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Reviews for Mountain

By : Sephirajo
  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on July 29, 2004
    first of I have to say that I love DS's review, LMAO!!!!! Secondly, this is the third time I am trying to post a review for chapter 2, so this may be the reason you did not get a large responce on it, we are all a bunch of lazy asses! So if only for me and DS, youE toE to continue this story! hehe, well here is my review:
    LOV LOVE this story!!!! I want to read more! Sakura is regretting being with Kakashi and is pouring her out to Sasuke? NOOOOOOOOOOOO Kaka/Saku all the way!!! hehe. I can't wait to see what happens next, I hope Sasuke tells Sakura to go be with Kakashi, or she realizes that it was not peer pressure that made her choose to be with Kakashi, and she is just confused, and she wants to be with him. Sigh poor Kakashi. I'll comfort him. hehe.
    Later!
    Dragonflyelj

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  • From ANON - Sokyuu on July 14, 2004
    grrr aff.net doesn't seem to likeme tonight, it cut off my first review *smacks it with a whiffle bat full fo sand* anyway excellent as always Jo and I think the next chapter should be something like "the aftermath"
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  • From ANON - Sokyuu on July 14, 2004
    as always, too lazy to log in... what? why are you all looking at me like that? ^^ >>
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on July 13, 2004
    A very hot lemon. Will Sakura move on now from Sasuke? Will she fall for Kakashi? Will he fall for her? Or will she find someone else ? A very good read. and a wondereful narative.

    cdk
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  • From tealeaf on July 10, 2004
    *melts*

    So good *-* I...I just can't formulate better words right now. So good...I hope for more!
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  • From WickedInnuendo on July 10, 2004
    That was delisciously smutty and well written! Thank you for restoring my faith in quality hentai fiction. ^^ I do hope you continue this piece!

    spork, spork!
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  • From ANON - kun0ichi*SaKuRa028 on July 10, 2004
    Hey, great job!!! Yesterday I only looked at this and i manage to read some of those erotic scenes and it makes me hot!!! In AFF.NET, this is the best Kaka/Saku Lem0n so FAR!! Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Esorlat on July 10, 2004
    Wow, absolutewesowesome. I do like this pairing, but in the past there were too many botched and badly written stories with this pairing. I'm glad someone talented is finally stepping up to bat. I look forward to how these two will grow as their relationship changes. Again, I really luved this first chap. Keep up the good work (or I'll rip out all my hair and suicide lol jk).
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  • From ANON - green clover on July 09, 2004
    this was sooooooooo good! you have a lot of talent. please continue this. waiting impatiently for the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on July 09, 2004
    OMG! I must say that is the best Kakashi/Sakura lemon I have ever read! Wow, I need a cold shower after that one! hehe.

    There is entirely too few het fic's in this site's Naruto section, I am glad you did one of my fav pairings. You know, my best friend just married a man 19 years older than her in earlne, ne, and they have a 14 month old son, and I see nothing wrong with it at all. Although it is notommoommon thing, and less common now than say 100 years ago, it still happens, you can't help who you fall in love with, and as long as both parties are mature, more power to them.

    So anyway, I really liked the fic a lot, your use of spelling, grammar and punctuation seemed good. (I did not pay attention to if you kep in in the same tense or not, I was too caught up in the steamy lemon, mwahahahaha!)

    I will be watching for further updates on this fic!

    Fly

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  • From ANON - Saori-Hime on July 09, 2004
    This is the first Kakashi/Sakura fic I've read! And I was absolutely blown away. The way mad made this made me giggle at the beginning, fret in the middle, and really like it at the end! I swear I was going as insane as Kakashi, with the whole 'yes' 'no' 'yes' 'no' thing going on! Sakura's characterization seemed to grow, and I'm really glad you had Ino talk some sense into her at the beginning, because otherwise Sakura would have been way ou cha character! Hehe you made me picture Chobits with Sakura wearing that big shirt and Kakashi trying not to look even though his eyes were glued to the flesh!! Mwaha ^___^ awesome story! Kyah! I loved it! Please write MORE because your writing is as amazing as this story! *claps and goes take care of nosebleed*
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  • From ANON - Eris on July 09, 2004
    Wow, great story. You even had me blushing and laughing at all the bold and embarrassing things Sakura did. And its great that you didn't make Kakashi take her right away. Its only right that he put up a fight and thought of all the consequences it might bring. Too bad there aren't more Kaka/Saku stories out there. It'd be awesome if you continued this into a multi chapter story. Ja ne for now :D
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  • From ANON - slayerette0 on July 09, 2004
    Whoa, that was very good. AND it wasn't SasuNaru (I'm getting more than tired of those). The characterization was right on, detail, prose, all of it was top notch. I definitley think you should continue it. Another chapter of the consequences of what happened could be very interesting. Lemons hardly ever have consequences, and this one would make for some excellant drama.
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  • From ANON - DigitalSiren on July 09, 2004
    ^^ Ahh! Yay! This was really VERY good. I know I already commented in the LJ community, but I just wanted to review again! It was very tastefully written, as already mentioned, and characterization was awesome. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - nia-sama on July 09, 2004
    WOW that was intense!!!!! I was so impressed, and it was very tastfully written as well. nice job... please continue.. I am wandering what happens next..
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