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By : phoenixsdark
  • From ANON - heero on November 11, 2005
    wow!!!!!!!
    please update soon..............................
    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    hey could you make it nejixshikamaru sasuxnaru kakaxiru please......
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on August 15, 2005
    Oooh, I'm liking this a lot, I think a Kakarshi x Iruka pairing wouild be quite nice too, not mention Sasu/Naru(is that one already gonna happn?) I love the story so far it has a great deal of potential and is already quite captivating. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Escagirluk on August 12, 2005
    Update! What happens next - who was watching them, why did Kakashi follow them? Is he gonna get with Iruka - I always thought they'd be a cute couple. Will Gaara be in the fic? Is he the watcher? Is Hinata's nasty dad hurt or dead? Is the watcher Hinata?!
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  • From ANON - Nielenon on August 08, 2005
    wow....this was amazing. good grammar and everything. i love how this is going. i really hope to see more soon. *HUGGLES!* yay for good writing! ^_^ just one thing, wouldn't jiraiya know tsunade well enough that she wouldn't put those seals on naruto and sasuke on purpose, that something was going on? perhaps he knew by shikamaru, but it seemed a little unclear. i dunno, maybe i'm just making a really big fool of myself. so, before i dig myself deeper into this ditch i've dug myself, i'll say matta ne! ^__^ good luck!
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  • From ANON - The Empress on August 08, 2005
    Whoo hoo! Another Chappie! Poor Neji! Must've sucked to have that stupid seal on his head. I'm glad Jaraiya and Kakashi removed it. I wonder who's in the bushes watching them. Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on August 08, 2005
    hmm...if you're wondering who to pair up with Shino, I guess your best bet is Kiba. and that aside, whoa, I can't believe kakashi has joined the group too! this gets more exciting than ever! and do I sense a possible JiraIru pairing? Or am I just an old pervert?! rofl!
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  • From ANON - dilemmalicious on August 08, 2005
    Hey there. Just wanted to drop you a note... Bless you for a new, fresh concept! Your Jiraiya is bloody perfect, a scoundrel with a heart of gold. It's nice to see him portrayed with more than perversion. His hideyhole from the world whilst writing is a clever device. (I've been contemplating writing a fic, and was planning to use the Forest of Death as a place to drown out chakra signatures.) I'm delighted with you freeing Neji, and thought the chakra battle for his body and soul was brilliant. I love it when an author truly makes use of the ninja jutsus and unique skills of the Naruto characters (it seems an unfortunate rarity, sadly), and will be looking forward to further installments! You've a fan in the UK!
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  • From ANON - kkkkkkkkk on August 08, 2005
    NO! Not Ero-Sensei and Iruka!!! Ero-sensei and NEJI!!!!!! ::sqees like the rapid fangirl she is:: They were socute together in this chapter, and you know, Neji does kinda look like a hot chick if you squint juuuuust a little...
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  • From ANON - Leeann on August 08, 2005
    It is very different from the normal Naurto fanfic. I just love it. I am curious to see how it all plays out.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 08, 2005
    i am so loving this. you have got to hurry and update. There is too much to compliment on and besides the few grammar and spelling mistakes its absolutely perfect at least it is to me...anyhoo, keep it up and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Berry on August 08, 2005
    Neji escaped!!! Good job! And Kakashi-sensei will be in the middle of the chaos too! Even better. Your story looks so promising and full of plots, I love it!
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  • From ANON - Stormraven on August 08, 2005
    Woohoo! A new chapter! *bounces around the room like a super-ball* Wow, picked up right from the last chapter and kept true to the story after a long hiatus, good job! Hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on August 07, 2005
    this is a really good fic i'm really enjoying reading it so keep up the great work and update soon
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  • From ANON - Jay on July 30, 2005
    I've only just started reading the various Naruto fanfics, and this one was lovely so far. I do hope that you go back to it one day, I'd like to see how it progresses. Jiraiya/Iruka, though, yikes!
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  • From ANON - The Empress on July 13, 2005
    This story has caught my attention. I'm liking it already. =) I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.^_^ Can you email me when you update, please. ;)
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