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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - watermelon-gal on May 21, 2004
    hey wat the hell do u mean "a poor excuse for a lemon" ?
    THIS STORY ROX
    i luff it!!
    and GUH i can't get enuf
    i fell in luff with the way u write
    hahahah
    XD
    luff the style
    and descriptions
    *drools*
    update update!! =33
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  • From ANON - Meg on May 21, 2004
    Wow, this is very welitteitten and I love your interesting take on naruto and Sasuke. :) I adore your Naruto, he's great! And you have nothing to worry over with your lemon...it was VERY hot....very VERY hot. Amazing, and they haven't even gone all the way yet....wonderful anticion ion and storytelling! :D

    Can't wait for the next chappie!
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  • From ANON - ranoshi_ai on May 20, 2004
    haha, you are truly a talented writer. the only thing i was confused by in chapter 4 was what did naruto mean when he said "do you want me too?" after sasuke told him to *ahem*. maybe you accidentally typed one o's too many^^;;? sorry about my lack of adjectives other than 'hot' in my last review, i just could not think straight after reading the three fics @_@! your smut scenes are among the best out there, definitely a favorite in my sasu/nau/narusasu fanaticism^___^ you have a wonderfully receptive, fantastic, and lovely imagination.
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  • From ANON - Lexy on May 20, 2004
    *dies* I didn't think this story could get any better. But low and behold, you did it. SOOOO GOOD! I am just drooling over the incredibly interesting relationship that Naruto and Sasuke have. It's fantastic. I'm still curious about how Sasuke obtained Naruto's pendant, I'mI'm sure you'll let us know when the time is right. Also, the hints that you keep dropping about both Narus ans and Sasuke's family is interesting. This story is great and I love it to pieces. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - spiritfighter on May 20, 2004
    yay!!! another chappie! and a good one at that. you made me giggle to no extent about the hot chocolate! Teehee, I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ibex Snow on May 20, 2004
    Wow! I love your fanfic. I hope you will update really really soon because I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on May 20, 2004
    My review didn't go through, darn it, it is hard to recreate. I really loved this chapter from your fic, it was poetic, I enjoyed that part a lot because it was sweet but not sappy at all, more like thoughtful meditations and a bit of discovery. At the beginning, I realized that Sasuke's attraction (or harrassment) was more hormone driven than anything but some hints here and there made me realize that it wasn't. This part really shows me that he feels for Naruto...and Naruto is allowing himself to follow his feeling, tentative, but merrily it seems. I loved the teasing quality of it all, and the naughty boys doing private things in public. oth,oth, what a bunch of vouyeaurs we are.

    Keep up the writing, I like the plot and I have to tell you that the naughty parts made me giggle like a little girl (especially the coffee shop moment). Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ranoshi_ai on May 19, 2004
    ****ing ****, that's hot! wow, this is a really hot story. yay, it seems like a loving relationship may have begun. because that goodnight kiss was gentle and lingering? ^___^ wow...grstorstory, hopping around happily as i read the what i printed as i'm waiting for more. haha, congrats to mi, first yaoi i ever printed^^ you rule! totally great story, need to read more^-^
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  • From ANON - Kaskading_Darkness on May 18, 2004
    I really enjoyed reading this fanfic, I hope you update soon, You put everyone in there charcater, that's what I most liked. That you could actually Sasuke doing that and Naruto acting that way towards it. It made the stroy all the more convining.

    rds rds from,
    xXKaskding_DarkingXx
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  • From ANON - jazzy on May 17, 2004
    Intense, please update soon. ^-^
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  • From ANON - watermelon-gal on May 14, 2004
    omg
    im about to die from squealing
    >.
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  • From ANON - Espi on May 14, 2004
    Omg t3h pr0n. I <3 you, can I have your babies?

    [can't think straight after reading that]
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  • From ANON - amy on May 13, 2004
    *squueees* i like this story, it's so lemony AND it has a plot! good job, keep it coming!!
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  • From ANON - Kashshaptu on May 13, 2004
    omg, this is soo good! I really love it and I'm totaly hooked on your story! please update soon^_^
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  • From ANON - The Schiz is too lazy to log in on May 12, 2004
    I read this already and didn't get a chance to review. Man Sasuke is one Horny little bastard. I don't blame him though with Naru around. Wow the citrus in this story is spicy. Yum. I love good smut. I'll definately be back for more.
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