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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - maskoftime on May 12, 2005
    YAY I LOVE YOUR STORY! You really are a wounderful writter. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on May 11, 2005
    (Ch. 31)
    Waiting for an update from you is always so well worth it. Long, well-written and cared-for chapters; such love for writing... uch talent... I want to bear your children.XP

    Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is hitting a point where *telling* others, making it obvious, can, and maybe *should*, come to play, and I wonder - will you tackle it, or will that issue continue in our heads? Whatever the answer may be, I hope the end of this story is far to come. ^_^ For my own guilty pleasure, of course. XDD

    Itachi was pleasent, Sasuke and Naruto's fuck dirty and delicious; this was one hoot of a chapter. Sasuke's father's female "date" grossed me out. Kill her, please. ^.~

    I want to see more, and *soon*.
    I miss your more frequent updates.

    Until then,
    Ja ne~

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  • From ANON - Nissie on May 11, 2005
    Ooh, I'm so happy you updated! This fic... It's seriously my favourite ever! I'm curious as to how many chapters you plan on making? Well, I hope you have many more ideas so that you can continue this fic for a long time ^_^ I looove it! Anyway, this chapter was fantastic, I really like how Itachi is changing into a more... well, human form. Sasuke's father is a bad man -_- I don't like him one bit! And I feel sorry for his mom! Ever since the beginning of this story she has been 'there', although not as much as a normal mother... Well, I hope you will update sometime soon, but even if you will take a long while, I'll wait ^_^ This fic is definitely worth waiting for!
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  • From ANON - dAni3Lr on May 11, 2005
    mou mou MOU!!! i've waited SO LONG for this chapter to come out!!! i'm SO GLAD that Sasuke stayed behind with Naruto.. n perhaps the two brothers have decided to patch up their relationship too? hopefully Itachi won't do anything to hurt Sasuke anymore T^T LOL~* Itachi might have guessed what sasuke n naruto had done to his car by now *snickers* =D and Itachi's usual act of poking sasuke with his two fingers had been somewhat nostalgic to me.. cuz i've been reading the real thing and i noe it ain't gonna happen anytime soon. T^T nonetheless this fic has cheered me up greatly!! sasuke and naruto forever!!! m/
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  • From ANON - meow2x on May 11, 2005
    WoW...

    a new chapter..and a very sweet chapter..i think this is a treat for all sasunaru fans out there who is being depressed with what is happening now...i hope you'll continue them being together,and happy..

    you have done a good job again. Ms. BA .. i hope you'll continue writting more..

    *hugs*
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  • From ANON - macy on May 11, 2005
    Oh my, i love this chapter!! so many "awww" moments. Itachi's so cool. Hehehe. And Sasuke and Naruto's kinky sex venues are great too (not to mention the lemon and lime offered were hawt!). Heee...Itachi may want to get his car thoroughly cleaned after that, LOL.

    BTW, happy anniversary!!! I thought I was seeing double when I saw the dates of this fic. It's so cute that you updated this fic exactly one year after the 1st chapter was posted!!! I'm so happy that this fic's still ongoing. I can't have enough of it! Thanks for writing such an awesome fic.
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on May 11, 2005
    Another great chapter! Ooooh doin it in Itachi's car. Loved it. Continue with the awesome work. Can't wait for the next update. Ja!
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  • From ANON - lo on May 11, 2005
    That chapter was sweet and hot. I loved that first scene where they were playing tic tac to, that was just beautifull. You are so talented, your writing is just so alive, it is...uh...hmmm. Well you rock!! keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ROGUEFURY on May 10, 2005
    I can only come up with one word to describe how awesome this chapter was: "NAAAAAAAAAAAAWTIEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!"

    DON'T TAKE SO LONG TO REVIEW, WOMAN! >=o~

    LATER.ROGUEFURY
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2005
    YOU'RE BACK!!! I missed you!!

    Anyway, awesome chapter. The beginning I was a bit confused until I realized they were playing tic-tac-toe. Cute! I like how you didn't make Itachi a total bastard, why I like that, I don't know. As always I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. Oh and congrats for winning over at TONFA!
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  • From ANON - rhichan on May 10, 2005
    Omg this chapter is awsome!! Sex..in Itachi's car!
    Omfg thats great! I cant wait for your next chapter,
    I hope its not that long of a wait as the last one was!
    Ok ok See ya then
    xo rhi xox
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  • From ANON - LtF on May 10, 2005
    That's so sweet!! o< And.. fufufuf >///< Sasunaru all the way XDDD Glad you're still updating; I know it takes a long time to get a chapter going and edited and written and all that crap! Keep up the good work (as always, your writing is fantastic, superb, brilliant, blah blah blah *dies* )!
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  • From ANON - Sukara on May 10, 2005
    CRIPES!!! I read the whole thing!!! ...well.....I stopped at chatper seven, then started again only to end at 25, then few months later here I am ^_^ xDI was too sad to see what would happen int hose bad times ;-; It makes me...and cry...I hope...Naruto or Sasuke don't die....Sasuke's parents die though..Dun care about htem xD Stupud bastards!! xD
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on May 10, 2005
    man your good, and its about damn time you updated. I was wondering if you ever would again.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on May 10, 2005
    Aawww!!! That was sooooo sweet!!! *melodramatic sniffle* I simply adored this chapter -- absolutely wonderful!!! ^___^ Thank you so much for updating!!! I absolutely love this fic -- it has -everything- in it, and is beautifully written. And I'm so pleased with the way you have chosen to potray the characters and their relationships, expecially the ones between Sasuke, Naruto, and Itachi. It's great how you have them interact, and the fact that you have Sasuke and Naruto back together just rocks my world!!! *overly pleased grin* That, and I like the fact that you seem to be "fixing" the relationship between the two brothers. Very good idea!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!
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