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Reviews for Marked By Jutsu

By : Iori
  • From idlewrath on August 27, 2011
    I just want to thank you for writing this story, and even more for coming back to it. I love it so much! The flow of the story is perfect and you don't shove characters into situations, it feels natural as if it's really happening. I guess I'm trying to say that it feels real and not faked and forced. Your writing makes this story amazing and I love that you span from before the band formed to their stardom days. I cannot get enough of this fic! Thanks for being awesome!
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  • From GudenMulle on May 26, 2010
    I am THRILLED, no-no, OVERJOYED! that you have continued this fic ^_^. It is absolutely fantastic, and I love how the future Neji is a bit less of a stuck up, and Gaara's naïvitee is just so CUTE!. Naruto.. it irks me that Sasuke is constantlyt calling him a slut and a whore, I want to hit him.. And Naruto needs more self-control, but hey, he's Naruto, what could you expect.. xD. I hope you decide to write more, because I'm anxious to know who they want to replace Sasuke. Will you be bringing Kiba back in the mix too? Oooohhh, and the doctor, is that Tsunade? :P. I LOVE the songs that you have them sing, make the fic like, 10 times better ;). I'm a bit too enthusiastic right now.. XD.
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  • From missbri88 on May 25, 2010
    Wow... Just wooooow. I'm new to this fic and I must say amazing. I love the AR and it ties to the 'past'. I would love to see more and I hope your muse sticks around. Until next time.
    Ja!
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  • From MasterofPie on January 16, 2008
    yay a lemon sence!!
    I thought the strange girl was Sakura ... damn stalker lol
    Yay for Neji and Naruto together ^__^
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  • From MasterofPie on January 16, 2008
    i have been enjoying your fic greatly! Though i read the lemon between Neji and Naruto first, never understood where that came from, guess i do now ^__^
    Love the box ... it isn't really a triangle, since there are four people in it (sasuake - naruto - neji - gaara) ... meh can not wait to read more ^__^
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  • From KoibitoFemme on January 02, 2008
    I have to say it took me several days to catch up to you with this story but I think it was worth it. I really love how everyone seems to love Naruto. I love stories where Naruto is the in the spotlight. Sasuke is getting on my damn nerves with his emo ways but I wouldn't change your story for the world. I look forward to your next installment.
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  • From serenagold on January 02, 2008
    God, I love this story. It took me a few days to read through the whole thing, but its great! I'm not quite sure what Itachi and Naruto's master plans are, aside from jealousy, but I can't wait to read more and find out what! I sort of really like the idea of the Akatsuki members being released from hell and are back on a mission of redemption. This is a really good story and I just wanted you to know you've got another fan out there. ^^


    Some how, I have a feeling Sasuke is going to run into Naruto with a bit of the fox leaking though and freak out, maybe start demanding what the hell is going on... heheh. Keep up the good work!
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  • From LadyWolf on January 01, 2008
    Really now,....I can't wait to hear this!!!!

    please post soon, you are freakin' AWESOME!!!!
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  • From LadyWolf on January 01, 2008
    Happy New Year Everyone!!!!

    I just gotta say this fic is great! All the twists and turns. The characters are very well written...and the story has me hooked!

    I swear Sasuke is a real bastard in this but hopefully not for long. And I love Ino in this, she is definitely good for Naruto so he could have a girlfriend to hang with.

    I gotta say Gaara is sooooo freakin' cute and sexy all at the same time!!!! I just wanna jump him!!!!

    Neji, well he is just Neji, cool, sexy, sweet, understanding....I just love Neji...!

    Naruto, Naruto...damn he's been through some stuff and looks like he's gonna go through some more too....
    He's right though relationship just muck things up if there just onesided....so if you're not ready don't force it!!! I love Naruto in this..he's not overly weepy or wimpy...

    Ok now Itachi, don't know yet, seems like an ass, but who knows..

    **sorry for the very long review. I didn't review at the end of the other chapters b/c I was so into your fic! If I really, really like a fic I usually read it first then review...but this was a special occasion since it's the beginning of a New Year!!!!!!

    Yeah and I'm sitting at home reading fics....how pathetic is that!!! Don't care though I'm readin' some good stuff!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Vague on April 27, 2007
    Hello Author,
    I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

    About the Archive:
    The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

    Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=30. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

    Vague
    Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
    http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2006
    *whingesssss* Are you back at school yet? Pleaaaaaase update *poke poke* I wanna know what happens to Sasuke T_T
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on August 12, 2006
    my god...this story is really compelling to me. i've become an addict!!! hook me up with more plz!! -starts to shake from withdrawal symptoms- (hehe)
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on August 10, 2006
    Holy hot hell, string of curses insert here, I f'n love this so much. Ok, Naruto as a slut, ZOMG. And it's not like slut slut, it's like I'm a horny rocker attracted to talented, pretty boys. And they all like him a bit, too. And Sasuke catches him in every freaking act? THANK GOD. cuz if sasuke's gonna treat him like shit, poor naru-chan deserves to get as much play as possible. and you've made every single one of the boys (neji, naru, sasuke and gaara) so distinct AND really really really sexy. but i'm trying to hear naruto's voice. you said o nins sounded like evanescence, and i can hear that, but then i'm trying to hear him sounding like billy corgan... bah, i hope in one of these next chapters you point out a song where the singer's voice sounds like what naruto would sing like... is he raspy like billy or is he like system of a down or maybe like rise against? ... bah, going to read next few chapters before bed.
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on August 10, 2006
    Aaah, first chapter, I already freaking love it. I'm always on the look out for these kinds of stories. And Naruto is actually so Naruto in this. I always thought that if he wasn't going to be a ninja he would have remained that little punk with baggy pants and the white t-shirt with the red spiral. He just seems like he'd be a little rock/goth punk. I can't wait to read the rest. I hope he keeps up the attitude. Sasuke, too. I love Naruto calling Sasuke a fucktard.
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  • From ANON - chibimel on August 09, 2006
    *sobs* OMG I LOVE YOU! This chapter was awesome. Loved all the guy/guys moments, they made me squeel with delight. Bad Sasuke for wanting to leave the band. He's just like his ancestor. Well lots of love and good luck with school and work.
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