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Reviews for Acknowledgement

By : trutenor
  • From ANON - Church on December 21, 2005
    DEAR LOR YES FINALLY UPDATED BUT GOOD CANT WAIT TILL U UPDATE AGN!!!!
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  • From ANON - Parapsychic Psycho on December 19, 2005
    My God. When the hell are you going to update?! You're taking too long dammit!!
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  • From ANON - Church on August 08, 2005
    DUDE OMG IM IN LOVE WITH THIS FIC WOOT OMG ITS GOT EVERYTHING A GOOD STORY COULD ASK FOR WOOT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on June 24, 2005
    I've really enjoyed these last 2 chapters. hehe I would think that Hinata and Naruto would work very well togwther.
    At least being on the same team allows the two young lovers time together.
    I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on June 24, 2005
    Good first chapter, but some spelling mistakes are stopping it from being a great chapter=
    >>Naruto saw the swing that at oat on when he had failed his ninja academy exam for the third time in a row.
    In return, Sakura would constantly insult Naruto and treat him bad, even gh Ngh Naruto cared about Sakura like she was a goddess.
    >you say yoard ard everything...
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  • From ANON - Chrono on June 23, 2005
    Update faster damn it!! If you ever go this long again, I'll hunt you down and force you to eat your computer!!
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  • From ANON - Redsliver on June 23, 2005
    You are an excellent writer, and the site needs more NaruHina fics, so update soon. One thing I'd like to mention though, is using two instead of 2, it just looks better and keeping away from alphanumeric will help your story flow better. Numbers under one hundred should be written, (also million, thousand, billion etc. simple numbers like that), and two is only three letters. Anyway I want Hinata combine the 128 strikes of divinity with Kage Bushin and create the 1024 strikes of divinity!
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on June 23, 2005
    Very interesting. It's the first time I see Ebisu treated as a serious character, and the result is quite nice. Also, I like the test mission from Kakashi. Very complex. It suits an Anbu team. I hope you can pull it off right.

    On the bad side, it's difficult to believe that they trust Sasuke this much after what he did.
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  • From ANON - armed and dangerous on June 23, 2005
    I have to admit, it was a pretty good story. That is, until after the part where Hinata confessed her feelings to Naruto. It just went much too fast. Knowing Naruto, he would have cried after such admission from another person. Remember the first chapter/episode? That's how I would expect him to react. Not some suddenly lustful teenager (though he is one in this fic, a teenager that is). And Hinata, she also wouldn't do something like that so soon, not with the upbringing she had. They just suddenly went OOC.
    Another problem you had was your usage of numbers. Whenever you're refering to an amount, say the number of people in a room, you're supposed to spell out the number. Instead of "There were only 3 people that understood his pain," you should say, "There were only three people that understood his pain."
    Also, there is only one person that truly understands Naruto's pain. Because he is also a jinchuuriki, Gaara knows very well what it is like to be treated like a monster. Iruka's understanding only goes as far as knowing what it feels to not have the love of a parent while growing up. Tsunade doesn't know his pain at all, because she has suffered through a different type of loss. The 3rd, while he knew how Naruto felt, couldn't truly understand it, even though he went to great lengths to do so. He was one of the only people in the village who truly cared for Naruto and his well-being.
    Seriously, try to keep everyone in character. I don't really care what other people say about this last comment, but, this story certainly doesn't deserve the five star rating that it has gotten. There are much better stories out there that do.
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  • From ParapsychicPsycho on June 14, 2005

    I just wanted to say that this is indeed one of the best Naruto fics out there. I am a HUGE NaruHina fan, and this has to be one of my all-time favorite NaruHina fic. You've got the cast's characteristics 100% perfect and a damn good original plotline. I really love the pairings you added in your fiction (It's not every day you get to read a fic with a ShikaIno pairing). But I've also noticed that this fic hasn't been updated for around a year. Please don't give up on it. Me and the other writers of both FF and AFF would extremely appreciate you to continue 'Acknowledgement'. Please e-mail me back for your response.

    - Hopefully waiting, Parapsychic Psycho

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  • From ANON - GoldstormKaos on May 25, 2005
    Want more... Hinata and Naruto are so cute together, and Hinata is SO much cuter than that ugly forehead girl...
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  • From ANON - naruto-fanfic on May 11, 2005
    this is a good story.
    some spelling mistakes but the story is good.
    some advice: try to slow down in your typing it will help your key acuracy and you wont be jumbleing your letters up as much. other than that it is a good story.
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  • From ANON - Crossbow Trueshot on March 11, 2005
    Bravo Bravo..

    After drudging through miles and miles of yaoi, no offense to people who like it, I finally found a hina/naru fic

    and boy did i find a doozy, keep up the good work man!

    -The ever faithful Crossbow 'Ero' Trueshot
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  • From ANON - Luna on November 03, 2004
    These two chapters would have been perfect except for one major flaw. Sasuke. Do you really think, right after coming back, excuse me, brought batheythey would let him train to be an ANBU? Leaving a village is treated very seriously in the world of Naruto. Hunter-nins would immediatly go after the nin leaving and be executed on spot (Something like that) . Now Tsunade reasoning was realistic, his judgement might have been affected by the seal, but still. You dont just go give someone , whos loyaltly is still questionable, state of mind questionable, the right to be an elite ninja.
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  • From ANON - Thundercat on July 30, 2004
    This very good. I have been looking for Nurato+ Hinata fics all day. Your fic is very touching. I cried for them.
    Words can not express how this fic made me feel. I rate your fic a PERFECT 10!!!!!!!! :)
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