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Reviews for Servitude

By : Aleya
  • From ANON - Cookie6 on July 19, 2004
    I love you so much! Every chapter that you write makes me want to read more. How do you do it? I hope that Neji and Hinata don't get in too much trouble for their play time activity. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Neji Lover on July 19, 2004
    That was short, but great. Is Hiashi going to make Hanabi and Neji marry earlier because of what he saw Hinata and Neji doing? I hope that that wont happen. Update!
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  • From ANON - MarbelGirl on July 19, 2004
    It's odd that Hinata's father just watched them having fun. I wonder what Neji was going to say. Does he think that they wont be together? Man, I hope that they end up together. Great fic!
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on July 17, 2004
    What kinda father is he? He should've turned on the hose and gave them a good cooling off!
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  • From ANON - yume on July 02, 2004
    Your the reason why I started reading this incest pairing. I don't know I'm always chec the the site to know if this is already updated. I can't stop reading this, maybe because of the pairing, some lemon and the deep story you tried to comliment in it. Just update soon... i guess..
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on June 28, 2004
    *smacks forehead* These kids, geezzzzz...they forgot they were in an open space and her dad saw, damn it. Suspenful indeed. I liked the fact that Hinata is actually responding and being forward with Neji, I always joke that it is the quiet ones that pull the best surprises. But damn it, I hope they are allowed to stay together. ARghhhh. This is a good cliffhanger, hopefully there will be another chapter soon!

    Keep it up, you doindoing a good job.
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on June 28, 2004
    Dear GOD! That was an awesome chapter! I hope you write more soon. This is getting good. Update soon. Check out my fiction if you get the chance it's called Rose of Uchiha. My pen name is HisBeautiful. Thanks!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - MarbelGirl on June 28, 2004
    Hinata is finally going to do something for Neji. I thought this day would never happen. The next chapter proves to be very interesting. Great job on this fic.
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  • From ANON - Milky Way on June 28, 2004
    You said that Hiashi say a body. I hope it is Naruto taking care of "himself". That would be funny. Continue and I'll love you forever!
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  • From ANON - Melissa Kang on June 28, 2004
    Is Hiashi going to make Neji and Hanabi marry sooner then expected because of what he saw? I hope not. Neji seems to like Hinata's breast doesn't he? Those two are so cute!
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  • From ANON - Neji Lover on June 28, 2004
    Naruto sure forgot about his affen ton towards Hinata real quick, not that I'm complaining. Now Neji has the go ahead to be with Hinata. Great Neji/Hinata scene. It was unbelieveable. Continue as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Angie on June 28, 2004
    You update! I waited so long, but I guess it is worth the wait if you keep on writing such terrific fics. UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Cookie6 on June 28, 2004
    Neji must be happy now because of the fact that Hinata and him were able to do a few erotic things together. I hope that her dad will make them get married or something. Then those two will finally be able to be together. Please write more real quick.
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  • From ANON - savyx on June 16, 2004
    You have to continue this! I mean it. You're the reason why I started to like NejiHina fics and I hope you'll update soon!
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  • From ANON - LadyDragon on June 14, 2004
    (too lazy to log in)

    You have a very nice story going here but I think you should bother to learn the character's names and personalities better before attempting to portray them. Shino is hardly one to just burst out laughing even in such suprise. And who the hell is Akino? There is no character in Naruto thus far by that name. However Hinata's teammate whom you were refering to is named Inuzuka Kiba. Kiba, not Akino. At least you got the dog's name right as well as their Jounin's as well.

    Your story would be really great, however I suggest going back and actually reading (or watching) the series first and then return to this fanfic when you can portray and wirte the characters believably.
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