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Reviews for The Proud Green Bet

By : Gaby
  • From BreathingInTheSoundOfYourLies on January 09, 2009
    Aha^^ this is awesome. I'll write you a Tsunade Pr0n fic, hold the Icky, if You'll review my stories in exchange. I'm in the process of moving them over right now. Most of them can be found on Fanfiction . net under my pen name Biotomegami Lyanvis. or on ficwad under the penname Lyanvis. I'll review again when I have the Tsunade fic written.
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  • From bgreenwivy on June 10, 2008
    Oh my word! This was too funny. The ending was fantastic. It seems to give a wink and a nudge at Tsunade's abilities while giving a slight tilt to the thought that maybe Tsunade was Gai's special someone all along. Great job!
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  • From FireSpark on January 28, 2007
    Test test
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  • From ANON - Ritsu on November 07, 2005
    Am I completely crazy or was there at one point a chapter in which Gai screams out Lee's name? It seems to be missing...

    Still a great work, though. Good job keeping Gai in character!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2005
    funny :)
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  • From ANON - Archeeka on April 06, 2005
    Um.... not sure why, but.... half of chapter 5 is missing. It stops when Tsunade orgasms from Gai's Extreme Cunnilotus.
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  • From ANON - kaligoddess on March 16, 2005
    I just about died laughing at this, but definitely in a good way. Way to go!
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  • From ANON - Alivida on February 12, 2005
    That was hysterical. I loved when Gai's tongue was expiring and he was making bets with himself on what he would have to do if it failed before Tsunade finished. And they both had a good time and that's what's important.
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  • From ANON - black on January 16, 2005
    Almost went down to her hips? BWAHAHAHAHAHAH..Saggy boobies..Bwahahah
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  • From ANON - j0e on November 10, 2004
    hahah tha that was some funny porn!!!

    "gai!"

    "tsunade-sama!"

    "GAI!"

    "LEE!"

    "what hte fuck!?!?"


    haha that was hilarious...
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  • From ANON - RFEC43 on September 17, 2004
    The best Naruto piece I've read on aff.net! Well written, great plot, hilarious. I'm in awe--fantastic.


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  • From ANON - DigitalSiren (too lazy to log in) on July 29, 2004
    LMAO!! That was fucking GREAT. Wow! With your permission, I'd like to archive that on my Naruto lemon site.

    http://dancing-blade.org/citrus
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  • From ANON - Ziri Okamiotoko on July 25, 2004
    You are an inspiration! *sparkles and fist clenching* Seriously, though, that was hilariously wonderful, and I blame you for the picture of female Gai-sensei that I drew today. Awesome stuff, and I'll remember what you said when I get to finally meet Tsunade in the manga. X3
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 15, 2004
    that was surprisingly hot, satisfying, and quite funny ^__^. You took a normally implausible and managed to make them "work" together so well.... it was quite magnificently written, especially when detailing how they both felt during those scenes. Definitely good.
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  • From ANON - Sporfle on May 03, 2004
    I laughed so hard, it hurt. :) Truly, this is a work of comedic genius the likes of which the world may never see again. (That, uh, may be a good thing. ^_-)
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