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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - atashi dake on March 17, 2005
    aw...that's what love is ;D although... hmmm, itachi being a good brother now? ayashi... hahaha =p i really enjoy your story!!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on March 17, 2005
    Does this mean Itachi is really a good guy? UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Broken Raven on March 17, 2005
    I hope you know, thinking about the end of this chapter is going to have me smiling like a idiot for no apparent reason for about a week or two.
    ::glomps you::
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  • From ANON - caro8 on March 17, 2005
    Chapter 30


    Wow.....oh god wow. The chapter started out making me think that maybe Sasuke would leave and there would be more angst. They way they said good bye to each other was amazing. Then with Itachi showing up and Naruto going to the train station......so romantic. Now all I have to wait for is Itachi's reasoning, Naruto's confession and hopefully no more Orochimaru. That guy is creepy.

    But overall this was an awesome chapter, and I love this fic.
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  • From ANON - ravyn on March 17, 2005
    Hehe...i can just imagine naruto cracking up when he saw itachi get a ticket. That made me laugh. Good chapter by the way. There together again. YAY!!!. update soon i want to see what happens
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  • From ANON - momoko on March 17, 2005
    Random fan that has been stalking this fanfic ever since the very first chapter came out...and boy am I glad to have stayed with this fanfic!! *fangirl squeal* I LOVED this chapter to bits....I nearly cried while reading it! (I'm serious! *looks embarresed* ^^;;; ) And it's....it's Utada Hikaru's "Dareka no Negai ga Kanau Koro"!! *squeals some more* GODS, the way you tied in the lyrics....*melts* I've fallen in love with this fanfic all over again...*dies happily* *coughs* Anyway, keep up the good work you!! I shall forever worship you! *starts worshipping*
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  • From ANON - Hyang on March 17, 2005
    YES! finally! (does a happy dance) i would have been sad if sasuke had to go to orochimaru again... please dont make this a dream!! please oh please!! *prays*
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  • From ANON - t3h_3vil on March 15, 2005
    I'm usually to lazy to review....
    But you're a GODDESS.
    You hear me? I mean...WOW....
    When I reached the last chapter, it was chapter 27 back then... I felt the world slipping from under my feet...
    Now when I saw that it was updated, my chest almost exploded! (the good, feely-poetic way... Not the blood and gore one...)

    Thanks so much! Hanyaaaaaaaaaan!!! =^_^=
    I really LOVE your fic!
    I won't ask for a quick update coz I know how slippery and valuable time is...
    But you know I want one. Badly...

    Love

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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on March 14, 2005
    Wow......I.....ummm.......have no idea what to say........... ^^;; Okay, I'll start with thanking you for updating.....so, thank you!!! ^___~ I absolutely love this fic, but I have to say that it is turning out quite differently than I expected. First of all, it's long. Which is good...and yet...bad at the same time.....yeah. ^^;; Good in that I get to enjoy the story for a long time and it is so detailed and well thought out, and bad in that I'm going to college in a few months and have to wait for you to update chapter by chapter (and thus tend to forget what happened earlier on.) Second, as wonderful as this fic has been, it's gotten really sad. Which is also good and bad. (lol) ^___~ Good in that it makes the fic very realalistic and touching, and bad in that I have gone through so many tissues and have a headache after reading the (last few) chapters. And third....ummm.....actually, nevermind, I just lost my train of thought......heh..... ^^;; Anyway, I can't wait to find out where you take this, so keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Thanks again!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon^^ on March 14, 2005
    Oh wow that is so sad. I feel tears coming soon. I hope in the end everything turns out ok(as in Naruto and Sasuke get back together and Sasuke realizes that having friends, and love is more important then beating his brother). I always thought Orochimaru was freaky like that by the way(I didn't review after that chapter so I'm saying it here). I was just wondering if maybe you might talk about their other friends soon because I'm kind of interested in how the relationships will work out. I'm still really sad about Naruto and Sasuke, and I hope Jiraiya plays a bigger part, maybe helping Sasuke figure out his feelings this time? Or maybe that should be Kakashi. I don't know, your the author with a plan so go ahead and update whenever you want to! I'm sure we are all eagerly waiting. Oh, and good grammar, not any major spelling mistakes that I could see, or remember now so kutos to you. Ciao!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on March 14, 2005
    That was so sad! but the ending was cute! waisting an eyelash tee hee. great chapter! thank you for updating! and update faster next time! i miss this fic so much when your not posting fast enough!
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  • From ANON - Emina on March 14, 2005
    That whole 'blow an eyelash and make a wish' thing, I do that ^^

    With eyelashes and those fluffy, floating seeds, they looks more like dandiloin seeds, but they're bigger.

    This chapter was, as usual, amazing.

    Emotions, details, characteraztion, you write them all nicely.

    -Emina
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  • From ANON - roundstic on March 13, 2005
    i cried. i LOVE this fic. its awesome. keep writing!
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  • From ANON - clarechan on March 13, 2005
    *contented sigh* Thank you! Thank you! *more contented sighs* I needed a little break from all the angst. I think I can handle more angst now...not that I'm requesting it--I'm just saying...Anyway, I also wanted to compliment you on the style of writing that you used through the first half of this chapter--it reflected really well how time sometimes feels like you're standing in a river of people, places, things and you're the only one not moving until you realize that you are. I really got that feeling from the first half. Very nice! Ok. Back to work! I'm excited for a new chappie!!! *glomps and encouragements*
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  • From ANON - kasumi on March 13, 2005
    I love this story! I see that this story is becoming similar to the anime/manga, such as Sasuke leaving Naruto to go to Orochimaru. :] I love the awesome turn of events! I can't wait until the next installment! :D
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