: ::pauses from strangeling each other:: Shika-babi?? Hun?? | M: Shuddup! >
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  • From ANON - phoenix02 on August 26, 2004
    Well....the Muses have this habit of writing lots and lots of PWPs after something with heavy plot. Now, after reading the manga, I keep seeing Kiba with Kankuro...but maybe I could get Shin tin there too. Stupid Muses. They keep cackling about Jiraiya and Iruka.....anyone object to a PWP with those two? Going to add one more person to the run away list. And Garaa and Lee are going to appear....those two are so much fun. Sigh....I'm nuts. But part 3 is under way. Get ready for a bumpy ride. ;)
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  • From ANON - The Evil Spastic Bitch on August 26, 2004
    Wai! PLEASE continue this story, and hurry fast! ^__^ I really like your premise, and I hope you can pull it off!

    Shino.... who WOULD you pair him up with?...... Um, *moves to avoid rocks* Kankuro? Yeah... he's all I can think of atdratdrop*
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  • From ANON - Naotoki on August 26, 2004
    Sweet! X3 continue! continue! As for Shino parings, I've only ever seen him with Kiba or Naruto. ^^;
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  • From ANON - ichaicha on August 26, 2004
    there is *some* Shino yaoi - usually he's paired with Kiba. I have a doujinshi of that pairing, you can download it if you like: http://www.zettai-hentai.net/doujinshi/naruto/index.html#natsukoso . Nice job with the story, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Yuki_ on August 11, 2004
    Iruka Jiraiya? Wow that would be interesting. Keep on writing this one it's hella good so far and it's onl the first chapter!
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on August 06, 2004
    This sounds so dark and exciting so far. I love Jiraiya!!! Never enough Jiraiya fics. Jiraiya and Iruka, now there is an interesting pair. Go for it. I like how you wrote everything so well. It was intense. cdk
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  • From ANON - Haru on August 06, 2004
    Oh, ps... perhaps you should have.... mmm.... Lee and.... Kakashi (since I'm sure Kakashi would be worried about both Naruto and Sasuke...)..? Or Lee and Shikamaru....?
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  • From ANON - kao on August 06, 2004
    my god! this fic is really interesting.
    for the couple make a nejixnaruto or a threesome nejixsasukexnaruto onegaiiiiiii!!!

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  • From ANON - ashira on August 06, 2004
    shikamaru and gaara or itachi!!!!!!
    and no girl please >_
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