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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon

From on July 26, 2006
::sigh:: I'm at a loss for words. This is great. I'm only on chapter five though, lol. I just wanted to tell you how great it is so far, though. Hopefully you have more stories up, but for now, I'm going to finish your story. Sasuke is... um...well idk if OOC is the right word... maybe horny is? lol, Yes, because I think they are ... in char. I mean, who knows what a horny Naruto or Sasuke would be like? And I actually like Sakura for once :D okay so she annoys me in the anime. She's mean to my poor Naruto ::hears a threatening growl from Sasuke:: hehehe, um... I mean your Naruto, Sasuke. I was only joking ::slowly backs away::

Inus_Kagome_Forever
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From ANON - RyuNaNoDa! on July 24, 2006
WOW! This was a whopping good story.

From tip to tail it was facinating and I loved it. Though it took me a few nights to read it all, I stll laughed, cried, glomped the computer and talked to myself like it was all good!

You're an amazing fanfiction writer and I hope you'll email me so that we can begin a correspondnace.
Wouldnt that be delightful?
Anywho, congratulations on being a rare writer who finishes their fics, it seems like everyone is disconinuing these days!

YAY!

- Misery
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From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2006
Thank you so much for writing this.
it was wonderful.
I stayed up till 5 am reading this.
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From ANON - Rasengan22 on July 21, 2006
Ah... finished. Whew, the ending didn't change.

BeccaAmon, I... love... you...

Still! :::shakes hands at Sasuke::: I will not forgive you for what you did at that school! *Pouts, then rereads all lemony goodness* Well, okay then, long as you're a good fuck for Naruto.
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From ANON - Rasengan22 on July 20, 2006
Ok, I haven't finished yet, and didn't realize that there were new chapters up. I'd already read this earlier... I just want you to know that you have already made me cry twice. Ugh, when did this all happen? Of course, I love it. It's the best I've ever read. But my heart is so broken right now. And I couldn't wait to finish it for fear it might not end so happy, and I would be crushed.

Also, wow, you've gotten better with each chapter. The writing is SUPERB. I love your detail, just in the scenes where Naruto observes his surroundings... the tv with a basketball game on it, the cat in the street, the woman who walked by in the red dress that looked like she had a rough day. These are what makes your story the best (in my opinion.)

I'm still like, where did these new chapters come from? The interaction between Sasuke and Orochimaru was perfect, of course. That is exactly how I would predict it to be but in, well, an alternate universe. Amazing.

I loved the scene with Jiraiya, as well. Why? Because it was so subtle. And very light and comical. I only wish Tsuande's character maybe reflected closer to the relationship she shares with Naruto in the manga/anime. Yes, she's worried about him, but she still demands some kind of respect in his life.

Not important, BUT the first time you made me cry was that scene in the private school with Orochimaru. I had to walk away from the screen because I was so crushed for Naruto. And then at that very point, even though it wouldn't follow with Naruto's character, to hold out for Sasuke no matter what, no matter the fact that he hurt him, or the fact that he was leaving them behind for his own ambition, he always wanted Sasuke back, knew he was always good (not to say that's accurate about Sasuke's character). But this is the first time I thought to myself, could Naruto forgive what happened in that office? I had to ask myself why would he. To go that far for ambition? Can I compare it to Sasuke leaving in the manga just for power? Are they the same kind of betrayal? Is one worse?

Man, those were the questions I had. And I just finished Ch. 29, so I cried there, too. I even let out a squeal that probably woke up the house. But you are one hell of a writer, and I really appreciate that this story exists. Thank you.
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From ANON - Kayo on July 20, 2006
*sob sob angst angst* It's the end. No, it's the end. I wish it weren't so, this story was so good. A fic to be proud of. But on a more serious note, this story is one of the best I have ever read and is on my Naruto top five radar. Been following this fic for a while and it is very well composed, and /very/ lemony. XD Kayo likes lemons...especially with this yaoi couple. I might've cried once or twice along the way too. The characters are true to heart and you can just /feel/ the emotions roiling around them. Really sad it ended. I shall breathlessly await any one-shots you write to accompany this.
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From ANON - lone-lycan on July 14, 2006
I love this fic from beginning to end! I like the sutable shift in Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. I really have no words to describe that. I bow before your penmanship! This was so good that I had the misfortune of stopping right after Sasuke denied Naruto, so I had a good run at cursing Sasuke's name and his origins until I could get back on and finish reading.

I only had one issue with this story...

There should have been a warning about drinking anything while reading the Winter Hot Chocolate chapter *blush*
Sad to say I nearly died choking on water of all things and trying to laugh. I got a very funny look from my brother, which almost never happens, and caused me to choke even more...sorta like a chain reaction. Anyway great work! I'm looking forward to more fantastic writing^__^

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From ANON - yanira on July 11, 2006
I adore this story so far... so well written! the imagery is very clear and sensual in a nice way. Specially the hot chocolate scene. You had me laughing my ass off at the thought! I can very well imagine Sasuke making fun of Naruto... they are in a different environment but the personalities are so much like them its great to read this! Thank you for a story well crafted! only spelling problem I have found so far was the word choke and stroked ... but that is like a grain of sand... necessary to bring us back to earth... I get aroused just reading this one... and it makes me smile secretly at work... so many good lines!!! Keep up the good work please! Me likes lots!! ^.^
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From ANON - innerchild on July 10, 2006
hot, angsty in all the right places, good, great, amazing! and... more. i ran out of words on how to describe this. but that's only cause i have a small attention span and small vocabulary. anyway, i loved this story. i read a bunch of other AU's and each and everyone of them had this story down as their inspiration/favorite and i wasn't dissapopinted when i read this and understood their admiration for u. ur an amazing writer. i loved the way u let this story unfold. i'll be reading it again probably. now to go see if you have other stories.

-innerchild
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From on July 06, 2006
This is most definatly one of my favorite fanfictions ever. It was so good and sexy and awesome. I loved it a ton. Excellent job on this fic. ^^
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From perfect_blue_rogue on June 30, 2006
gods i love this story!! thanks for the good times and the first chappie really was unexpected. haha
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From ANON - noise. on June 29, 2006
Oh, it's finally over! ;o; I enjoyed this fic very much.
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From ANON - Rebellion2Fate on June 28, 2006
Awe, that was so cute! I was getting a bit worried there at the end..I was afraid it was going to be one of those annoying fics where one of them realizes they love the other after they've disappeared from their life for good (at the train station). I was so relieved when Sasuke was still on the platform! And I love how you slowly had Sasuke's family coming together, even Sasuke and Itachi. Though I think the brothers need to gang up on that lady that was hitting on their dad and threaten her or something. I wonder if Sasuke will ever tell Naruto exactly WHAT he did to get admittance to that school. Hmm, oh well. Another story for another time. Good job, great fic!
Cheers,
R2F
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From ANON - Deion on June 03, 2006
awesome stroy plaese continue wrting stories like this your a great writer
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From ANON - someone on February 08, 2006
Hey, I loved the story sooo much. The story kept me at the edge of my seat because there were happy parts, sad parts, and exciting parts that made me want to read on and on... you are a very talented writer and you should continue... =]
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