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By : skatanic

From ANON - 68 on July 07, 2014
You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

CASE ONE -
Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

CASE TWO -
Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

CASE THREE -
Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
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From Vague on February 24, 2008
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From on March 04, 2007
Man. It's soo VIOLENT. I LOVE IT!!!!!
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From yaoiismyantidrug on February 20, 2007
Ooooooh... very, very good. So violent, so sexy. I loved it.
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From ANON - Beca on December 02, 2006
Wow, okay. Ignoring how that made me wilt a little on the inside that was an incredibly in-character and well writen ficlet. Must've sucked for Sasuke to fall unconscious AFTER all that shit was done to him. Had you the plot, time and/or motivation this could have become a much longer chaptered fiction. Wo0t. :D

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From ANON - ruru on July 01, 2006
I like the fact, that it's completly ic. Not this boring "Hah i l0ve ya itachi"-story. Raping itself isn't teh big deal for me.
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From ANON - no name for now on October 19, 2005
whoa...That was wild. Yet, I still love Itashi abd Ushihacest. Damn myself to hell.
*hugs Sasuke*
You should write more stuff
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From ANON - Naraku666 on September 25, 2005
HOLY FREAKIN'.....!!!! THAT WAS *THE* BEST STORY I'VE READ HERE! I don't care about any other story now! This by far in my eyes IS the best! You rock my socks!
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From ANON - cateye91 on August 20, 2005
...my mind is at a total blank at how i can describe how perfect this stori was...umm...wow...that was unbelievable! i luv it! i saw yanagoya's pic for this stori and i knew i had 2 read it...lol...u should write more! ^_^
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From ANON - MultifacetedTune on February 17, 2005
OMG!!! That was amazing!!! Reeeeeally good -- both a creative idea, and well written!!! Keep up the good work!!! ^___^
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From ANON - Atelier on November 06, 2004
I'm usually not one to leave reviews, but this fic really screamed out to me, and I hope you can read this. I want to compliment and congradulate you on your writing skills and for the way you portrayed this fic. Most rape fics these days always go somewhere along the lines of the victim being raped, enjoying it, and falling madly in love with their captor, but this one really sticks out of the crowd and shows what a real rape fic should be. ;) (Hm, I sound like a sadist, don't I? XD)

I haven't delved too much into the "Naruto" fandom of fanfics anywhere to give a true opinion on this, but the way you portrayed Sasuke made him realistic and made you just want to sympathize him. He's still the slightly arrogant rival of Naruto with enough dark/mysterious aura surrounding him, but at the end where you made him get up and go save Naruto shows a side of Sasuke that people normally forget -- Sasuke's isolated and cold when he needs to be, but undereath it, he's still human. Itachi was twisted and sick, but who says I can't obsess over that? ^_~

Ah well, I think I've babbled long enough. Like I said, I loved your fic -- truly twisted. Twisted, but fun to read. =D
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From ANON - Maiden on July 20, 2004
Yanno? Something a/b Sasuke's POV gives this fic like... an almost funny undertone

o_O

yah, I'm a sadist

anyways, this was awsum, it's so tru to the characters
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From ANON - The Ambitious Blank on July 02, 2004
Wow. All I can say is.. just.. wow.

I've written an ItaSasu myself, but it was nothing compared to this. Sasuke's emotions, his anger and frustration are all written out beautifully, even despite the dark and hateful nature of this fic. Itachi is characterized well, sick, twisted, and utterly apathetic to those around him.

Keep up the good work. ^^
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From ANON - YanaGoya on May 07, 2004
Well, how should I put it... You made me love the pairing now. And I was JUST getting to Kakashi/Sasuke doujinshi... *sigh*
This fic... it's breathtaking. I read through it very quickly at first('cause, you know, I wasn't a fan of the pairing back then yet!), then re-read it, and re-read it again. The language. Is. Amazing. I'm not a native English-speaker, and here I was sitting, automatically translating it in my head, and it just made perfect sense (I mean your language structure). Only a couple of times it looked like the expressions you've chosen were a little, LITTLE off (hell, come shoot that part of me that dares to actually pick on this beautiful fanfic, it's "pro"professional philological always-bitching" side, don't mind it ;))).
I won't be flattering much saying you're probably the only person out there who wrote a Itachi/Sasuke piece that's actually... good. Strong on logic side, characters being in their, err, characters and perfect detailed surrounding that makes the story so full and filled. And totally the first fanfiction writer on my practice, who writes fanfics dealing with rape, and these fanfics don't make you go "Huh? Home come they're cuddling and "bathing in the aftermath glow of their lovemaking"???"
Well, in the end, my fangirlish side�s screaming for some screen time. :)) Damn, that was SEXY!!! Yummy, tasty, ever so... so... hot. Waaahhh... Drools... OK, now I probably just HAVE TO draw an Itachi/Sasuke pic... You�ll be blamed for it, so be prepared. ^_^

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From ANON - telvuling on March 06, 2004
your site is awesome...u seem to be the only itachi/sasuke writer of *this* kind...congrats!!!!
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