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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - kayoko on October 27, 2004
    *does the author worship dance*
    yay! new chapter!~~~ *glomps*

    naruto's cousin, eh? =/ i don't like her..she's mean..

    and oh..i had such a good laugh when naruto kicked her out of his room by taking off his shirt..
    i would have just stayed and watched and drooled *_* mwhahahahahha...

    i thought the last few scenes where ran and her friends were talking and giggling about naruto and cute guys in general was so...real..lol...that was really kewl..how ran's friends thought naruto was hot (cause he is..) while we know that ran hates naruto from the bottom of her shoe

    is the last scene a flashback of when naruto used to live with his aunt?

    thank you very much for writing!
    *hugs*

    kayoko
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  • From ANON - popcorn oracle on October 26, 2004
    Awww, this is one of my favorite chapters ^.~. When they start getting close and fluffy. I really don't like Sakura in the manga/anime... okay, I just about hate her. But you manage to focus on here remotely positive aspects, so I can put up with her I suppose ^^;. But yeah, I like!
    It's somewhat the opposite thrmalrmal show though with Naruto eh? Everyone actually does want to hang out with him, pay attention to him rather than avoid him like they do in the manga. Interesting.
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  • From ANON - Popcorn Oracle on October 26, 2004
    @_@ And the plot thickens! Hmm, I wonder what happened to Sasuke to leave those days. Oh, and Sasuke's confused, obviously infatuated comments to Naruto are just too darned cute ^^. I really love that scene with him walking in from the snow. Very very nice stuff...
    ::laughs:: wow, Sasuke has a dirty mind, no?
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  • From ANON - Popcorn Oracle on October 26, 2004
    ^^; Ahh, theres that racey chapter I recall. Poor Naruto, Sasuke practically rapes him
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  • From ANON - Popcorn Oracle on October 26, 2004
    Ahh, this Sasuke is so sadistic O_O. But he's interesting that way. Although the first time I read it I couldn't help but keep imagining him as some scary muscle-y kid, you know? Meh, but come on, this is pretty pretty Sasuke ^^. But yeah, the development of the relationship deepens every chapter, yaay. I did skip over a few parts the first time, now I'm going all the way through and I really really like it.
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  • From ANON - Popcorn Oracle on October 26, 2004
    I remember reading this fic the first time and being somewhat annoyed ^^;. Because they weren't really rivals, it was just kind of, well, Sasuke sexually harassing Naruto many many times. God knows why I got so darned addicted to it! Maybe because it's so well done, and maybe because of how you justified it later. And maybe because I like this bit of plotlessness ^.~. But anyhow, yeah, good stuff ^^.
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  • From ANON - KyuTails on October 25, 2004
    Please...for the love of God PLEASE....

    Update, for the sake of my sanity...you DO care about my SANITY dont YOU?! O_O
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  • From ANON - a-chan on October 23, 2004
    I just read this whole thing today and I think it's great. I really love your version of Sasuke. ^.^ I can't wait for the next updates.
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  • From ANON - clarechan on October 18, 2004
    Huh? I think I might have just left a blank review. Oops. In any case, I wanted to say that I am excited for this new plot twist. Very excited, especially because this means there ifinifinitely more story to be told! I thought it might be nearing the end when Sakura and Naruto made up. Good thing Sasuke has some skeletons (or should I say ghosts) in his closet! Yay! *glomps author* Thank you for your wonderful fic and please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Lina on October 17, 2004
    O_O

    IT'S ITACHI ISNT IT!??!?!?
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  • From ANON - lo on October 16, 2004
    you are sooo good I love your writing you kept me intrerested throughout the whole tale good job.
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  • From ANON - dAni3Lr on October 15, 2004
    great story. keep it up! i'll be back for more k? chill!~
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  • From ANON - AtsumiHaruko on October 15, 2004
    You know we all lyouryour story! Keep updating - a new chapter of "spiral falling" makes my day! ^_^
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  • From questofdreams on October 13, 2004
    I just can't get over how good this fic is...this is THE best AU Naruto fic I've read to date.

    Curious question...do you know where you're heading with this story or are you just kinda writing as it goes along? I see that you're beginning to hint at something new coming in and disrupting Sasuke's life (and his relationship with Naruto)...so I was jwondwondering ^_^

    Anyway, gorgeous fic and hope you update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on October 12, 2004
    (Ch. 22)
    Itachi, ne?
    I like where you're leading this new line; first about Naruto, now about Sasuke.
    Me like.

    One question; what about Neiji? I just don't remember you ever brining him up.

    Anyways, this has to be one of my most favorite Naruto fanfictions out there! Yup! Yup!
    So, how about regulated updates, ne? ^^



    Ja ne~
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