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By : phoenixsdark
  • From Carousel on May 09, 2011
    This is a really great story! The plot is interesting and the way you portray the characters is great. I really lol'd at what Gaara did to poor Iruka. Update soon!
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  • From roro237 on April 28, 2011
    Yes it was appreciated:) He might be the captured one but he is far from the prisoner. I love that the boys can to his rescue and the soft humming says he is to ^_^
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  • From AngelTalion on April 28, 2011
    AWWW Gaara has a crush. A crush and he didn't even get to see Naruto. :-( Poor Gaara. I really am loving this story. Very well done and I love the plot very nice!! More please soon!
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  • From moodysavage on April 28, 2011
    I like it...I love it...I want some more of it :)
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  • From LadyLaran on April 28, 2011
    Yay, you updated.

    If you're taking requests, I'd love a Naru/Neji in this. I'm very fond of that pairing honestly. :)

    I was very ecstatic to see you updating this one :D
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  • From on June 16, 2008
    *uncontroable laughter* I did not expect that. I was laughing so hard it hurt!
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  • From ultistarmon on January 08, 2008
    Oh, you have got to write more! I love this story! It's highly believable while still being new! Quite frankly I have a thing for Kaka/Iruka. How is Orochimaru still alive? Pretty please update soon!?!?
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  • From sandraccoon on October 17, 2007
    This is a great story. I really hope to see more of it in the near future. You have all the characters down to a T and your plot is amazing. Can't wait to read more of this fantastic fic.
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  • From nekochannya on February 11, 2007
    That was the funniest thing I've ever read! Pervert!!!! I was laughing so hard!! I love this!! a Kakairuraiya threesome would be very nice... nya! I cant wait to see what's ahead of them... I really want to see what you have planned... really! Two perverted but loyal nin with a prim loyal sensei under their thumb... Go Iruka! Show them who's the master!!!
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  • From on February 10, 2007
    I've never seen this before. I absolutely love it. Just read all five chapters in a row. I have to say I'm going to hold out for Sasuke and Naruto as a pairing because I'm old school like that, but I think I might be willing to continue to read this even if you didn't. (That doesn't mean I don't really, really, really want my boys to get together. OTP and all that nonsense.) Anywho. I'm super excited about this fic, and Iruka is just awesome. I think you've hit him spot on. Strong but not too strong, temperamental, rebellious, smart, and well-loved by all parties XD

    I am very nervous and intrigued to find out who is hiding in the bushes. Also, has Jiraiya finished removing all the curses from Naruto and Sasuke (or enough that they could've been out in the woods and return to beat on Jiraiya and Kakashi)? Or is Naruto still bedridden and it was only Sasuke, Neji, and Shikamaru that beat on the two perverts? Some clarification on this point would be appreciated.

    With that i wish you many days of happy writing.


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  • From tovah on February 10, 2007
    I hope this ends up kakashi/iruka I just can't help myself. I think this is a good story and I plan on following it.
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  • From Draconayzia on February 10, 2007
    ROFLMAO!!! Oh man that was histerical! That'll learn 'em! *snickerfit* I am so glad you updated this story. Definately need more of it. Please update again soon!
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  • From quinko17 on February 09, 2007
    Having Iruka be the Wendy to this wonderful tribe of Lost Boys is truly a wonderful idea to bring to fruition. Although picturing Jiraiya as a mischevious flying Peter Pan is quite scary.

    I also love that you set Neji free. Pretty baby deserves cuddles all around. Wink.

    I really have no suggestions other than...

    Good God, KEEP WRITING!!! I can't wait for the next installments.

    Actually, I do have one suggestion (which you've probably heard previously like a nonstop mantra) ... THREESOME!!!!
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  • From ANON - silverluna on July 17, 2006
    i really hope you'll update this story. it was interesting
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  • From ANON - slimcascade on January 07, 2006
    wow... what an original plot! good idea. keep up the good work!
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