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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - Kyoto on March 13, 2005
    That's so.... *sobs* Poor Naruto! Getting left behind like that. And the worst part of all is that he's letting him go!!

    Okay, hysterics are over. Excellent chapter. Can't wait to see what happens. More specifically, see if they have a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - DarkSeductress on March 13, 2005
    That's really bittersweet. A wild turn of events. I really hope you finish this story. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Demon on March 13, 2005
    Aww i love this story but it is so sad about Sasuke moving schools i hope Orichimaru pisses off and doesn't try anything...i loved the end bit on chapter 29 it was so cute. I hope Naruto and his cousin get to be friends who can trust each other. but most of all i hope Naruto and Sasuke remain together cause they do seem happiest when their together. but please update soon i love your writing and look forward to reading more of your writing *thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - KyuTails on March 12, 2005
    Okay, this is just straight art. ART DAMMIT! ART!
    I love the way you write, although, I think you should blend some of yoursentences together to avoid your words sounding so detached from each other. Let ir flow~

    Otherwise, I see no problems. You are a wonderful writer.
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  • From ANON - tsuy on March 12, 2005
    Aw... this chapter came out great. I love how you portrayed Ran. Cute girl. :P
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  • From ANON - patosan on March 12, 2005
    Well, that was a great ending to a very emotional chapter there. Again, you manage to convey their feelings and makes us understand them with a few simple lines, even though their thoughts and feelings are very complex; it's amazing.

    I feel I understand Sasuke a little better in this setting now. I understand he's still driven by the need to gain the affection from his parents and to prove something to them and to himself, although exactly what I'm not sure he even knows. Somehow, I wonder if he wants to gain his parents' attention and then blow in on their faces, to hurt them, like they hurt him. Those type of intentions hardly ever work, either because they don't manage to gain the attention they want, or because once they do so, they can't bring themselves to let it go. It all depends on the depth and dimensions of the feelings of all the people involved. I wonder where Sasuke's heart lies on this. From what I've seen with people I know whose parents they feel have ignored them, once they find someone who does acknowledge them and loves them, they tend to latch onto them posessively and almost obsessively. It's quite scary. Sasuke is not that type of person, you've shown us that, he's a loner and does things his way. I feel sorry for him and it stays in line with what we've seen of his character in the manga.

    Don't mind me now by the way, I'm just rumbling, your story makes me think, that's all. Mmmh, food for the brain and pain for the heart! Because I hurt in that chapter by the way. I think I was bunching my fists when Naruto punched Sasuke, god how I wanted to be the one delivering the blow! That and more. I'm glad they got things straightened between them, sort of. Naruto is such a sweetheart, understanding and comforting Sasuke when he's the one that should be comforted. It's always the case, isn't it? That's why he's Naruto, though, and I love him to pieces. Thanks for doing his character justice, I'm fed up of the way he's often portrayed, of the authors who miss the point completely and are blinded by their own need to bastardize the character and tell an angsty story that doesn't belong in the Naruto category. It's funny you should achieve it in an AU fic!

    I think that's the mark of a good writer, though, to be able to write the characters true to themselves in different settings (and even in a shounen-ai story, because as much as I like it, I appreciate Naru is dead straight :D), and to weave any other characters into their plot and bring them to life as well. Which brings me to Ran by the way. I really like what you have done with her character and it's good to see the relationship that's slowly forming between her and Naruto.

    Even though they have now broken up it was still very realistic and emotional, I'm truly hurting after reading. Hey, I even had to go and lie down for a bit, then I came back to the computer to review. Silly, isn't it? I honestly am not very sure of where you are taking things from here on out, and I wonder if we are nearing the bitter end, or are just in another loop life throws in their path. I wish it'd never finish! I love your fic to pieces, it's one of the best I've read in quite a while.

    Again, I could ramble for hours, but I think I'll stop now. Never quit writing and best of luck with the next instalment in this wonderful series, I await the next update eagerly.


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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on March 12, 2005
    aww, darn. darn, darn. (cries) this is so sad. stupid sasuke! darn baka!
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  • From ANON - darkangel on March 12, 2005
    *sob* dazz so sweet *sob* please update soon.i really want to find out wat happened. hopefully, dis is one of those stories with a happy ending
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  • From ANON - Shizuou on March 12, 2005
    Woohoo yus! New chapter
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on March 12, 2005
    (Ch. 29)
    Hard chapter, I liked the ending's ironic undertone.

    Hope your not coming to a close, just yet. I'm looking forward to a happy ending. And that WAS a threat. ^.~

    Until la next,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - lostlily on March 12, 2005
    hmm...so will you have itachi hire naruto or something? that would be interesting...or is too cliche?
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  • From ANON - angel ran on March 12, 2005
    aww....;__;....now i can't be so mad at Sasuke either....=__= sigh.
    *sniff*...=( that was really sad...aaar, you are so good at writing!! Cause i am definitely feeling as though i'm being pulled along on their emotional rollarcoaster and it leaves this sad feeling in the pit of my stomach X__X noooo sasuke-kuuun, don't do it!! O_O can't help but also have this terrible sense of forboding..gah...he'd better stay outta trouble at the new school! But, yeah, I like how Naruto is getting to be friends with Ran!! So sweet :') hee!! But definitely my favourite bittersweet part was when Naruto was realizing that Sasuke wanted to let go...i guess it's his life...;__; but..narutooo nooo!!
    *goes off to sniffle over the new chapter*
    Great new chappie though O__O...so sad...gaah...dunno what to think ;___;
    *cries*
    Hope things will somehow work out....? ^^ good luck on the next chapteeer!
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  • From ANON - dead uchiha on March 12, 2005
    AAAAHHHHHH!!! i just love this story sooo much!!! It's so friggin' sweet and angsty!!!! It's absolutly beautiful!!!! can't wait to see how it all turns out!!!! BTW this was, i think, one of the first stories i ever read on this site!!! Keep up the excellent work!!
    oh yeah, i loved the part with Jiraiya last time....that was cool.
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  • From ANON - Argento on March 12, 2005
    ;.; You ebil, ebil person.

    Write moooooore. ;.;
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on March 12, 2005
    Oh man. While i hate Naruto's cousin a little less than earlier, I still feel really bad for Naruto.

    Also, that school isn't going to be that good for Sasuke. Orochimaru is bad news.

    Update as soon as you can! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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