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By : Iori

From ANON - Jiro on April 21, 2004
That was great! Heh, heh. Sasuke is *SO* in denial ^_^ He just let Naruto wank him off, he can't deny it much longer. He liiiiiiikes him (God, I'm such a third grader... well, a PERVERTED third grader...) And I hope Neji's jealous! That would be awesome ^_^ I'm of the opinion that everyone loves Naruto, they just can't admit it. And by everyone, I mean EVERYONE!!! He's so cute, how could they not love him? And as for Neji's imaginary boy friend? Hm... Lee? Shikamaru? *Gaara*? :::Secretly hopes for the lat:: I:: I love this story! Please update soon!!!
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From ANON - Inuyasha\'s Kitty on April 21, 2004
I have been reading this story from beginning till now and I still love it. You have kept me ed ted the entire time which is a hard thing to do might I add. I usually don't enjoy AU fics, but something about this one just keeps me coming back for more. I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing untill now, but i'm not the type that likes to review all of the chapters just in case I run out of things to say. Keep up the great work, and I wil continue to read it.
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From ANON - Vampia Zee on April 21, 2004
omfg are you serious!? Your gonna be there! wow...im spazzing over ere xDD I'm going to dress as Lu Xun (i might be the only one you see anyway) and my Badge will say Vampia Zee so...that kinda narrows the search xDD

Is Neji's on and off Bf Rock Lee? xDD *dies* When will they do it for real~~~ With Naruto being the all knowing uke of course *cackles*

I wuv you *sparkly eyes*

*tackles your Sasuke muse*
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From ANON - jack on April 21, 2004
yo. Wondering if you could do a thing where Naruto and Gaara's demons were attracted to eachother. Kinda like going into heat or somthing? Another thing, if Neji is Sasuke's sometimes boyfriend (that's my guess,) why didn't Sasuke pretend that Neji was his boyfriend for his fangirls?? Sorry, kinda curious. Last thing I swear, where does "Awry" fit into this fic, if it does at all? Thanks and please update soon.
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From ANON - Kashsha(too(too lazy to sign in) on April 21, 2004
THE BEST FIC EVER!^_^ hehe that's all I can say about it:P I loved the SasuNaru action, even though it was fake, Sasuke wanted it pretty bad:D so now I'm happy, cause your ficcie made me^^ well what I almost always say: keep on writing and update soon^_^ (I have to include that, dunno why ^^;;)
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From ANON - Ookima on April 21, 2004
nice chapter
I think Sasuke's beginning to like Naruto ne?
update again
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From ANON - Lacey Parker (lazy) on April 21, 2004
Forgive my mad Shikamaru impersonation- I'm too lazy to sign in...

After much thought, I actually sat down and read this all the way through. I wasn't too sure about it when I kept seeing it pop up, but then I read Awry, and had to see what universe it was based in. I'll start off by mentioning I love this idea. The story flows so well- I was hooked.
I adore how you're portraying the characters. Their personalities complement each other so much.
The musical choices are fantastic. As soon as I started reading the lyrics, my brain queued up the songs.

I really cannot think of what else to say...this'll work: (translator's note: taken from the original fangirl: "WRITE MORE!! ME WANT MORE!")

Yeah...now that I've proven how much of a geek I am, I'll leave now...update soon?
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From ANON - Suukou (too lazy to sign in) on April 20, 2004
How did I miss this chapter?

*beats self up*

Oh... Gaara/Naruto...... *muses stir* there's a fantabulous pairing. And another well-done chapter that just makes me ache and twitchy in the good way. You rock my toe socks, hon.

Itachi/Naruto? *muses wake up* Ignore my other comment about the request since I hadn't seen this yet.

Heh.

Given my new Uchihacest obsession, Itachi is right at the top of my head. And Naruto...

Hummm.... will do, will do.

*wanders away plotting*

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From ANON - Twilight Rose on April 15, 2004
O_O; Well.. I had no idea that Naruto had such feelings towards Gaara... He most probably doesn't. That Kyuubi is a horny little Demon Fox. *Counts on fingers* It seems that Naruto has kissed actually or in dreams, every last one of the prominant male characters in this story.

I'm a little Jealous.

Write more please, I'm sure Sasuke is just BURNING with deeply seated Jealousy... cramming it down into that deformed little psyche of his... I smell instant porn in the making... which is an oxymoron... Oh well. ^_^

-Rose

Ps: Oops. >_o; I forgot the "Daaaaaling"
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From ANON - SpiritFighter on April 15, 2004
^_^ YaYe! another installment! you must make these quicker. spirit's mind: hey! your one to talk! it took you 2 months to update one of your fics! spirit: shaddup *smacks head* heh. anyways, your such a loverly writer! now that Garra's in the picture i bet things are going to get more difficult for naru-chan, no? update soon!
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From ANON - FeatheredEdge on April 14, 2004
GAH, to gto got caught! hahahaha! great chapter! and about the ooc, I just assumed you were trying to make the characters a little different, coz I didn't think this story would work so well otherwise! XD great job, I really do like how you write them! more please!
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From ANON - dragonkitty on April 14, 2004
OHhhh what a great update...jealousy, anger, and wet dreams. Also people that are LOUD during said dreams LoL. I loved it. Oh yea and Yay Gaara!! I love him.
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From ANON - Shez on April 14, 2004
Yay! Great chapter. =D Gotta love Naru-chan's little slutty problem. X3 Hey, quick question: will any of the characters ever regain their memories from when they were ninjas?
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From ANON - Kia on April 14, 2004
Boy oh boy... this is getting REALLY good... And what else can I say? This story is great and I love it!

:P

KR
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From ANON - KARINA on April 13, 2004
Well you welcome. ^_^ I don't mind reviewing, especially when it is for a great fic such as yours isaughaughty Naruto! ^_^ Having wet dreams of somebody that he just met. Naughty boy. But I like that. ^_^ If you haven't notice I'm soooo happy!! Wanna know why? Well because you put chapter 7 thats why.
Now, you wanna know how you can make me happier? U just have to put the next chapter on as soon as U can. I'm gonna be in heaven! ^_^
Oh, question time, YEAH! Well, is Sasuke jelouse because Naruto was dreaming of Gaara? Or he doesn't fell anything right now for Naruto (which I thinh I'm wrong)?
Well till next chapter and next update.
As always I just have to say this (clears voice) I LOVE THIS FIC!! ^_^
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