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By : purrfectly679

From FrozenAngels on February 17, 2007
this is so fucking sad.i have never cried so much in my life,never.i am practicly emotionless and i dont know when was the last time i cried.not even for my parents,or even when my sis ran away and we didnt know where she was. i read your story in one go and i have been crying for five hours straight. my parents came in and when they saw me crying they called my doc to see if was ok.when he finally left i continued reading and i cried some more.this story is very beutiful you wrotte the characters personalities so well they werent even out of character. I just wanna tell you something:if they dont have a happy ending i will personally find out were you live and tottally kill you in a slow painful death. hope they have a happy ending because they tottally deserve it.

Love-Tsukiyomi
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From ANON - Sophade on November 26, 2006
Oh my god...
You van't even imagine how sad what you wrote is.
I really cryed in front of my screen, and I'm still crying, it's the moment Naruto said "don't...leave...me..." that I craqued and couldn't hold back the tears...
please tell me it isn't finished! All I want to see is a happy ending! I want to see Sasuke and Naruto happy!
At the moment just before it says that Sasuke's running away from the place, I almost imagined Him being the bastard he is, always confident and all, and that he had been there, just behind Naruto when the blonde says that he loves him too... Really you broke my heart too! To tell you the truth, as soon as I'm finished with this message, I'll search for a fiction where I can see them together and happy, it's the only way to stop my tears...
Your fiction is really good I don't know how you did that, how you made all those emotions affect me, and how you made a crying Sasuke normal he wasn't even OOC, he's deeply in love with Naruto and Naruto did all he could to break his heart... He is even really strong to just cry like this, any normal person would have faint or would have screamed and run ... I would...

I'm completely depressed, how could you do this to me?

Please, I leave you my E-mail, I would like you to answer me, even if it spoils me or something I don't care I just need to know : is this the end? are they really going to end like this? : Sasuke arried with Sakura, not even loving her, and Naruto alone with Hinata by his side maybe but loving Sasuke, not her, Sasuke thinking that Naruto is happy, with her... and all
say, why did you let Sasuke think Naruto went out with her? it's so harsh for his heart and soul!!
*wipe tears* please answer me, I really need to know or I'll be depressed for the rest of the month at least, or even the year!

thank you, great writer,
Sophade, sophrite@hotmail.com, Belgium.
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From ANON - Kiba on November 24, 2006
Hi!
I think your fic is great! demo, the're too many mistakes on words.
should I expect you to continue it?
Tnen could you please addd me in list, my email - orcinusorca@list.ru

You know thay you are quite cruel person, to make Sasuke and Naruto suffer so much, besides it turnes up to be like a soap movie. to tell you truth i overslept for my job early morning, i got so engrossed into love scene between the two. thank you for making it passionate, not everyone could last it so long:)
I've encountered that prolonged love scene before only in one fic - don't rememver its name involving Athrun/Kira

