Reviews for Incubus

BY : KitsuneNoir


  • From ANON - dramastarelf on January 05, 2007

    hay have you thought about writing a sequel for after Naruto is betrayed by Sasuke?

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  • From ANON - Aidis on December 10, 2006

    *sob....sob sob sob cry sob* *hic!* WHAAAAAAA! Why'd it have to be that way? *sniffle* Haku... *sniffle*
    Good fiction, enjoyed reading it. *sniff sniff* Do me a favour, if you write any more fics email me at chees1990@gmail.com... AFF doesn't have author alert like FF does... *sniffle* Ja...
    -Aidis

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  • From ANON - Withering To Death on November 01, 2006

    I loved your story it was so interesting to read . PLEASE do a sequel!!!!!! I want to see what happens when Naruto finally finds out that Haku is not dead . My suggesttion is after he come back from training with Jiraya , Tsunade sents him on a mission to god knows which village and he sees him . During night while taking a stroll , or something around those lines . And afterwords starts questioning Kakashi if he knows anything . Then Sasuke just miraculessly returns to Konoha to seek Naruto. Then Naruto has to decide wether he wants to find Haku and start his relationship with him or stay with Sasuke who has returned to the village. Only to let Sasuke down and stays with Haku. So please do a sequel!!! I don't care if you use my suggestion I just want to see if they get together and all the problems that come afterwords.

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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 21, 2006

    Clever little dickens you!I hope they do met again some day.Glad to hear it was all a grift(con job).Zabuza and kakashi eh?Why not!Kakashi is unlucky,man.Do you have anything to say about what the older two did with their time?Or used to do?I like this Haku.Very much.My favorite part was the "lessons"Sasuke got ,i wish there was mor edetail but it was ballsy of you to go that far anyway.I like your mind.You write sex scenes,the action,very well,lots of changing of the guard and twists and positions and.yeah.I like.Thanks.

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  • From ANON - PoisonAndCinderella on September 04, 2006

    i am so excited.
    omg i absolutly LOVED the kakashi and iruke doing naughty things with sasuke...that was beyond hot that was SMEXY to the max!!
    -squeels like a fangirl that i really am-
    i love this fic!!

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  • From ANON - PoisonAndCinderella on September 04, 2006

    Squee!!
    naruto and haiku doing the dirty!?
    yay!! i am so happy.
    o0o sasuke's jealous. -laughs maniacly-
    i cant wait to see this,
    i love how you incorperate the story like perfectly.
    :))

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  • From ANON - PoisonAndCinderella on September 04, 2006

    Thay was amazing.
    Haiku was always my favorite i was wondering when someone was going to write a NaruHaik fic. :D im glad you did. :))
    x3

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  • From ANON - d on December 24, 2005

    d

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  • From ANON - elle on October 26, 2005

    i have to be honest and say that i don't like this story. this cheapens what happens in the manga. the story in the manga, haku's feelings toward zabuza and zabuza's feelings toward haku, was beautiful. and this story takes away that beauty. i hope you don't consider this to be a flame, this is just my honest opinion.

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  • From ANON - dizzy_otaku on July 13, 2005

    OMG!! That was the best Naruto x Sasuke fanfic Ive ever read!! XD I'm serious!!! And I've read a lot, believe me. *nerd* I love how ansgty you made the ending. It was soo cool that Haku and Zabuza lived too. Your whole plan was grea too. It made sense! ~^-^~ But the bes thing about this story was how you wove it into the original story. I've read so many stories of Naruto and I have yet to read one that was woven into the story so well!! Great job and I love the sex scenes. Sexy, sexy... >.< Or maybe I'm just a horny bastard? Either way I hope to read more of your work soon and it'd be great if you made a sequel! I think you might have already though 'cause this story was all the way in the bad of the Naruto section. I'll look for it. Best of Luck on your future works!

    ~dizzy_otaku from fanfiction.net (I don't have an account there T__T)

    P.S. I forgot to mention how I like how everything flows nicely. Bye!~^__^~

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  • From ANON - Mina on June 24, 2005

    OMG!

    HAKU!

    I miss him and I love you for writing this fic!


    Sequel??


    PLEASE!

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  • From ANON - Erika on March 12, 2005

    OKAY! now he's being all possessive??? LOL>.I LOVED that LINE I saw him 1st...LOL...that was great"D

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  • From ANON - Erika on March 12, 2005

    interesting...so haku just took advatage of naru

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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on February 13, 2005

    Yay!!! That was really good...... very kewl idea, and well done, too -- keep up the good work!!!

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  • From ANON - The Dragon on August 16, 2004

    That was absolutely beautiful in every sense of the word. Have you thought of sequeling this? Like, when they are older, and Naruto finds out about everything? If you don't I'd do it! ((Really, I would. ;) )) But besides that, I just needed to say that I loved it, really. Every single bit of it. =D

    ((PS- That was just the kind of ending I was hoping for. Zabuza and Haku NEVER died! Ever! I was all a trick, just like what happened in this wonderful fic!))

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