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Reviews for Spiral Falling

By : BeccaAmon
  • From ANON - Sukara on June 24, 2005
    Tweet!!! =D SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDD!!!! My tears that made me end up with headaches because of this story is worth it!! I can't wait for your furture storys!! Just no charater deaths please. xD
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  • From ANON - Stranj100 on June 24, 2005
    I'm sorry the long and winding journey has come to an end. It was certainly one hell of a trip and I had alot of fun. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Jinniku on June 24, 2005
    Naaaa, I hate writing reviews. I try to avoid it normally - but I just HAVE to write you something.

    Maybe it's the fact that this fic is now finished, or maybe it's just the talent that's made me green to the gills I don't have - whatever it is, I feel compelled. I've always wanted to feel compelled to do something other than pull on the shoestrings of unsuspecting little brothers, it's nice!
    ANYWHOO!
    Awesome fic. Loved every bit of it. I got sad when Naruto was sad, angry when Sasuke was a bitch and laughed when Sakura and Ino got their little sideshow. In other words, awesomelycoolfantastic. I hope to be further inspired by your writing in the future. Keep up the fantabulous talent!! ^_^

    Thanks for the fantabulous read,
    Jinniku.
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  • From ANON - Atlantis Forester on June 17, 2005
    Beautiful story - I love it! It's funny and sweet, but sad at the same time. ^_^ Basically, there's a lot of emotion in this; and thank god, it isn't the annoying kind. This is definitely a favorite of mine! Update soon!

    ~Lanti~
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on June 15, 2005
    damn, been awhile since i've been able to read, and, yay!! had a chapter here waiting for me!! *does happy dance* this was such a sweet/steamy chapter, naru and sasu seem to be getting even closer... now will they start to be more open with each other about things? i hope so.... and lotsa lemony goodness to make up for all their time apart ^_______^ veeery niiice!!!! and in itachi's car!! omgoddess, was he there the WHOLE TIME?????? hmmm.... i wonder what's really going on with itachi anyway? what are his intentions? what the hell's he doing? and what's orochimaru gonna do now that sasuke didn't go to the school??? ai yi yi, still so much that you could be planning, i can't wait for more!!! anyway, awesome chapter as always, hope you update again soon! it's been over a month *cries* :p ja, lg
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  • From ANON - rhichan on June 02, 2005
    ARGGHHH!!!! Ms. BeccaAmon!! WHen are you
    going to update!!! We the readers.... waiting...
    so long for loved chapter... *starts crying*
    Amagad please hurry the update!
    Need New CHAPTER O..O
    *freaks out* I've read the other
    chapters...god knows how many times,
    anticipating a new one chap! Omgg
    Please update ;_;
    LOYAL OBSESSED READER HERE!
    xo rhichan xo
    -insert 423957 hearts-
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  • From ANON - Puppyslut on May 26, 2005
    Wooo! Bravo!


    I generally don't make it through multichapter fics, but this one held my interest.
    Bravo.
    Though, I had sex in a car like that once, and had significantly more trouble with the stickshift.
    XD!
    Bravo, Again.

