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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - terribilita on December 21, 2004
    What an awesome addition to an already great story. Poor Naruto; I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ghost on December 21, 2004
    HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG! STUPID SASUKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO! T___T PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! THIS IS SOOOOO GOOOOD!
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  • From ANON - koorinohitomi on December 21, 2004
    the only thing I can say is 'ouch'. I can only imagine how painful that is.

    Hopefully Sasuke is not too wrapped up in self-pity to notice he's pushing him over the edge.
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  • From ANON - lo on December 21, 2004
    Wow. That was heavy. Now I will be on edge until the next chapter. Good job though this story just keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next chapter, but do not ruch yourself on account of others. a rushed story is never a good one. You have done very well. And I just want to tell you that you ROCK!!

    lo
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  • From ANON - Wasabii on December 21, 2004
    this story better NOT turn TRAGIC!!!! YOU ARE E~V~I~L AT LEAVING THE STORY LIKE THAT! YOU *MUST* updateeeeeee!!!! Sasuke is a fucking bastard and Ran should die and rot in HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAAAAAAAAN UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - campurr on December 21, 2004
    So very harsh, all the cold neglect after the smoking hot pursuit.please write more soon.
    chris
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  • From ANON - Crizzy on December 21, 2004
    OMG SASUKE YOU STTTTTUUPID IDIOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!! YOU HAVVVVVVVVE TO UPDATE IVE BEEN WAITING FOREVER FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TO COME OUT! THINGS BETTER TURN OUT ALRIGHT! MAAAN I LOOOVE THIS STORY!!
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  • From ANON - Yuki on December 21, 2004
    The story that I have read so far as I could say it's very amazing and it really has a big impact when you wrote about Sasuke and Naruto. There was also a very strong feeling that you can tell when reading the Chapters so far and also it seems like on Chapter 24, there was a strong sense that even though their relationship that was strong at the beginning, the way Sasuke told Naruto off feels like Naruto is slipping down towards feeling as if he would want to commit suicide.But even though, it also seems like Naruto did want to confess to Sasuke that he did love him since he never said it,except ever since Itachi came back,Sasuke started putting up a barrier which just seems to block out Naruto. Though he did really love Naruto but now, in my opinion about it, it seems that part where Sasuke left without picking up Naruto's pendent and only that time Naruto got it back... I felt that Naruto isn't going to take much longer and might commit suicide any minuet. Gomen na sai. This is just my opinion and how I felt about the story that has a really big impact when I read it. I'm actually looking forward to more chapters and what will happen in the end. Hopefully that Naruto and Sasuke will love again one day or even be together to make their love even stronger for one another...ne?
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on December 21, 2004
    OH MY GOD!!! you did it..............you actually did it...........how the fuck could you do it?!!!!! SASUKE!!! YOU BASTARD!!! *wipes away the tears from her eyes* that was fucking harsh! I saw this coming but the fact that it actually happened.......... poor naruto. That assshole better be suffering as well. Damn that bitch, Ran!!! *takes out a gun and shoots Ran multiple times and Sasuke once, for hurting Naruto* God, I LOVE this story. I know you cant have love without some pain but ssssshhhhhhiiiittttt!! that was supremely fucked up!! You WILL UPDATE SOON or else i shall be forced to strap you to your computer and make you read SasuSaku stories until you puke. *shakes her head in refusal to the chapter that she just read* i still cant believe it........... ;_;

    Devious Lil Devil
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  • From ANON - Popcorn Oracle on December 21, 2004
    You're evil >_> really evil. ; ; damn, how could you write a chapter like that. Gahhh. Sasuke is being such a bastard, god. What is it with kids like him and not ever wanting to talk it out >
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  • From ANON - Hitomi_No_Ryu on December 21, 2004
    SASUKE YOU BASTARD!!! Give us a reason why!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - SpiritFighter on December 21, 2004
    *gasp* you didn't!!! *tears well up in eyes* you did.... oh no!! Poor Naruto-kun!! I almost started crying again! DAMN YOU RAN!!! *sobs quietly in the corner* Well, there is no story without some pain, but oh how it hurts. You must, must, must update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Shez on December 21, 2004
    All I have to say is....
    O_______________________________________________________________O;;;;;

    MY POOR NARUTO~!
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on December 20, 2004
    This was an intense chapter. I should have seen this coming, but I didn't. Please update soon. I really want to know what happens next
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  • From ANON - animegirl on December 20, 2004
    Oh MY GOD, how could you do that, how the fuck could you do that to naruto. i really liked this story but now you've gone and done some shit like this! you'd better bloody well up date and get them back together or i swear i'll hunt you done and make you do it!
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