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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - Caciquegoddess on June 25, 2005
    awwww! it's over?! oh well, i cant say that i havent enjoyed it. this was one of the best fanfiction that i have ever read! keep writing! i enjoy your talents as many others probably do as well. i'll keep a look out for more stories! Thank you for writing this story! it truly was a gift for me to be able to read it. Thank you and good luck in the future!
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  • From ANON - Manda-Kun on June 25, 2005
    Awws! That was brilliant! I loved the whole story!
    Made me so emotional at time! ; _ ;

    xDD I just love your writing style, you can make images SO well.

    I think your one of my favorite Fanfic writers I've ever come across. That's the truth!

    -Gives you a cookie. Thank you SOO much for writing this! n_n
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  • From ANON - macy on June 25, 2005
    waa!! can't belive it's finally over!! this fic is simply awesome. i love it so much. So much intensity, passion, and angst, with a bit of humor and fluff thrown in it made it an extremely enjoyable read. i'm sure to re-read the entire fic again in the future (when I have lotsa time since it is pretty long!). Thanks so much for writing and sharing such a wonderful piece. i'm so lucky i decided to read this fic!!!
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  • From ANON - Justice_hime on June 25, 2005
    I think it was a perfect ending for the story, coming full circle. The ending put a smile on my face and through the whole chapter it really did feel like everything was winding down. I haven't reviewed before (^_^;) but I have definitely enjoyed reading you're story, the good bits, the bad bits (the bad bits being anything that involved Orochimaru) and the heartbreaking. I hope to see more from you! One shots, wips - anything!
    Great job!

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  • From caro8 on June 25, 2005
    WUAHHHH!!! IT'S OVER!!!

    Okay ignore my sudden meltdown. I have to tell you I love this story. From start to finish it was so worth the read. I've mentioned this before, but I go back and re-read my favorite chapters.

    As for your ending, it was perfect. Their relationship was in a place that was optimal for an end. There really wasn't a need for you to continue to torture them. All loose ends don't have to be tied and closed for an ending to be good. I liked it, loved it actually. And now I shall worship you....

    *throws herself down on her knees and begs*
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  • From ANON - twisted-sheets on June 25, 2005
    Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. It was a good ride, and I enjoyed very minute of it. I hope you continue writing, whatever form or pairing it would be!

    *bows*

    Thank you!

    ~twisted-sheets
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  • From ANON - Anon^^ on June 25, 2005
    You could have gone on, I think you are right in that, but then you risk losing part of the stories mystique. What better way to end a story then with the way it began, with a few twists. This is truly one of the best Naruto fanfiction stories I have read. The relationship was well developed, it brought in various elements, and just seemed believable. The descriptions were great, and you took time to develope and actual plot, something interesting and worth reading. I look forward to any new fics you make. Goodluck, Ciao!
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  • From ANON - castalvia on June 25, 2005
    O.O awesome story! A solid plot, not just another PWP. I enjoyed this story sooooooooo much. It ran smoothly from begining to end. I'm really sad to see the story end, but at the same time happy b/c you never gave up! I only wish that I could be as talented as you, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

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  • From ANON - hanne on June 25, 2005
    wow. I can`t believe this fic is actually finished..I`ve hung on to this since it started and marvelled at how faithful you were to the fic; how it always made progress and found some new interesting twists in the story without becoming an cliche, rather keeping up an astounding sense of originiality which I daresay have given you lots of devoted fans. I love the final chapter. You managed to give such a long, complicated and rich story a worthy ending where you summed it all up in a neat package with a pretty bowtie and exciting wrappingpaper..LIke you said, you could of course have continued the fic.....I miss some information regarding the way both Sasuke and Naruto interact with their families at the moment, aside from that you have it all covered^^
    Lots of luv and the best of wishes from a resident in Norway.
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on June 25, 2005
    Sad to see it's the end, but a great way to end such a greatly written story. I will definately keep an eye out for your future writings. Keep up the great work. Ja!
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on June 25, 2005
    OMG!!!! I can't believe it's over! I'm sooooo going to miss this story. Of course I understand that it couldn't go on forever, but that doesn't mean you can't wish for that to happen.
    You are one of the best writers I've come across on the Internet so far, and I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
    Thank you! ^_^
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  • From ANON - - on June 25, 2005
    And ... sorry for my very ill review -_-; that's my of "loving." By being totally random and just saying everything that comes to mind about your beautiful beautiful beautiful fic. :)
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  • From ANON - SD-chan on June 25, 2005
    OMG it's done!!!!!!! hurray for SasuNaru!!! yep, i am eagerly awaiting all your other fics!! keep up the good work!!! ^_______________^

    *huggles you until you're blue*

    LOL

    >> SD-chan
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  • From ANON - - on June 25, 2005
    CRYYYYYY I'm crying uwahhhh~ ahhh that one sentence by Sasuke when he said that he was waiting to hear it from Naruto ... oh my goodness... i was teary!!! I wanted to scream so many times but my parents in the next room would freak out :( uwahhhhhhhh~ YOU HAVE TO WRITE A ONE-SHOT OR TWO lol or a sequel..gahhh so pretty...so fuckin pretty...I love it! *sighs contentedly* uwahhhh~ I can't believe you ended it though! It could've gone on forever (as I wanted it to!) but but but...you ended it there *cries* uwahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gahhh!!! this chapter totally had a sense of finality though...with all the winding up going on haha...loved the solemness in the beginning. I'm glad that Ran has come to accept Naruto, even though his aunt and uncle may have not...that's too bad though. Loved how you gave Tsunade and Jiraiya more of a role in his life now...that's just beautiful to me. I hated the Neji moment lol jk :P I agree with Sasuke's possessiveness - and as much as I hate Sasuke - Naruto only belongs to him (and me, of course!). The "Oro-bastard" scene still makes me stutter. I took a break to grab a drink from the kitchen while reading, and that ugh...utter horror of a scene where Sasuke was being a big ass...and fuckin cheated on Naruto...gahhhh *SHUDDER!!!!!!* UGHHHH Get it out of my mind....gahhhh but Naruto's loving...and wow, I mean, this is the one fic where I just LOOOOVE Sasuke's emotions though. I mean, wow! That's what being in love must be like...like how their breath stilled just by smelling each other's scents on pillows or something...or just a smile made Sasuke choke (in the previous chap with the tie). That's just beautiful. This fic is beautiful. Everything is beautiful about it (EXCEPT the Oro-scene...gahhhhh make me forget ittttt!!!!!!). Too bad about Sasuke's parents though :( But I guess not everything can be fixed, eh. Love Love Love. I better stop here before you freak out on me.
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85@yahoo.com on June 24, 2005
    I thought that this story was going to end soon, but not this soon. I'm sad to see it go.

    However, I liked how you ended this. All of the major problems were resolved, and there seems to be an equilibrium in Naruto and Sasuke's world.

    I'm definitely looking forward to your future work. Please post it soon!
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