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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - CC on July 21, 2005
    You have a very intrestiong story going there-I like it! I think it would've been better if you wrote about what happened to Sasuke when Itachi found out what he and Naruto did in his car, 'cause it would've been funny!! I don't mean to be rude or anything either, but there were several typos throughout the story and some parts where a typo made a sentence unreadable. I won't say any more ecause I don't like to nitpick, but of you want me to-I'll tell you where they are.
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  • From ANON - Satoshi on July 15, 2005
    Oh my god ;D! I loved every part of that story! x3! I'm hoppin' that you will write more with SasuNaru. =D
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  • From ANON - poo_n_pee on July 14, 2005
    this is the greatest sasunaru story ever. great story.. the characters not OOC but still so lovable.. and i loved the last bit on itachi tapping sasuke's forehead again. its really warm and fuzzy =D

    HURRAYS SASUNARU!!!
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  • From ANON - jo716 on July 13, 2005
    God, how can i love this story so much!??!?!?! Seriously, this is the best sasunaru fic i've ever read - you made me care so much about the characters!!! and it's so funny and hott!!! please please write more stories as good as this one.
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  • From ANON - Riyo-sama on July 01, 2005
    I've been following this story ever since I discovered it last year, and although it is sad to see it end, I'm glad that it ended happily. I've enjoyed reading it very much, and I thought the pace of the story was just right.
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  • From ANON - dAni3Lr on July 01, 2005
    i waited forever just for this last chapter T^T it was short, very short, but nevertheless it made me felt very heart-warming cuz everything's nice and all that. and i like the fact in the end, you reverse the roles of naruto n sasuke; instead of having sasuke (from chapter 1) stalking naruto, you had it the other way round instead. *thumbs up* dat's very clever! m/ and wad touches me most is where naruto finally confessed his true feelings towards sasuke. and yes, naruto's parents will like sasuke very much ^-^ BA u rocked~~~ m/ i'm waiting for sub-plots to happen! :D arigatougozaimasu!
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  • From ANON - ROGUEFURY on June 29, 2005
    This fic has been a real pleasure to read and I can't wait for more from you! I have to say it's been few times that I've read someone's work and loved it so much that I envied the writing style. I agree with you that it was a good place to unofficially end it; just hope you get 'hit' with a LOT of one-shot ideas in the future for this one.

    LATER.ROGUEFURY
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  • From ANON - Paza on June 27, 2005
    Damn fantastic story.
    One of the best AU fics I have ever read. I usually don't like them, but you managed to fit the characters and the story so well into this universe that it didn't matter. I laughed and giggled a lot, and I couldn't stop reading. It was a really great fic. ^__^

    Keep it up (please?).
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  • From ANON - ann on June 27, 2005
    yayyyyy!!!! *does happy dance!*
    this fic rocks... u made sasuke an arse for a while, but it still rocks! woohoo!!!
    three cheers for becca! *hip-hip, hoorray!!!!**hip-hip, hoorray!!!!**hip-hip, hoorraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!*
    hope u get a new fic out soon! = ]
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  • From ANON - AsanoMatsuya on June 26, 2005
    yay!!! what a wonderful ending! :3 I loved it! Can't wait to go and browse your gallery...to see if there's any other interesting stories ^^ *claps* I applaud you!
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  • From ANON - just_me on June 26, 2005
    Like WOW... your story kept me occupied for two days and I loved every minute I was reading it... all 32 chapters in two days. *happy sigh*
    You should write a sequel to this... just a small one. Just so people can get a view on how Sas and Naru are doing. I also want to know Itachi's reaction to the smell of sex in his car. :P
    You're a very good writer. I found a few grammar-errors here and there, but don't worry... it happens to the best. You gained yourself another adoring fan...namely me *cheers*
    Keep the good work coming... ^__^V
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  • From ANON - Mithros on June 26, 2005
    ^^ this was a very good story thank you for writting it!!
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  • From ANON - rainbird on June 26, 2005
    Noooooo its ending. Well, I have really enjoyed your story. It's probably my favorite au story I have ever read. It was so beautifully written, and you were able to show emotions that often aren't discussed in fanfiction. Oh, and I loved the healthy dose of smut in nearly every chapter. Tactful smut, not just pwp. Yay for smut. Please write more stories! I will love you forever ^^
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  • From ANON - Hyang on June 26, 2005
    ^________________^ All I can really do is just smile. You did a wonderful job and I sometimes look through your chapters to give me inspiration or motivation in my own stories. i respect you and even though im sad to see this story end, i also feel refreshed as im sure you are
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  • From jelliott on June 26, 2005
    Have I reviewed before? I'm not entirely sure, but anyway...

    So this delightful tale comes to an end. It's a slightly sad truth, but I believe this was a good place to end as well. Reading/watching the relationship you created between Naruto and Sasuke go through its ups and downs was both sweet and touching. I suppose that's why it's bit heartbreaking for this story to end. Thank you for writing it.

    ~Dirtyangel
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