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From ANON - Len on February 10, 2006
Well, to say the least, Sasuke's confession almost made my heart throb in pain. xD Chapter 15 really almost made me cry. I would've cried if I wasn't too tired to really take in the emotions that your story gives off. ^_^ I was even listening to a rather serene, yet melancholy piano pieces from FFX-2. It's called Wind Crest ~ The Three Tails // Piano Collections. You might know it, have it, but anyway, I thought it fitted well with the story. If it were animated, it would've been nice. ^_^ Please update soon. I'm dying to know if Sasuke is willing to marry Sakura... on behalf of Naruto's sake, or confront to Naruto once more or something.
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From ANON - Ren on February 08, 2006
First off, to let you know, this fic made me cry, yes, even after my 3rd time reading it over months after the 2nd time. I really adore this fic, and how it's so wonderfully written. Have you ever thought about writing a book? Haha ^^;; Well, my brain isn't really forming coherent thoughts right now, but..just a question... I'm not trying to be a pushy reader who always says "HEY YOU, UPDATE NOW OR I'LL ____", but I was wondering why there had been no updates/new chapters for a while? Well, I hope you continue this fic, I can't wait to see what happens between Naruto and Sasuke. :)
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From ANON - cibiboy on January 19, 2006
my mouth is like hung over that is so great im new to AFF so i was able to read you story non stop since ch 1 i really dont want saku to be sad but i really wish it will be naruto and sas in the end mybe ino will tell saku the truth about sas and that will leave room for nar+sas its just a really great story update soon.
P.S you lil mini story is so funny keep it up!!!!!!
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From ANON - annabellemanix on January 17, 2006
::bawling eyes out:: that was SOOOOSOOOO sad!!!! poor sasuke-kun!!! i hope naru-chan comes around soon and tells him before sasuke and sakura get married! ;_; also, could you put me on your mailing list? and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
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From godofcontradiction on January 03, 2006
I've read your fic like four times already, in different places (i think the last one was in your livejournal... not sure) and imagine my surprise and delight when i stumbled upon it here! I know for a certain that this is finished... why havent you posted the rest yet??? Please do, so all the other people will know of Sasuke and Naruto's love!! (giggles) Your fic is one of the very very few that is very very dear to my heart. Share the love!!! ^_^
Your fic made me cry really really bad, but in a good way. (pats you in the back) If i could go there and give you a BIIIIIGGG hugg for writing this- i would.grin.
but i think i'd settle for a review... so yeah... I think i'll go read this one more time! I never get tired of it!! ^_^
Cheers.
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From on December 17, 2005
Hey! I loved your story!!! It made me cry! Loved it! Please update soon! Oh and I would like to join the mailing list please!
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From ANON - .... on December 10, 2005
I really love your story!.. i really do.. this story for me is one of the best!
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From ANON - Akire on November 30, 2005
This is one of the best stories I have ever read in my entire life! And...I mean that with all sincerity. I feel so so so sorry for Sasuke, so so so sorry for Naruto, and very sorry for Sakura. This fanfiction carries a lot of emotion, even if it's a bit angsty at first. ;D I love this fanfiction and you, as the author of it, to bits, so don't ever think about giving this one up, kay? ^__^ I hope they all find happiness in the end. :)

~Akire
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From MLL on October 16, 2005
I just want to say that this is one of THE best stories I have read out there of Sasuke and Naruto. Seriously. I, myself love to read angsty stories as well as write them of Sasuke and Naruto and this is a truly good story with concepts that I just love. Certainly, this fic deserves much much more reviews. :)
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From ANON - Kori Nibiki on September 18, 2005
I didn't cry, but my heart is wrenching in pain. Please don't tell me that is the last chapter.
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From ANON - Nanami-chan (lazy ass wont sign in...) on June 27, 2005
(The last chapter amost made me cry not quiet but close!)
(Its ironic the bad memorys came from a lake... thats kinda what happened in my fanfic -swears she hadnt read this when she wrote that-)
Its a lovely story... I even gave the link to some people... Poor Sasuke... and Naru... this fic is reminding me of myself... Naru giving up his happiness for others... Sasuke loveing someone who wont love him back (Course luck for him .. even tho Naru has yet to say it... he does love him... unlike in my case ^_^) Its kinda creepy actually...

Sakura isnt going to be really stupid and not notice whats going on right? I hate when she doesnt notice... -hugs sakura- dont worry I will be here for you -snuggles Sakura- Sasuke and Naru can have a relationship and I will steal Sakura ^_^

Your story is very well written, I love the length of your chapters... (couse ive been reading it for the last 3 days, keeping in mind im not always at the computer or im talkign to people ect. ect.)

I want to be added to the mailing list!!!
Monkeystalk2me69@netscape.net
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From ANON - NotTelling on June 06, 2005
Maybe I'm just in a depressed mood, but I sure as hell cried. Of course, it didn't really hit me until I realized that there was no button to go to the next chapter, as that was the last one posted. This is such a GREAT story. You keep all the characters with in character (yes, there is some OOC but it is enjoyable and not at all unreasonable... I dono if I would even call it OOC more or less characters just being in different situations). Your plot development is fantastic - I don't think I've ever seen it paralled in a non-(officially)published work. But the angst is killing me! You gotta keep posting! Please! I beg of you, on one knee..... with chocolate pocky..... or strawberry.... or anything else that you could ask for! You just got to get them together. (And by the way - on a more perverse note - very well done lemon.) Great story. Write more.
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