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Reviews for Delerium

By : SJK
  • From ANON - lalalala on February 16, 2004
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    DAMN that was good! you better be updating soon. don't be one of those ars trs that updates every forever and a day. and don't discontinue or I'll devote my life to becoming a hacker so I can hunt you down ou cou can tell me the rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - Importedrena on February 14, 2004
    Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!!! Evil!!! *sob*sob*sniff*sniff* I need more!...............plz, plz,plz update soon.
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  • From ANON - averry on February 14, 2004
    This story is quite well written. But there were some spelling errors. Uzameki is actually Uzumaki that's how you spell it with kangi any way. I would like you to continue this story please. I know you must be quite busy, but to not finish such a well written story that has alot of mystery and depth would be such a shame. Personally I have seen one too many badly written fanfiction that it left a bad taste in my mouth, so finding a story like this is rare. If you would like ideas for yaoi sex please ask at the end of your fic and i'll reveiw to give ideas. Oh yes. Before I take my leave of you. I would like to say that Sasuke is seme all the way. Naruto is too adorable, and foxlike to be seme. Sorry...
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  • From ANON - KARINA on February 14, 2004
    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!?!?!? You..you..you EVIL WRITER?!?!?!?
    Please hurry with the next chapter soon I must read what happens .
    I.
    I love it, love it,........LOVE IT!! ^__^
    Don't take to long please.
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  • From ANON - ookima on February 14, 2004
    damn you gotota update this
    I totally love the story plot and where this is going
    very original how Naruto was the one to kinda stop Sasuke form doing something he would maybe regret
    please update soon
    I beg of you ( kneels on the ground and looks at you with puppy eyes )
    Please UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - Suzuko on February 14, 2004
    You evil evil person you don't leave me hanging write more
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  • From ANON - Sam Urai on February 13, 2004
    Well, well, well. So you DO know how to write. And click the spell-check button. Glad to see I was in the coversation at the end--that was good. BTW, his name is spelled "Cthulhu". Fucked up I know, I can hardly remember how to spell it myself. Makes me want to reach out and touch the plushy. Why in god's name did you have to make Sakura's husband's name Lee?! Doesn't that bring up bad connotations for you?!? And you should have marked the fic AU--I kinda got broadsided. This fic reminds me of some of the old GW we used to read. God if I didn't know you better, I would have thought you lifted this fic. If I wasn't your friend (and was obligated to put this in my favorites list) I would actually check back on this fic. Don't quite know how you can pull off Naruto just being dumped on the ground after so many years, but thats my only complaint, for once. You actually made thisood ood decent length foce. ce. I'm so sick of your short chapters. Now, my parting question to you (not like you read this): ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS FIC? You know, like how you will never finish your others.
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  • From ANON - Meg on February 13, 2004
    Woo!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
    Sasuke's attitude about the situation was very tragic and had me in sniffles. ;_; *snuggles him* This is a great start! And WHOAH on the BDSM, I wonder where that's going to come from! 0_0 BTW your little mini-conversation Cut Cuthulu at the end had me in stitches! XD
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