    -Pupslut.-
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  • From ANON - ReiArubiru on May 23, 2005
    This is one of the most amazing fanfictions I've erad in a long time. I usually don't like reading stuff on AFF.net- but this story is just too wonderfully written to pass up! The plot line kept me trembling- If i wasn't so distracted while reading it (Stupid homework and pursuing mothers) I would've cried- more than once. The plot up until two chapters ago was just as intense as the real manga- and that stupid thing made me want to throm my computor across the room. Once again, Amazing story! Wonderful plot!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 15, 2005
    I forgot to add the best of all in this series is all the kissing,neck munching and support/affection they give eah other,it is totally right,non sugery and plain facinating.I never get bored of this balence between raunch and high standard.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 15, 2005
    I sence a new energy in this,you do not disapoint.I love the sympathy between the boys and that odd moment where Itachi felt like Naruto,Itachi stayed soft and sasuke has no bad sexual memories (or good) of Itachi ..yet.. so I got a good feeling for the future of sasuke's connection with Naruto at least.His father sounds gross,no wonder Itachi left.It would be nice to see what Itachi does in this reality with himself..a side fic or PWP or a whole story,it is satisfying to care for your characters.Thank you so much.I look forward to reading more about this relationship esp. the sex,you do rimming and other "real" stuff,its a turn on..fisting or spanking anyone? I loved the car sex to say the least...
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  • From ANON - jazzy on May 15, 2005
    Very much the best still very hot and thick with emotion I love it. You write this story very well. Can't wait to see what more you're going to write about.
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  • From PeRiDoTs13 on May 14, 2005
    Chapter 29 was really cute. I liked it a lot. I really hope that Itachi and Sasuke will get closer in the future, and as they seem to be on their way, I think I'm gonna get my wish. I love their relationship so much. Not Uchiha-cest wise, but brotherly love wise. My favorite relationship in the series.

    I hope Itachi does something to pay Sasuke and Naruto back. I'd love it. Would probably laugh my ass off. XD
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  • From ANON - Hyang on May 14, 2005
    hey! awesome chapter! ive been waiting for it and i have to say that i'm very pleased XD
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  • From ANON - mitsune on May 14, 2005
    this story is so romantic(shudders) its not that i dont like it, love it actually, wonder what would happen next i mean orochimaru must have been pissed right?, and gaara and his siblings havent showed up yet... well they are gonna show up right? shino and kiba? well ill leave them as that, i hope that there would be a sasunarugaar part on the next chapter, i really like that love triangle, well this is a great fic, just that the plots a little mild, put a lot more action on it, like the sng i was talkin bout, and i guess itll really pick up, great job with the lemons by the way, gambatte on the next chapter update soon ne? ^_^.
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  • From ANON - u are evil- from: girl #03 on May 12, 2005
    OMFG OMFG I HATE YOU SO MUCH! U FRUSTRATE ME U EVIL AUTHOR! WHY DID U MAKE THIS FIC!!! I SPENT HOURS READING THIS WITH PATIENCE AND FINALLY WHEN THE PROBLEMS START OFF- IT LEAVES NARUTO SEEMING ALL INNOCENT AND YOU DONT EVEN HAVE THE DECENCY TO MAKE SASUKE COME BACK BEGGGGINGG! (emphesis on begging) DO YOU KNOW HOW SLOW I READ AND HOW MUCH I WAS DYING TO SEE SASUKE SUFFER!!!!!!! GOD I HATE YOUUUU I HATE YOUUU SOOOO MUCHHHHH .. *roars* *cries* *dies* EVIL BASTURDDDDDDDDDD *slaps you with a spatula* DIEEEE DIEEE DIEEEEEEE.. well make sure u make sasuke beg SOMETIME in the story or else u will lose ur currently #2 fan. THATS RIGHT #2!!!!! u know why i'm not #1???? becuz u DISAPPOINTED ME!!! *slaps you*

    2 hours later : me in a calmer state:
    well overall its kept my heart pounding and you did a real nice job. i actually got TIRED of the intense... *couth* loving :D u put so much in and at random times too.. i was like wtf >.>;; teehehee but its been awhile since i was realli into the actual plot instead of all the intense hot stuff.. so thumbs up on that.. but the only thing i was realy disappointed in (i noted up there) is how sasuke is soo MEAN (that basturd) to naruto and he gets away with it by simply showing up at his doorstep. that really annoys me cuz in all the storys i read - this happens and it completely spoils it for me. but im willing to stick to ur story to the end! cuz i'm oh so incredibly nice and in love with this story. yes i blabber and i talk alot and i just cant seem to shut up.. forgive me! good bye my love(r)

    -from: girl #03
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