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Reviews for As If

By : yamimura
  • From ANON - dfsads on July 07, 2014
    You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

    CASE ONE -
    Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

    CASE TWO -
    Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

    CASE THREE -
    Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

    Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

    We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

    NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

    1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

    5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

    15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
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  • From ANON - Taisho on August 20, 2006
    I really liked this story it was cute! I just have one question, who's the mothers of the two boys? And can you ranslate what Sasuke's son asked?
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  • From ANON - cutefelix on March 17, 2005
    hi...i've just finished read your story.i've always skimming all 37 pages of these naruto fanfics...searching for sasunaru (i'm a big fan of sasunaru..mind you) or any other stories that seems to be interesting(like ucihacest).i have come across your story several times but didn't feel to read it.well b'coz you wrote that they both have their own sons and even you wrote there is sasunaru ..i thought it's just some angst between them..so i didn't read it coz i will be sad if the story is not about them being together...but GUESS WHAT!!..i'm wrong.today i feel to only read one shot stories and come across o your story again and thought...just give it a try...and i LOVE it!! their sons are so cute..and i love the idea of them being a single father and still having relationship..it's sweet...even i don't like the idea of having women between them...i still want to ask..i guess naruki's mother is hinata..because he have blank eyes but who is kousuke's mother?? and i don't understand the japanese sentence when kousuke ask his father??what is the direct meaning eventhough i can guess what he's talking about....i hope you don't mind to answer my question..
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  • From ANON - Felixia on December 07, 2004
    MORE!!!! Please!! This fic is awesome! Second generation yada yada... And that fluffy scene with Naruto&Sasuke! X3'''' I want more! I NEED mode! Please write something up soon!
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  • From ANON - Valkyrie Class (Red) Fury Mai on August 25, 2004
    Yes! i agree with asds!!!!! but , it would be more appropriate to post this on FF.Net , not AFF. but , jesus christ! do you people have to review so harshly?!?!?! You could ATELEAST be a little, i REPEAT , a little nicer! yeesh.
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  • From ANON - lalala on July 31, 2004
    Fantastic. however, this is adult fanfiction.net so it really shouldn't be here. But that could be remedied by a lemon sequel. How about when the boys are older? *looks hopeful*
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  • From pffernuse19 on July 02, 2004
    dont have to be so harsh, some pg's are good, but yes please dont post pg's here there is a reason y they only have two rating options here (r and NC-17) so i suggest you get with the program and spice it up or post it on Fanfiction.net, so that you wont get beat down so bad.
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  • From ANON - Archeeka on June 29, 2004
    Why the fuck did you post this here? It's PG, although the rating says R, and this website ir far fanfictions that are APPROPRIATELY rated R or NC-17. Either you are confused, or just stupid. This is ADULTFANFICTION.NET. Let me spell this out for you. A.D.U.L.T. F.A.N.F.I.C.T.I.O.N. Take this thing off and post it on Fanfiction.net or something, you idiot. And don't do this again--it just upsets the people who come and are searching for some hot smutty action and then come upon someone who was stupid enough to post a PG rated fanfiction here. Don't even GIVE me the fucking excuse that "it's yaoi! It's adult!", because that's bullshit. I'm giving you one star.
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  • From ANON - Darth on June 29, 2004
    This fic has no place here. If you're going to rate things PG, there are plenty of other fanfiction sites to poat them at. This site isn't called "AdultFanfiction.net" for nothing.
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  • From ANON - asds on June 28, 2004
    BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




    Now please a lemon! I wonder how would Sasuke EXPLAIN THIS to his son!HAha!!!If you decide to conyinue this story i really would love ya if Kosuke would startr to make movesNaruNaruki in school...omg Iruka sensei reactions would be preiceless
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  • From ANON - hitomi on June 27, 2004
    oh wow, that was really cute!!!!! very much liked. squees with joy. ^_^
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