fallen | By : sameyler Category: Naruto > Yaoi - Male/Male > Naruto/Sasuke Views: 1521 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1 |
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and a thank you to tinkerkitty. for being a beta to me.
hisoka kurosaki 2008-08-24 id # 3000143790
you never wanna have fun with grown ups unless they tell you what they wanna do(i dunno climb to the top of buildings and spit loogies on peoples heads er somethin)kids,or little boys are fun all they wanna do is fight, little girls well...they ask too many questions their too smart to play with.one good thing about little kids is that when the wanna fight they use all their strength.wonder if sasuke will get home before naruto and what his reaction will be if he finds him not there,will gaara even let him go?hope you can update soon
haha.ah you guys will like the next chapter. my moods up and down. but i got it planned out. i need somthing to take my mind off of the real man. in my life.sooooo thank you for reading and the reviews.
Nejislady 2008-08-24 id # 3000143816
Oooooh!!!! Good sequence with the Sand sibs. How could I forget about Gaara? Now we'll be in for some real angsting on Sasuke's part when he finally realizes he wants Naruto. Then we'll see an all out war between the two (or more) SEXY Semes!!!!!!!!
ya then you'll deft, like the next chappie.and thank you. glad you like it.
sony_kit 2008-08-24 id # 3000143902
hey there! do i sense a love triangle in the making with gaara? hmmm..anyway, this chapter foreshadowed a lot of things, especially with naruto's reason for being and wanting to be with sasuke. can't wait to read more! thanks!
thank you. im just glad you guy's actully read my crap.lol.
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Sasuke was standing outside the door to his home. He looked at his watch; it was already past midnight. He had been standing there for five minutes. (Why can’t I even go into my own home? I have to say something, don’t I? Maybe if I just pretend I forgot he will too.)
Sasuke swallowed the lump in his throat and opened the door.
He was expecting to be greeted by a blushing blond or something. (Well, it’s late. He probably went to bed, which is good for me. I don’t have to face him tonight.)
He wanted a shower. After today he needed one, so he went to his room to grab a change of clothes. Sasuke turned his head to steal a peek of the sleeping blonde and was a little shocked. Was Naruto so upset that he’s actually sleeping in his own room?
(Maybe I should check on him. Make sure he’s okay…and ya…something like that. It’s not like I like him or anything. What happed is just because I went to long without it. Yes, that’s it.) Sasuke was sure he could convince himself that there was nothing.
Sasuke coughed. He needed to think of an excuse in case the blond woke up. He cracked the door and it flew open. He stared at the bed. Naruto wasn’t in it.
“Naruto.” No answer.
Sasuke turned, walking through the whole condo. But Naruto wasn’t there. (Where the hell is he?) Then it hit him. It was stupid to let someone as cute as Naruto walk home alone. Not only that his dope was too trusting. Sasuke furrowed his eyebrows. (No, I did not just call him mine.)
Sasuke grabbed his keys and ran out the door. Instead of bothering with the elevator he ran down the stairs. He hated admitting it but he was worried.
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Naruto yawned as he scratched his head. Then he remembered what had happened and jumped up, swinging his arms in the air, getting curious glances from the three siblings.
“It’s okay, you’re safe with us.” Naruto stopped his mental rant as he looked at a young woman. Naruto blushed; she was pretty. But no one looked as good as Sasuke, at least to Naruto. (Sasuke.) Naruto’s eyes widened as he scrambled to his feet. He needed to get back. Sasuke told him to go straight home and Naruto wanted to be there when Sasuke got home. Naruto grabbed the side of his face, it hurt.
“Here,’ Naruto looked at the woman again. She handed him two small aspirin and some water.
Naruto nodded his head in thanks.
“What, you forget how to say thank you?”
“Shut up, Kankuro.”
“But Temari –“
Kankuro shut up when he got glares from both of his siblings. Temari turned her head back to Naruto and brought her hand to her chest. She’d never seen such a sad look and she didn’t like it. She hugged Naruto, ignoring the glare from Gaara.
“It’s okay. You can talk to us. We don’t bite.”
“Gaara might.”
“Quit trying to scare him, Kankuro.”
Naruto pulled away from Temari. (Oh no. I dropped my pen and paper.)
“What’s wrong..uh, well I don’t know your name yet. Mine is Temari, the jerk is Kankuro, and that red head there is Gaara. He’s the one who carried you here.”
Naruto looked at Gaara and smiled. He looked around the room until he found what he was looking for. He started writing while the siblings just gave him a puzzled look.
:My name’s Naruto. Thank you for helping me. Really, I’m so happy:
“You can’t talk, can you?”
Naruto shook his head no. She didn’t have to sound so sad when she asked.
“I see. Where do you live?”
Naruto’s face went blank. He was grateful for their help but he needed to get back to Sasuke.
:With Sasuke. And I have to get back.:
Gaara glared. He wanted the blond from the first moment he saw him, laying on the ground looking so helpless. Shit what the hell. He’d have to get this Sasuke out of the way.
Temari smiled. “Well I’ll walk you home then. You’re welcome here any time and I’ll even give you my…number…sorry.”
Naruto smiled.
“I’ll take him.”
“What, Gaara?” Temari looked at her brother. She didn’t have time to protest. Gaara had grabbed the blond and walked out.
“Gaara.” Temari looked at Kankuro who just shrugged he shoulders.
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It was 7 a.m. Sasuke had searched the entire city, from top to bottom. He couldn’t find his blonde dope anywhere.he could call the cop's, No shit, how would he explain that? “Itachi.” That’s right. But could he really ask that basterd for help? He didn’t want to and never before would he ever consider it. (No choice.)
Sasuke went to grab his cell when he realized he left it at home. Damn it, he didn’t have time, he was too worried. And whether he wanted to or not he needed his brother’s help. God he did not like admitting that.
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