it's sad to see that on this site there are so few good stories like this

hello, i'm a new reader, i really liked all the chapters of this story, i really think you have a gift, i just found this new last chapter incoherent, but other than that i liked practically everything, there was only one moment when i thought kurenai I was going to tie myself up with Konohamaru, but in the end, I really liked it, and I hope you will post more chapters.

Why even bring shikamaru into this?, I like the story but I am not here for a shikamaru story.

this story with shikamaru was rubbish, forget it and go back to the main plot 

Things are really spicing up! I concur with JLDavenport though, it doesn't really make sense to me for Shikamaru to be vengeful towards Naruto specifically in this fic. Unless this is some elaborate red herring.

Not 🤢🤢🤢🤢 Shikamaru 🤮🤮🤮🤮, still gonna tune in tho 😈😫

A Shikamaru with motivation? what a terrifying prospect.

I honestly can't imagine shikamaru fucking 1 girl let alone a harem just seems too troublesome for him.

How could u hate Shika? all he does is sit and watch clouds all day the least problematic character in the show by far

Aww. I was really excited to see this updated, and happy/surprised to see Shikimaru finally freed.

But it's hard seeing Shikimaru as an antagonist especially towards Naruto who he's always had a great/trusting relationship wtih, and doubly so if we're start veering into cuck territory with Shikimaru fucking Naruto's mother, or Hinata.

Honestly, I'd rather see him team up with Naruto to take down his mother, he can see the damage she's done to Konohomaru and he knows how painful it was for himself. Take Temari back for himself, and work to fix the system, that seems far more his style than any kind of revenge or spite against a friend who hasn't wronged him (the earlier chapters told us not only that he was the one to ask Naruto to fuck Temari, but that he was happy to have it done since it let him be lazy about it. Unless that was all just him coping, it's strange for him to feel vengeful towards the guy now).

Ahwell, still looking forward to where you go with this. And eager to see where the conversation between Kushina and Naruto goes. And waiting for one day for Hinata to go use Naruto's cock in that hot-spring, especially if he hasn't already taken her virginity by now.

Pls try to drop more chapters already🙏 It's been 11 days for goodness sake.😭 i can't wait anymore 

let's goooooo

Man, I'm really liking this story! Very interesting stuff!

Had to suspend my disbelief quite a bit to see Naruto lose to Anko, but whatever, it's all in good fun. Kushina finally confonting Naruto about the fact that they've fucked is also very much in good fun and things heading towards Mikoto promises even more.

But damn, some pretty dark premises playing out in regards to the Nara cage. Previously I read it as just Shikamaru being lazy and finding it convenient to have someone else fuck his girlfriend, but now it feels a whole lot less consensual and a whole lot him (and possibly Konohamaru) being put in a really unfair situation. I assume you're going for something that's somewhere between both, but yeah.

Either way, looking forward to what's to come!

We've got Ino in on the fun and Sakura fuming about it. But I think this is the first time Hinata's been properly referenced, with it being implied that Naruto's already popped her cherry. I don't know if you're a fan of her, but I like her a lot myself, so if there's space for her, I'd love to see her get a chance to get some more Naruto action. And there's always her mother and/or sister if you want to do more things similar to what you've done with Kaori too.

This was quite the ride copy cat. Honestly a take on a smut fanfic I haven't seen before, not so much in the concept and the girls, but in the way it was told. I really enjoyed it though, and looking forward to Part 2

Can you make Naruto sleep with Mikoto or Yoshino and have Kushina come onto him and entice him into bedding her again also, will any of the girls get regnant, i wanna know as each time naruto sleeps around he has unprotecred sex.

Fucking hell, that scene between Kaori, Ino, and Naruto was god damn amazing @_@ 

Kaori pretty much has no character besides being a mother don't worry, chapter lit 😩