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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - michirukoshi on January 03, 2005
    This is absolutely beautiful..I've never really been able to enjoy an AU..and now, I'm obsessed!
    I love your writing style..it flows so gorgeously, and with a wonderfully colorful vocabulary!! I have never read such good writing (especially yaoi).
    An amazing tale you have woven..filled with intricacies: an enigma of emotions.
    I love it.
    I cannot wait for the next chapter! ^^
    Keep up the fantastic work!
    ~michi~
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on January 02, 2005
    OMG!!! i love this story! it's so awesome and one of my new favs!! your description is perfection and i eat it up!!! and, although he doesn't realize it, my hubby greatly appreciates it as well *smirks* okay... moving on from the raving praise.... to my raving rant... dooooooooooooood!!!! wtf mate!! why is sasuke leaving naruto, how is that gonna solve anything at home? i was expecting that as soon as he "knew what he had to do" or whatever... but DAMN!! cruelness!! to deny him in front of EVERYBODY!! and what's the whole deal w/the pendant?? i hope you'll get into that in the next update.... what's the whole significance behind it, why'd sas take it, how'd naruto initially react to him wearing it, why didn't he ever get it back once they were together, why'd sas throw it back now? is that his way of making sure he severs all ties or somethin? what's the deal w/itachi?? what's the deal w/ran?? please don't torture us in suspense of all this angst!! update soon!! sooner than soon!! and often!! **patiently* awaits next update**
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  • From AkumaKawa on January 01, 2005
    What happens next? So many things are up in the air, and I am hooked to a big cliffie. Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 on December 30, 2004
    warning: this is a flame not suitable for those who love sasuke....

    that bastard. how dare he do that to poor ol' naru-chan. i swear i would give a piece of my mind right now. i can't believe after all that he did to naruto like sexally harrass him and stuff, he just goes and deny all of that. that is too low. i can't believe that bastard.

    p.s. i love the story, update soon please?
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on December 29, 2004
    You. Are. Evil. Evil, I tell you, eeeeeeevvvvvviiiiiillllllll!!! How could you do this to me?!?! Do you have any idea how much I cried during the last coupla' chapters??? Look!!! *waves an empty box of tissues in front of your face* See??? See?!?! *breaks down and goes into a corner to sob uncontrollably, leaving her muse, Melody, to finish the review* Mel: ^^;; ...uummmm.....yeah......uhh...she really does love your story. It's very creative and well written...she just...well... ^^;; I don't suppose that you could update anytime soon, could you? We would both greatly appreciate it, for two reasons: 1) We want to find out what happens, and 2) We have two reports due at the end of the week, and she is utterly useless when she's like this...soooooo...ummmm....keep up the good work, and update ASAP, kk? *wanders over to console the sobbing mess in the corner who has gone through yet another tissue box* ^^;;
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  • From ANON - Nicola on December 29, 2004
    Wow. Give me a sec, while I remember how to -breathe-.

    When I first looked at this story, I sighed, exasperated, expecting another silly little romance. This was... this was some of the most goddamn powerful writing I've read in -any- fandom.

    To say I am impressed would be kinda like saying that hippos are slightly plump. I think I'll die if you don't update this. The fangirl in me, the one that only gets out once every million fanfics is having a total field day. "OMG, LEIK, THIS IS SOOOOO GREAT! I AM SOOOOO IN LOVE! RAH, RAH, RAH!"

    I don't know what else to say, because I'm speechless. To a certain extent. x.x

    I TOTALLY salute you, as wierd as it sounds. Feh. Like that'll ever bother me.

    N.
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  • From ANON - tsu on December 29, 2004
    ARGH! Sasuke is being a bastard again! *whiny childish voice* Make him stop! >_< You know what? Only one thing can solve this... REVENGE! Payback's a bitch!
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  • From ANON - Silver on December 28, 2004
    sigh... i'm so saddened by this chapter.. when sasuke throws the pendent back to naruto.....PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!! this is an amazing story

    Silver
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  • From TenshiKaitou on December 25, 2004
    dammit sasuke. why does he have to be such an asshole?! argh, poor naruto...my heart hurts for you.
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  • From ANON - clarevoyant on December 23, 2004
    damndamndamndamndamndamn you! GOD! SASUKE IS SUCH A F**KING JERK!!!! *is really hyped up* ooooohhhh...i just wanna kick his ass. *tries to calm down enough to not just fling insults and threats at sasuke* wonderful characterization of sasuke, since we know just how capable he is of denying everything and walking away. i am curious about this pendant though. not much has been revealed as to why it is so significant. please update soon! that was a really good cliff-hanger! ja ne!
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  • From ANON - izumi on December 23, 2004
    uhh.. u made me cry...
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  • From ANON - dAni3Lr on December 23, 2004
    oh my God i could wait forever for your next update man... and this chapter upsets me very much *sobz* why sasuke?? Didn't he nid Naruto so much? What the hell is he thinking when he just sweep him off like that in front of the class?? Gods this has better be a good explanation from Sasuke if not i cannot slp at nite *urgh* Great chapter Becca~~ please please update soon :( Merry Christmas btw :)
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  • From ANON - KyuTails on December 22, 2004
    Well, I was about to scream because of that terrible cliffy, but, I'm too pissy right now.

    I WOULD call Sasuke a bastard, but, with all things considered (Itachi and all that jazz) I can and cannot understand him. Sasuke IS difficult to get, isnt he?
    U_U...but, please update quickly. I check back here nearly everyday to see if you've updated.


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  • From ANON - Tenkuu on December 21, 2004
    ......WAIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU JUST LEFT US HANGING LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!

    Reading 'Spiral Falling' is like falling in love and breaking up at the same time...I get so anxious about each chapter that you write, and then cliffhangers like this stab at my heart. You have such incredible talent as a writer!
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  • From ANON - NarutoDemon on December 21, 2004
    Wow! I loved it....sasuke chasing naruto. Keep writing ...update soon!
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