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Reviews for A Shinobi's Incestuous Chronicles

By : ShroudedShinobi92
  • From c0p13r on November 15, 2019

    I don't know about the Thrid chapter...  Putting Kizashi and Sakura in a hot tub together; it always feels like the writer has no creative way to put them together, so he just does a slapdash fic for the readers, and then wishes that he never wrote it afterwards... and then decides to tag on a Naruto/Mebuki pairing as a sort of spinoff to justify its existence...

    Anyway!  I gotta admit that, for a while, I thought the same as Silkos; maybe, the twist that is 92-chan, is schizophrenia, multiple-personality disorder!  But then you kept going and I decided no, not possible; no way so many personalities can share dyslexia


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  • From Siklos88 on November 14, 2019

    How is it incest and interracial? Just because his skin is darker doesn’t mean he’s of a different race, and even if he was black or Hispanic Sakura would still be half of that race, even if she takes after her mother in appearance


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  • From c0p13r on November 14, 2019

    Ch. 2!!

    'and the second was that another reviewer thought that I was mentally ill well I'm here to tell everyone that I'm sane as the day is long'

    I love that, of all expressions to use, you chose this one... right when the days are at their shortest...


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  • From c0p13r on November 13, 2019

    Okay, rereading your summary, I gotta say it conflicts with this story's... uh... uhm... I don't know if 'plot' is the right word, but...

    The summary says that Naruto and the gang all have sexual urges towards the opposite sex, and then you mention yaoi and yuri will exist in this hentai story. (Again: Het stands for 'Hetero' (M/F pairings) not Hentai, you goose). Second, it mentions his friends, not family; so is this strictly Incest as the title implies, or just another random collage with more 'begging peach nipples', 'masculine lips', and awkward dialogue that would, in truth, kill boners and dry up vageenees?


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  • From c0p13r on November 13, 2019

    'Reflection: I know this one is short but I have a feeling that you'll like it'

    Reach for the stars, 92-sama...  Reach for those motherfuckin', perfectly manicured, sun-kissed, powerfully intermixed with fat and muscle stars...


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  • From Siklos88 on November 13, 2019

    This dude has honestly gotta be mentally ill with the amount of time and dedication he’s spent with making this stuff. I gotta give props for branching out from 92, I felt like that number really held you back


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  • From dingo-822 on November 13, 2019

    Ok, I like that the first chapter was Kushina and Naruto since there aren't a lot of new ones. But instead of doing a Het, Yaoi and Yuri maybe make three different stories?


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