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Reviews for Hindsight's 20/20

By : tealeaf
  • From ANON - silveroses on July 14, 2004
    Continue the story its nice to be re-written! I personally enjoyed your story! You plot is cute and different, so in a way i'm sayin. co. continue the story... =P
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  • From ANON - Kataki Nuro on July 14, 2004
    I am totally for the Sakura-centric version. You've made her a much more interesting character than she is in the manga anime, given her a stronger will and personality (while still, with miraculous skill, keeping her in-character), and it fascinates me. I like the traditional. official sakura from the manga/anime, but she really is rather weak there, physically and emotionally, it seems, and she doesn't seem to be a person in her own right - most of her 'scenes' are in relation to someone else (compared to Sasuke or Naruto, thinking about Sasuke or Naruto, talking about Sasuke or Naruto, etc). It's EXELY ELY refreshing to see a fanfiction writer portray her in such a way that she interacts with otheut iut is still her own self, independent of what others are doing. Most fanfics either have her isolated and being her own person, or interacting with others and being their person, as in, being what they make of her, and not what she makes of herself. I'm no feminist, so my opinion is not because Sakura's a girl, and I know that everyone is influenced by others, but I think in Sakura's case, Kishimoto-sama took it too far. I don't think any human being's personality and thoughts should be that dependent on what other people say and do.

    Oh, my. That rant wasn't supposo beo be there. ^^()

    Um, in short (and please forgive my earlier wordiness) very YES to the eleven Sakura-centric chapters. I shall read them all with pleasure. ^^
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  • From ANON - on July 13, 2004
    by all means, do it your way. Rewrite it however you like it, whatever you think is for the best. Im voting for option 1
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  • From ANON - Jordan Lee on July 13, 2004
    Personally, I really like the way the story's going as is. Though there is slight more focus on Sakura, I don't think the other characters are skimped over. In fact, the multi-views make the story better and more rounded (at least in my opinion). Either way, I'll definitely continue reading the story, but my vote is not to change it, go with what you have. It's awesome. :-)
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  • From on July 09, 2004
    *___*~ nice fic
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on June 29, 2004
    Hey Tea Leaf,
    As always your work is exceptional! My internet is down right now, so I had to print this out to read it, so I shared it with another friend who is a Naruto fan as well, she read all 31 pages in one sitting. She was just as obsorbed by it as I was. She laughed at the image of Gai being the gym teacher, that part was great! I am totally into the mystery of Itachi n Sakura, and can't wait to read more. Oh, I loved the role reversal on Sakura/Sasuke! lmao when he turned on that charm and she was unaffected by it, inner Fly was going HELL YEAH!!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    Big huggles girly, n great job
    Fly
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  • From ANON - Bealmira on June 26, 2004
    Wow. This story is so different than all of the other ones I've read. You're good. You are oh so very good. Bravo. The discription of Haruno's painting... That was good too. Wow. I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Xero on June 26, 2004
    wow.. good story.. I can only assume that Haruno is the main character of this story??
    yeah, that'd be my only beef with the story so far.. Sakura took the only move that Naruto was good at.. but i guess without the trouble'd past form the manga, theres no need to worry to much about him.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on June 18, 2004
    WOOOHOOOO!!!!! another chapter! It rocked! I can't wait for the next one. OMG I have been trying to log onto AFF for like 4-5 days now, always get too many people connected message, so I was already happy when I got in, then I saw my favorite Naruto authoress had updated, happy day for me! hehe. Yes I am gushing, but I do so love your work for a reason. You are really good. It is such a pleasant change to be able to find a het fic that was written by an adult. oh, geez, I won't even start a rant, hehe. Big Hugs! Hope all ell ell with you,
    Fly
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  • From ANON - Kasiree on June 02, 2004
    Is the gonna be another SasuSaku? Yeah, anyway.. Sakura already has a girlfriend? Oooh, is it Gaara? Make it Gaara! Hehehehe, I leaning on GaaSaku more than SasuSaku, but SasuSak's also good. Hope you update sooner.. Sakura sure is synical ain't she?
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  • From ANON - Ivy on May 22, 2004
    I changed email cozthe last one does not work... ur fic realy stands out! Is it sasusaku? or anything else. M/F ryt? email me J!
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on May 19, 2004
    Hey Tea Leaf,
    I just noticed that the review I posted never showed up, so I am reposting it. I absolutley loved this first chapter, and anxiously await your next chapter. This second story has clinched it, I am a devout fan! lol.
    Huggles!
    Fly
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  • From ANON - The Sadist on May 17, 2004
    You were right in saying the characters would be differenom hom how you portrayed them in The Butterfly! I think this is an impressive start to what looks like to be yet another fantastic story. As the first chapter, it's kind of hard to really formulate any solid opinionthe the story, but i love how you've depicted all the characters, especially Sakura. It's always interesting to have different interpretations of Sakura, especially ones that are well written. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Isabella on May 16, 2004
    i'm so glad you wrote another fic! and this one is so interessting and unique yet again. i love the whole idea of Sakura being protected by the Akatsuki and the little fight between her and Kakashi! (^3^ KakaSaku love!) though there is a part that i'm not to fond of by thats just me, everything is really good!......i just don't like NejiTenten >< BUT that won't stop me from reading this awesome fic! XD
    Can't wait for the next chapter! :3
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