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Reviews for Before, Then, Now

By : Pesha
  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2014
    You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

    CASE ONE -
    Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

    CASE TWO -
    Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

    CASE THREE -
    Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

    Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

    We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

    NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

    1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

    5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

    15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
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  • From Mizzroja on April 22, 2009
    Very nice!!!!
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  • From Vague on April 22, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=13. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From Lici on February 28, 2007
    OMGoodness.....

    hat was HOT and SEXY and you are my HERO!
    Please add another chapter! Please! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Allys on September 20, 2006
    Wow... that's just beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on August 17, 2006
    Oh, god! That was absolutely beautiful! You really understood the characters! I literally felt like I was reading ~their~ thoughts and emotions! The transitions were not only smooth, but elegant in its deliverance! The 'Then' and 'Now' concept wasn't overdone but clever. I just absolutely loved it! Aside from one or two sentences that needed minor tweaking, I thought it was really well written! The only thing that could have made it better was turning this into a prologue and writing a chapter story with dialogue, so we can see their 'coming of age' unfold cinematically! (**hint hint**) ;p Seriously, though, great job!
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  • From nocturne on February 08, 2006
    oh, this story is wonderful. ::huggles:: I luff it! the emphasis on smell and scent and the sense of a pack (or the hive, in shino's case ^^;;), which, after all, is so important to both of them, makes the story absolutely beautiful. ^---^
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  • From ANON - shawna on January 22, 2006
    hot. i liked it . good stuff this paring is hot
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  • From ANON - Queen of Frogs on September 30, 2005
    Aww. Sweet and dirty, just how I like it.

    I especially liked your particular Inuzuka dog/Aburame bug analogies. How there were parallels, one side for each boy. It was a great read.

    Plus, KibaShino is one of my most favorite and underappreciated pairings.~
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  • From ANON - KatReusaki on July 20, 2005
    Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - suzu on July 12, 2005
    This was a great read! You did a wonderful job of explaining and using their respective oddities to make the pairing work, and it was *hot*, too. This is the first Shino lemon I've read; not because the idea squicks me so much as I'm afraid I'll be traumatized by what some random fangirl might do with his bugs during a lemon. ^_^; But you were on a rec list of someones whose fics I liked, so I figured you were safe.

    Thanks for the fic!
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  • From ANON - yagi-san on July 07, 2005
    I believe I've read this before, but I forgot to review. This is a really cool fic. I really like how you write the boys. And you wrote a good uke!Kiba. XD I also liked all the references to Kiba's pack and Shino's kikachuu. Overall, this is an awesome fic. I'll have to go look at your other fics! ^.^
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  • From ANON - velutlunas on May 23, 2005
    I have no idea how I missed this.

    Wow, thank you. My favorite boys done so well by you! Just yea... *happy sigh* There needs to be more kibashino in the world, but only if it's good.

    It takes talent to put Kiba on the bottom and not make him a whiny uke. Thanks!

    Meagn
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  • From ANON - ChibiFerretGod on August 31, 2004
    I loved this story. Kiba's no doubt my favorite character. Great smut... ^_~ Nice new pairing... I'd love to see more like these along the way. You're a great writer. Keep it up!


    ~~Teh Chibi Ferret God
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  • From ANON - Niiki on July 31, 2004
    This is an amazing story. I really enjoyed the before, then, and now parts and how you delved into the personality and minds of the characters and the way they were similar yet different at the same time. Great work!
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