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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - Fuujin on June 05, 2004
    I've waited too long to review this story! I just want you to know that I really love it, and the interludes were great. I didn't think I'd get one. XD; They remind me of Kyou and Yuki the way they don't value the things the have and are jealous of others. Naruto and Sasuke both have great umiboshis on their backs. ^__^; Oh, and I really like Ino and Sakura. They just seem nice in this fanfic. In conclusion, this is like my favorite fanfic. Ever. o__o; XD
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  • From ANON - sABRINA on June 03, 2004
    PLEASE UPDATE! PRETTY PLEZE?! I REALLY REALLY REALLY WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTERS.
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  • From ANON - Akito on June 02, 2004
    oiiiiiii!!!! hahhaah very amusing! i love your fic! Sasuke definately feels something more than lust toward Naruto... lolz...And da pendant....it has something to do with da plot right? lolz...update soon!
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  • From ANON - amy on June 01, 2004
    aaaahhhh will you update already!!! I need my fix!
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  • From on May 31, 2004
    Hm...where to begin for this. At first, I was a little hesitant to read your story. After all, more often than not, these are amusingly simple PWPs with no story and a seemingly poor grasp of the english language. By the second paragraph, I was pleasantly surprised by your writing style, and by the second chaper, I was hooked on the developing depth to what, at first, seemed just another excuse to get Sasuke into Naruto's pants ;). I really like how you stay pretty close to the whole Naruto and Sasuke outlook, even in this AU. Sasuke stays really consistent, and even his so-called family life and school life come together to make the complex Sasuke we all know and love. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but nothing that takes away from the story by being too glaring or frequent. The only suggestion I could make is that it's a little confusing sometimes when you jump from Naruto's to Sasuke's point of view (and then to Sakura's, whis is weird, cause she's not really important to the overall story too much and only goes to her POV once or twice). Maybe dividing it isectsections, one dealing with Naruto, the other dealing with Sasuke...that might be a little less confusing, format wise.
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  • From ANON - tess on May 31, 2004
    CONTINUE!!!! CONTINUE I SAY!!!! alot of jerking off.... i loved the 69, bravado well if you do not continue i will hang you by a string over a pot of crusty toe jam! be weary!


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  • From ANON - Iie on May 29, 2004
    Oh my god, that's got to be one of the best fics around! I love it I love it I love it!!! ::hugs:: Thank you so much for creating such a great fanfic! Your ideas are wonderful, I love how Naruto's and Sasuke's relationships moves from non-con to something more.... ^^ I am indeed curious about the pendant, but I know you'll have a satisfying explanation when you judge the time is right. I have faith in you!!! Good luck, and I shall be impatiently waiting for updates
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  • From ANON - small lady on May 29, 2004
    the greatest fic ever I love it just love it. Keep up the great work, hope you update soon *puppy eyes* please! i jsut love the way sasuske is so agressive *sigh* Ha his favorite flavor is Uzumaki. That was so cute *giggles* And i'm jsut dying to find out how sasuske got his hands on naruto's pendant ah the mystery.
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  • From ANON - Rey-Chan on May 27, 2004
    I really really love your story, but one question: why isn't anything happening? this is almost like PWP. It's kinda frustrating to se how Sasuke that BASTARD(!!!!!) doesn't give Naruto his necklace back, I've got personal experiance with that -_-;. Sorry, I'm kinda in a bad mood, because I have to use the bathroom but I've painted/varnished(?) my nails, so I can't go!!! ^^;;; oh... I'm off then k? ^^;;; please write on very very soon. bye bye
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  • From ANON - The Fm on May 26, 2004
    Am addicted to your story. This is one of my favorite sasunaru story EVER!
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  • From LadyFlame on May 23, 2004
    I loved the line in chapter 4, 'How can I think when I've got a hard dick rubbing against mine', I also loved the hot chocolate scene in the cafe, I really hope you intend writing more, and I shall look forward to reading it!!
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  • From ANON - heard the owl on May 22, 2004
    This fic is SOO HOT! Hot hot hot hot ho-ot! I LOVE IT SO MUCH that I read it twice and will read it again and again each time you post a new chap. You fricken rule! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Espi on May 22, 2004
    Hello again! Y'know, if you want intelligence in your reviews at *all*, you're going to have to stop writing such great chapters, because right now I can't get much out except obsessive fangirlish squeeing. A million <3's for your fic! =D
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  • From ANON - SexySiriusBlack on May 21, 2004
    Eeeeeeek!!! That was sooooo good! You are wonderful! I forget...when did Sasuke steal Naruto's pendant? And what was up with Sassy and his wanting to suddenly float down like a Snowflake...he sounded kind of...well...flakey. Is he ok? Is everything going right at home? 'Cos...you know he won't exactly float down from the roof of the school building. I hope he isn't getting suicidal over something that's goin' down at his crib. Well...anyway, please update soon...and maybe I'll bake you some warm, delicious Macadamia Nut/White Chocolate Cookies! Mmmmmm....doesn't that sound good right about now? Oh....it does...
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  • From ANON - dragonsrose4 on May 21, 2004
    You know, even it there were grammatical errors, I probably would not have seen them because I was in too much of a hurry to read ahead. When I first started reading the first chapter I wasn't interested, I only got to the second paragraph. The next day I gave it a try again, and I just loved !! I!! I wonder what's going on with sasuke's parents, and will naruto ever tell him about his? I'm really enjoying this fic because you can see that only naruto seems to be able to get around sasuke's shields. Keep on updating, I'm waiting anxiously to see what happens after he hot choco insident.
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