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Reviews for Most Beautiful Sight

By : Aleya
  • From Silent Pluto on April 29, 2009
    dum dum daaaaa!
    whoohoo talk about ur cliffhangers!!!
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  • From Calcifer on April 20, 2009
    This story is really interesting. A lot of focus on OC's, but I like the plot anyway.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From OrexisGrimm on April 19, 2009
    well I've read both this and 8 ways to hell up to date. I'm extremely interested to see how both will turn out, But this one more I think. I've really gotten into the story and wonder exactly whats gonna happen. I mean I have an idea but I want to see more lol in any case damn good work, I'll be rating both of them here in a second, 5/5 for both.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2009
    If you write it. They will read it! Then they will like it. Love it, and want more of it!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2009
    Most wounderful story of the pair.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2009
    This ones a real keeper. Don't stop writting on it. The story of the year!!!!
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  • From Nameramthgin on August 27, 2007
    WOOHOO! I am so glad you updated again. I have been reading this story for a long time and I was worried that you had let it die. I am glad that you are going to continue it. Please update soon!
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  • From Dynamo on July 20, 2007
    Realy good! i hope you continue^^ i like the concept of a new hidden village
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  • From Platinumsabr on May 16, 2007
    First off, though it may be an interesting idea, I can't get over how badly the punctuation is. I don't like writing flames so consider this constructive criticsm that you may want to use for at least the first couple of chapters. I couldn't even bring myself to read the other chapters because I was so confused at what kind of emotion you were trying to put into the character's sentences because nearly everything ended with a question mark. That's just not natural, or good grammar. I'm sorry if I'm sounding harsh and I'll check out the later chapters just to be sure of my statements but I think you should really take the time to change that in the first few chapters. It simply looks really bad. Other than that I think you're a good writer and this idea is pretty cool. I'll admit though, mostly I just like the idea of the Hyuuga clan being all but wiped out, LOL. Sorry, that was a bit morbid. Oh well, I hope you take my critiscms to heart and don't think I'm just trying to be mean.
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  • From Aleya on May 16, 2007
    Lol... yeah i'm reviewing my own fic... -_- Its funny reading this story through and how my ideas changed as well as my writing style it seems... but as with most of my works its either love it or hate it.... *shrugs* I'm trying to give it a proper pl ot though now... and to those who are kind enough to properly give constructive criticism ARIGATO!!! I'm just glad people out there like the story enough to stick with it! Be patient, be kind, and enjoy!
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  • From Nameramthgin on May 14, 2007
    OMG. finally!. I have been wondering if you had givin up on this story. I am very glad that you chose not to and good job. Please update soon ! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2007
    Interesting fic. The storyline is a bit sketchy. There isn't much character development either but the originality of the fic keeps me tacked to it. Something that had me confused were the dialogues. I couldn't tell who was talking when you had Hinata, Liz, and Ayumi talking. I was so confused that I decided to skip it. I'll be honest though, the fic has great potential. Just keep up the hard work and I'm sure that it will turn out to be a very nice fic if you keep at it.

    Farezzz
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  • From lpsn1 on January 30, 2007
    love this story. keep it coming!
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on January 30, 2007
    Nice chapter but I hope you keep on with the story it has a great plot to it but why would kids play with fire by a mansion... That is where the Hyuuga's lived and I would of thought there would be more than 1 group of shinobi from the village Hinata is at and hope Hinata comes back and sees everyone...Will Naruto and Hinata be a pair in this story
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  • From ANON - Josh on August 18, 2006
    So Hinata saves Konohomaru and falls off a cliff and everyone thinks shes dead. Then we find out she is in a village of Sight but they cover there eyes when battle and train so they use there chakra to see everything. I would like to know more of this story cuz it is very good and sparks up my curiosity of the story you have written for Hinata and Naruto,Neji and TenTen too this will be good to read hope you update e-mail when you do plus I have a few questions to ask
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