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By : Sephirajo

From ANON - pance009 on July 25, 2009
I think it makes a better oneshot
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From ANON - Anon on December 02, 2006
Ah! Write more! You write the best bj scenes that I've encountered so far for het fics on this site!
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From ANON - rabidbutterfly on February 09, 2006
aww....
i like it before Sakura went all emo and decided she loved sasuke when sex with kakashi is SOOO much better!!!!!!
regardless it is still fabulous!! you should continue
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From on December 19, 2005
omg..... kakasaku... best pairing ever.... despite the age diff........ n the whole teacher-student thing........... still though...... lovin it!!!!!!!! plz update!!!!!!
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From ANON - Misheru on December 13, 2005
I am absolutely in love with this story. I must have reread it at least four times and still it's still incredible. Please continue writing it!
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From on November 30, 2005
For starters, I already like the idea of Sakura and Kakashi. Sasuke for me, is a grand A.

The ending on chapter two--she cried on Sasuke's shoulder---a sign of momentary weakness. She would go out and date Sasuke for awhile, but then later figured out, that she is inlove with Kakashi. First time's lasts forever. And for agirl, it means everything, well except maybe not, if you're a ho.

So I would like you to write something along the way of---Kakashi pursuing Sakura and winning her affection. Of course, for Kakashi it started out as lust, but he later figure out that he wants her--for keeps. He is getting old, you know. And as for her, well, she would have to deal and learn how to choose her mate wisely. She's smart, she'll figure it out. Sasuke, on the other hand, would learn the hard way, that looks or beauty won't keep a girl devoted to you. He doesn't give much a hint that he cares for her in the past. And the past *always* comes back to bite you in the ass if you're not too careful enough.

So, there you go! Type away!

~DG
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From ANON - WTF? on November 28, 2005
what happens to kakashi and sakura? i got to know! please update if you can... please? hehe... i'm so pressuring... sorrie.
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From ANON - Uuuoki on November 28, 2005
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Yup. That's all I have to say. CONTINUE!
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From ANON - Lalily on November 28, 2005
Ok, this update was slightly disappointing... tohugh I'm still anxiously hoping you'd continue! I really see such potiential for a on going fic with lots of chapter. You're writing style rocks and I find Kakashi and Sakura's relationship traci, with Sasuke's return and all. Please... continue owuld you? And if you can, make Kakashi and Sakura together.

Yeah, I like this couple so much... oh the shame that Kaka/Iru overrules them. Damn that couple... grr...

Anyways... yeah. You're story rocks, and I enjoyed reading it. I hope you continue with another chapter. I can't wait to see oyur return... chao!

(Oh and yes... good luck with your wedding, belated wedding congrats? XD)
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From ANON - Atora on November 26, 2005
This is a really good story! You should keep writing!! (That whole Sasuke-cliffie caught me off-guard, and I need to read more!!!)
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From ANON - Jir0ya on November 17, 2005
Oh great work. This so far is one of the best fanfiction I've seen. Excellent work, you have great talent!
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From ANON - bibi_fly on November 17, 2005
I love your story! Update soon as you can please. Oh yeah, am i too late? Well if I am... good luck on your wedding! Am I late in saying this?... hmm...
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From ANON - Kra on November 17, 2005
Oh update please.... though I find Kakashi and Sakura's pairing alright, I really see such a potiential story for this 2 shots. Continue? I can really see that it'll be good. Oh yes, did I mention I really like your story! No pressure intended.
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From ANON - Anon on September 29, 2005
I don't know if you're interested at all, but a third ending to the story (assuming the two routes you thought you could take the story were 1) Sasuke takes Sakura back and Kakashi ends up sad and lonely, and 2) Sakura realises Sasuke isn't what she remembered, or even that he's exactly what she remembered) is to have all three of them end up together. It would be hard to write in a non-PWP way though.
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From ANON - xxxx on September 18, 2005
for posting chapter three like that, DIE! just DIE!

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