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By : Sephirajo
  • From ANON - namouri on September 04, 2005
    hmmm, well. this is what i think wou;d be a good idea to happen. though its only a suggestion. after sakura tells sasuke everything, he forgives her, since he put her through so much pain, and that kinda thing. but moresasuke like. but sakura doesn't thin kshes good enough for him anymore. so sasuke is the one now pursueing her. and kakashi is still guilty over what he did,. but since him and sakura are so distrught, they scome to temptation again, to try and mske the pain go away. maybe in the end, kakashi and sasuke fight or something. or one backs down, depending if kakashi and sakura develope feelings for each other, or just plain use eahc other.
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  • From ANON - Cim on September 03, 2005
    I was almost choking on air when I found out you updated. And then it was an authors note -_-.... but at least I know that you still care ^^ As for helping you jump start it...er...sorry I leave my own fics to rot let alone be able to help people with their stories. Anyways, congratulations ^^ I hope your wedding goes off without a hitch and you'll be uber happy.
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  • From ANON - blueinferno on September 03, 2005
    aww good luck for your wedding! how nice, your lucky lol...and i do love this fic, it gripped me from the start! ;)
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  • From ANON - Setsuna on September 02, 2005
    OH GODDDDDDDDD! WRITE MOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!! OK: so me and my friend made a deal to write a love story fic about the other person and their fave male chara from naruto.... (I have to write one about my friend and Kabuto... she gets the wonderful task of writing about me and Kakashi!) I've been dying to read some M/F action with Kakashi involved--not that I didn't find ones before but those weren't nearly as artfully done as yours! SO I got like 4 chapters of her story sent to her already... and she's been slacking and only did two in the same time I did five ... and this has been doing on over like 6 months! I've been so disappointed and had pent up lusty-wanton-cravings for M/F kakashiness... not that M/M kakashiness isn't great--coz it is but... a girl's got to have something more close to reality to fantisize about! I'll never be in on a hot yaoi threesome-- a random chick in on hot yaoiness?--that just doesn't happen... but being cradled in big strong manly arms like kakashi's described in your story....*dreamy sigh* awwwh see it's easier for me to just put myself in as Sakura then an uke Iruka or something! I had a blast reading it (look how much I already typed!! O.o;;) whee... I'd cry if you didn't continue? For this perverted stranger's sake? @.@ *clings ankle* I'LL DO ANYTHINGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!! .................. *suggestive wink?* XD!!
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  • From ANON - Kira-chan on August 17, 2005
    Ahh! This is so good! I can't wait to read more. And I love the second chapter's ending. Ahh, the drama. Ahh the cliffhanger-ish-ness. Ahh what to do for love?

    Well, keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - random on June 29, 2005
    You really should continue this. Even if there aren't as many people reviewing this as you'd like, it shouldn't matter. You should be writing because you love to do it. I try my best to get this message to people, and I hope it helps you out. I look forward to a new chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - cc on June 11, 2005
    i hope u update! i really like this pairing and i can't wait to see what happens between sakura and kakashi!
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  • From ANON - carol on June 01, 2005
    I thought it was really good! I do hope you continue this... I thought the plot was good and you write better than most authors I know. I really enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - dark_Angel on May 02, 2005
    wa....that was awesome....really want to see wht happens next, update soon!!
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  • From ANON - ... on April 18, 2005
    You..need...to...ADD!!!! Simply put ^_^
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  • From ANON - blisblop on April 17, 2005
    I am surprised you did not get a good responce to this,very.I was moved by how well you brought them together.Naruto's braless remark,her riding Kakashi's mind while he carried her to his place.Hetro sex is hard for me to read because the girls parts are so unlikely,unsensual ect.This was not your problem the reverse in fact I knew exactly how ,why she felt what she did and was carried along with her.Kakashi was exteremlywell drawn and if I did not like him before I do now.The dream of Sasuke took the tone and complicated things in a clever way.Even so to have what happened at the end of Chap 2,well,it was a very interesting shock.I can't wait to se how you handle this.I'm sure it will be unique and sensual if bitter-sweet.Too much to ask for a three some?i guess that can not be made believeable... Anyway Thank You for your Wickedsweet work.
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  • From ANON - iceygaze on April 04, 2005
    i think i quite love this story, probably cos i love the kaka-saku pairing, but also cos it's really really excting (not only for the sex scenes) and i'd like to read the following chap.
    anyway, given that, i'm not english mothertongue and i don't know the right way to thank you for this beautiful work, i can say only
    thank you
    see you
    iceygaze
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  • From ANON - Angela on March 28, 2005
    Good story wonderful ending though. i still wish it didn't happen though. ^__________^

    Take care
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  • From ANON - Nekio-chan on March 25, 2005
    Eh, you gotta continue. That's a horrible cliff hanger. I need to know what happens!!!!
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  • From ANON - lasaire on March 12, 2005
    Sakura's about-face seems awful sudden -- during the day and the following night with Kakashi, she had plenty of chances to reconsider if it wasn't something she truly wanted. I can't help but think she's confused in the aftermath, rather than truly regretting it.

    I really liked this piece -- I do hope you continue it.
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