Reviews for Ikusei

BY : OutofPocketWriting


  • From ANON - anonymous on November 24, 2021

    Great story. Would love for piss drinking



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  • From ANON - Ninja on November 10, 2021

    My guy, this is amazing, and also, about the piss drinking. Fuck yeah, do that.



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  • From Watchop on November 09, 2021

    Like it so far but I am curious if or win you'll have Naruto take more of an assertive role with Tsunade? We've seen early on that younger Naruto is very boastful, often times overhyping himself, so why not take that sane approach in terms of sex. 



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  • From Siklos88 on November 08, 2021

    I try not to specifically request stuff in reviews, but since you asked, I think just building further on what you have right now would be great. I'd definitely prefer it to stay more in this Avenue of Tsunade pleasing Naruto, but still being in control. This opposed to maledom or straight up subservience. Tsunade will do anything Naruto wants, but she's always taking the lead and being the dom so to speak. I'd also like more stuff like at the end of the chapter, where Tsunade embraces the motherly role. Naruto is starved for affection, and affection of a maternal nature most of all. Maybe Tsunade doesn't like him calling her granny, and instead asks him to call her mommy? Or Naruto accidentally lets it slip out, and she finds she enjoys it, though Naruto is embarrassed. With Tsunade's unparalleled skill as a medical ninja, I'm sure she has ourncould create a jutsu that induces the production of her mammaries to allow breast milk, which would be cool to see that dynamic between her and Naruto. I think the piss drinking could be a good aspect too, as long as you don't want to alienate other viewers lol, but I would prefer it again stays in line with your current theme. Not so much as it showing Naruto having power over Tsunade and humiliating her, but her being so much of a slut for him and loving him so much that she loves drinking it regardless. These are just my suggestions though, and you are of course free to heed or ignore them as you wish. Looking forward to more chapters!



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  • From ANON - on November 05, 2021

    i need more really quick 



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  • From ANON - Xenders on October 30, 2021

    you have to continue this story as a priority it is too good



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  • From Siklos88 on October 28, 2021

    Good stuff! We always need more Shota stuff in the Naruto fandom, and Oneeshota especially. Tsunade was a great choice! It was deliciously filthy, you really got her into the role.



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  • From ANON - TJb on October 26, 2021

    Great work, always love seeing Naruto/Tsunade stuff especialy at this stage, hope you continue this soon



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  • From ANON - Fredtty on October 26, 2021

    This is awesome really hope you continue this



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