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By : phoenixsdark
  • From ANON - Stormraven on June 25, 2005
    Wow! If you look thru your earlier reviews, one really stands out....Atarii said it all for the rest of your devoted readers. Wonderful plot, engaging characterizations, great work on composition. You've definitely got an addicted reader here....can hardly wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Black Hikari on April 11, 2005
    That was cool! Keep up the good work and please, can we have some NejixNaruto if any pairings? Please? Update soon!
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  • From ANON - silver on March 14, 2005
    Oh! i this is really good. i usually don't like jairiya... but in this case, i really do!
    pair shino w/ kiba, shikamaru w/ neij, and sasuke w/ naruto!!!!
    as for thinking about the perv and iruka... well i think ur insane... but then again... all insane ppl are geniouses, especially writers! so go ahead...cause it's so wrong that it's right....

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    would u ever concider pairing up kakashi w/ itachi!! pretty please!!!



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  • From ANON - BloodAndChocolate on March 13, 2005
    Wow...I've never read a fic so exciting as this..^O^ i really don't care what the pairing is(even if itz a threesome, foursome, w/e) but as long as Jiraiya isn't *cough* with any of them, that's fine(he's too old, i'm sorry..) but Sasu/Naru, Neji/Naru, or Neji/Sasu is ok, is Gaara gonna appear? ^_^ he's my fav. character, he's so cool, don't you think, very psychotic too ^o^ i'd marry him if he were real, but alas, he's probably gay ^_^

    -Blood
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on February 27, 2005
    OMG!!! This fic ROCKS!!! It's totally awesome!!! What a great idea!!! Aahhh!!!! ^^;; (Okay, I think I have that out of my system...for now...heh......) Honestly, this is a great idea, and you have written it so well!!! Pleeeeease continue it!!! I reeeeally want to find out what happens!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Thank you so much!!! Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - Blisblop on January 19, 2005
    Exciting.Runaway!Hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - catc10 on December 31, 2004
    You know, this story hasn't updated in a really long time. BUT I THINK ABOUT IT CONSTANTLY!!! I really like the way the story is moving, and actually root for the JiraiyaxIruka pairing possibility. I would really love seeing this continued sometime. Hop to it, okay?
    ME
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  • From ANON - PxW on December 25, 2004
    (review to chapter#1) Actually, I think Jiraiya/Iruka pairing will be very interesting.
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  • From ANON - Ezj on December 18, 2004
    AHHHHH just found it... It's so greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttt!!!!!
    pwease ohhh pwease make more............................... ^-^UUUU
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on November 21, 2004
    Awesome. I knew she wouldn't do that if she had a choice. Keep up the excellent work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - phoenix on October 14, 2004
    AH...but Naruto is not being punished for returning Sasuke. How far into the fic did you read? He's being punished for what he is, because of the fears of the council and the people of the village. A very powerful group wants Naruto for unknown reasons and that scares them...and Naruto can't stop them from taking him. I thought I explained all this at the end of part 2...but maybe I need to be more detailed. As for the others, the come in later. It's only the second part after all and it needs to focus on the people who are doing the running for now. Also, because they are secondary characters, their personalities are not very well formed. Kurenai seems like a mindless hot head the first time she gets into a major fight. Asuma seems pretty useless. I'm working on getting a better grasp of them before writing. There are quite a few flamers around who throw fits like babies if you don't get the characters the way they want (regardless of canon or any other facts) and right now, I have some serious medical stuff I'm going through and don't need the hassle. Asuma does show up around part 4 though and Kurenai around part 7....or earlier if I can make the chapters longer. Sorry if I mispelled names, on a scale of 1 to 10 of pain...I'm in a 15 right now.

    Thank you all for the reviews. I hope to get part 3 up soon. Sorry for the delay.
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  • From ANON - Kentai Hentai (2 lazy to log in) on September 14, 2004
    I really like this story, hope you write more. As for Shino pairings people tend to pair him with Kiba because they're in the same team.
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  • From ANON - bitterchoco20 on September 13, 2004
    Uhm..Jiraiya x Iruka...why not, they both care for Naruto.

    ShikaNaru or ShinoNaru...
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  • From ANON - Shadow-Storm on September 06, 2004
    Lovely, please update soon, i'm just dying to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Lena on September 06, 2004
    Lately, there have been fewer and fewer fics worth my time to comment, but this one is just amazing! I admit, some dialogue could use some work, but I really enjoyed Jiraiya's fiery attitude that is found in the manga itself, the portrayal of Neji as the child he really is, and the intricate plot that is about to show itself. Just the beginning shocked me; I am quivering with excitement to know what else you have in store for this fic! I hope to read more soon~!

    From what I read so far, it seems to pairings will be very... ... ... ... ...strange... ^^;
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