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Reviews for Acknowledgement

By : trutenor

From ANON - Orean Gunshin on June 17, 2004
Hate to rush you, but your work has me hooked. I hope that you finish this piece.
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From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2004
Yay! I think this is one of the better fan fics I've seen for this couple in a long time! It's very refreshing to read a non yaoi for once. I really don't get the fasination with m/m parings, and I love Hinata Naruto as a couple! I even like otheother parings in the fic. Update soon!
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From ANON - Leo on June 03, 2004
And in this chapter, more plot, while still keeping the hinanaru romance. It's so amazing! Please don't stop! Don't! NOOOOO!! .... .> *quietly backs out of the room*
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From ANON - Leo on June 03, 2004
Ok, first of all, I have to say, you are so right. I was really annoyed with seeing nothing but sasunaru as far as the eye could see. It sucks wading through the sea of yaoi when you're looking for things like sasusaku, or sakunaru or hinanaru.

Next, I want to say that your writing skill is awesome. Quite inspirational man, thanks for that.

Next, I love your fic so far, write more soon -please!!- I think I see hints of a deep plot, do I?

Finally, thanks to you, I'll be looking for more hinanaru fiction. And maybe I'll try making one.
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From ANON - Orean Gunshin on May 21, 2004
Awesome. I'm a bit of a a sap for accurate portrayals of character. I like how you have done the romance and kept the spoilers minimal. Keep up the good work so I can keep reading it.
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From ANON - nonoame on May 20, 2004
oh this is gooood!!! please update quickly, i like the plot and everything though the part about how kakashi-sensei was talking about naruto wanting acknowledgement from sasuke almost seems like you're implying this is a yaoi. IT BETTER NOT BE!! cos i LOVE naruto and hinata stories... i think you're doing a great job with this story, and i hope that in your next chapter, se ane and the rest of the people unintentionally finds out about kyubi being sealed in naruto's body and how they all feel super guilty for not trying to understand him more and stuff... yeah and that they find out about naruto and hinata going together..... oh yeah, and how about the closet pervert during a training duel, tries to make a move and hinata just to make naruto lose his temper and concentration, causing him to get beaten. so closet pervert can lecture him about how it could bring about his downfall during his battles......
GREAT STORY SO FAR!!! keep up the good work.. by the way, do bite marks have a lump??? neither do love bites. do u think u could somehow explain it? thanks for listening to my ranting haha
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From ANON - Xoni Newcomer on May 13, 2004
A very good and interesting story. The first chapter wasn't half bad, but it's in the second one where things take a turn for the waaay better. I liked your original choice of Ebisu for teaching Naruto and Hinata.
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From ANON - mr_1ce on May 12, 2004
UPDATE SOON~!
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From ANON - zelix on May 10, 2004
i hope to read more soon! This fic is so awesome! I mean it, it is SO good!
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From ANON - The Schiz is too lazy to log in on May 04, 2004
I'm a Yaoi fangirl at heart but I love NaruHina pairings. Hi's 's just so cute and putting her with Naruto is even cuter. Out of all the het pairings in Naruto that one is my favorite. Very nicely written fic. i"m glad I took the time to read it.
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From ANON - brother of the gods on April 29, 2004
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From on April 13, 2004
Sweet story, realy loved it! I have to say Naruto/Hinata is the best Naruto paring.
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From ANON - dragonflyelj on April 06, 2004
Wow, that story packed alot of whallop! a wide range of emotions, and you managed to do it in one chapter. Really all in all this was a really good story, I will be checking to see if you have more stories posted.
Fly
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From ANON - bookeater on April 05, 2004
I have only one thing to say: thank you! I'm a Naru/Hina fan to and I starting to think that everbody have forgoten about hinata. Cut it out with Naru/Saku crap! And all the others authors who do Naru/Hina take age to update their story! So I hope you will update really soon use use I think your story is great and you can go for at least 15 chapters with a good start like that. I like long story with detail like you do and also some action beteween Naruto and Hinata ^_^( a lot of fluff and adult action) . And just one comment: Even if Hinata begin to change you should let her still a littel shy in the way she speak. I mean when she's lost for word like : hum... ano Na..Na..Naruto-kun. See ya. Up date soon( please I dont have any story to read la and and I becoming crasy)
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From ANON - ??? on April 05, 2004
YAY! *Applauds* That was wonderful! I really enjoyed your story! Please tell me this isn't a one-shot, because I wanna see more, what might happen next! I gotta know!
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