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Reviews for Most Beautiful Sight

By : Aleya
  • From ANON - :( on August 13, 2006
    bouhouhouhou this fic is death.

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  • From ANON - LCES on January 16, 2006
    THIS STORY KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!! PLEase... UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - drum288 on November 23, 2005
    Love this story. Great job! Keep it going! or else... ;)
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  • From ANON - Vensert on November 22, 2005
    I'm enjoying this story a lot! Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - padoopadoop on November 18, 2005
    This is a very interesting story - quite enjoyable! I hope you will update soon as I can't wait to see the reactions when the Leaf shinobi see Hinata and Hinata's reaction when she remembers everything! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Aleya on October 05, 2005
    Oi Vey! YEah sorry about the holes in the plot. I know they're there... but i kinda wanna finish up the story cuz my goal from then changed from my goals now. If i spend time fixing them all (And i know excatly how i plan on fixing them up...) The story will never get done. So please hang tight... the hard part was keeping Ayumi at the side... not exactly the center which is the flaw in most OC fics... SO PLEASE JUST LET ME FINISH IT... as for the whole "Ayumi with no confidence" That will be explained by the end. TRUST ME i've mapped it out!
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  • From ANON - Vensert on October 04, 2005
    I like your ideas and the relationship between Ayumi and Hinata (it's amusing to see them acting with a hint of boy-crazyness), but you leave some holes when you write. For example, in chapter three you wrote that Tsunade had to see Neji in the hospital because he had overused his eyes, yet when Naruto went for breakfast, Neji was there and his eyes were okay. Also, I don't understand why did Ayumi and Hinata remove their blindfolds when they attacked Shika and Chouji. What was the point of it? Even wearing them, they were obviously superior. Finally, I don't get how can Ayumi lack self-confidence when she was the one to teach Hinata her new ways.
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  • From ANON - mera on August 24, 2005
    oooo nice one here ill check back
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  • From ANON - poo on you on August 24, 2005
    i like it nice job there
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  • From ANON - witchfyre on August 24, 2005
    Ooooh i like how this is goin, i hope Naruto can get a second chance with Hinata, they deserve eachother and a bit o' happiness
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  • From ANON - Biyabo on August 17, 2005
    This is a great fic! I love NaruHina in general but I've never seen one where Hinata can actually be turned into a normal girl (without the shyness etc).
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  • From ANON - sorry dont have one on November 11, 2004
    More please!
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  • From ANON - Cookie6 on May 25, 2004
    Great story. I wonder hoji aji and Hanabi will play a part in this story concerning Naruto and Hinata. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on May 24, 2004
    looks like a good beginning. I will watch for updates.
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