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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - Kin Uchiha on December 03, 2004
    awww...poor Sasuke-kun...being ignored again. *sigh* he must hurt so much to be shoved aside for his brother. his overly hot and sexy and psycho brother x3;;; and Itachi seems quite...polite and conceited. it's gross. and ahh!!! i hate Naruto's cousin! slap that evil girl, Sasuke-kun!! SLAP HER!! *cough* i love your story! update soon =)
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  • From ANON - clarechan on December 02, 2004
    Ahhh! Damn you! Every time. 'Course, you wouldn't be such a good author if you didn't leave us wanting more, ne? I have to admit there was a moment of squick in this chapter. I know it's childish and really germ-phobic, but when Naruto kisses Sasuke after sucking on Sasuke is really gross. *squick with squick face* I still love your work though!
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  • From ANON - roriko on December 02, 2004
    You finally updated TTATT I've been waiting for this chapter for the past month ._.' It's the first fic I've ever checked for updates daily... please write more! ;___;
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  • From ANON - dAni3Lr on December 01, 2004
    waited quite long for an update of this chapter, but where did Itachi pop out froM? Gosh.. and dat cousin of Naruto seemed really dangerous :( pls update soon thanks! :)
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  • From YaoiloverS on November 30, 2004
    Ha! I knew Itachi will come in the story! Anyway I really like this chapter, it's good and lemony! :river of tears: Now I feel sorry for both Sasuke and Naruto! But that's what makes stories like this better! I wonder what will ahppen when Naruto meets Itachi again....ooooooh! I can't wait 'til the next chapter!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on November 30, 2004
    Devious Lil Devil: O_o

    Sorry I'm a little too dazed from the events of this chapter to review properly due to the appearance of Itachi and Sasuke's stupidity, so please update soon! *goes back and reads the chapter again*

    Devious Lil Devil: Itachi.......:drool:.........Sasuke........:frowns:........that ass..........but Itachi.........:drools some more:.........and the lemon........seme Naruto.........*passes out from nosebleed*

    Devious Lil Devil: @_@
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  • From ANON - Blaise on November 30, 2004
    Ah stupid Sasuke, I hope now he won't be an idiot just when he and Naruto found happiness.
    By the way another great chapter, it is always great to see this story updated
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on November 30, 2004
    (Ch. 25)

    Well that was beautifuly angst-filled.
    I'm dying to know what's next!
    What will Itachi do? What was Sasuke's desicion?

    Please, I'm seriously beging; I know you have school/work/whatnot but please try and update at least once every couple of weeks.
    For your constent readers, at least.


    Hope you get around to updating soon,
    Sincerly,
    Hitomi.

    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - lo on November 30, 2004
    another great chapter. I love you characterization (you really make them almost your own) I love you word choice. The story is moving alone wonderfuly. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - - on November 30, 2004
    awww... its getting so angsty. its cute tho, and as long as sasuke and naruto end up together at the end im happy^^
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  • From ANON - Emina on November 30, 2004
    Bleh... I'm sick with the flu right now but your fic has helped me get my mind off my hacking coughs ^^

    Anyway
    I still can't get over the 'fucking' part... even though it was brash and not filled with your usual fluffyness, it was still hot.

    I liked how you put Itachi into the story, nicely done.

    -Emina
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  • From ANON - SpiritFighter on November 30, 2004
    *GASP* An update?!?!?!?!? OMFG!!! YESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! *dies of happiness* Aww.... Such a depressing chapter! Damn Itachi.... Oh, well. I really hopw things don't go TOO bad with Naruto and Sasuke. Not that I would mind TOO much, cause I'm an angst queen. Anyways, why did you take so long? I was scared that you had forgotten about it!! Anyways, Thank you so much for updating!! Neeways, update soon?
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  • From ANON - tak on November 29, 2004
    great fic, one of the few ff that i have ever took the time to review
    hoping for more later on
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  • From ANON - kayoko on November 29, 2004
    *cheers*
    today is a good day!~

    *heart*heart* thank you for updating!~

    Itachi is so...weird..he's in the black market..isn't he? mafia? yakuza?

    Sasuke's so mean to naru-chan..*pouts*

    *love*love*
    *sparkly pink background*

    thank you T____T

    p.s. i got your email with the betaed copies of the fic, i'll put them up on banana oil this friday..thankies
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  • From ANON - caro8 on November 29, 2004
    Itachi that punk ::glares:: Please don't break them up. But if you do I hope Naruto fights it. Oh and his cousin.......bitch!! I really really really love this story. Someone mentioned before that they would re-read it while waiting for updates, I must admit I did the same thing. I have fave chapters and everything. Keep up the awesome work. ::Thumbs up::
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