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Reviews for Fantasy and Reality

By : OzKanga
  • From ANON - Krim on April 04, 2020

    Amazing story, I love the fact this one is not just mindless lemons after another, but it seems this does have a plot, honestly I want to see more how your protagonist advances and how he uses the control, tough maybe by having that much power over them, his morality could be in danger of falling down.

    In his list of options i am surprised to see Kushina, and I beg you please put her in this!


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  • From MastaK on January 30, 2020

    could do without the accent and the odd writing but it seems ok i guess


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2020

    Great shit.


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  • From ANON - on January 14, 2020

    This story is pretty interesting and I really hope you will have more chapters in the near future soon, since this story is getting good. Keep up the good work! Hope to see more chapters in the near future soon!🙂


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  • From ANON - J on December 25, 2019

    Interesting take. Look forward to more.


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  • From ANON - on December 03, 2019

    Plz update asap


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  • From ANON - Something Serious on November 05, 2019

    The MC reads more like an Australian stereotype than a human being.

     


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  • From ANON - on October 18, 2019

    I just want to give kudos to you for taking the different route of having the narutoverse girls enter the real world rather than the other way around. Also, I certainly love the casual atmosphere you set with the MC's interactions with Hinata and the more realism based foreplay. Personally, I hope there isn't any hardcore mind control thing that goes on considering the nature of power. Great job man, can't wait for the next one.   


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  • From ANON - Yami on October 14, 2019

    This is some grade A stuff...I look forward to future updates becasue I loved this.  Keep up the great work!


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  • From Siklos88 on October 12, 2019

    Oh, questionable lemons? Looking forward to em. Liked the fairly realistic sex scene as well


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  • From ANON - on October 10, 2019

    Plz update as soon as possible I love the story


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  • From ANON - Korosu on October 09, 2019

    So far this is my favorite chapter of your fic and i really hope you maintain the personality of this Hinata, i know you're going to introduce more girls and such but i found this chapter so sweet and feels organic. First time i find a good lemon in here in months, please don't ruin it by making the characters bimbos and the main character unlikable (most of the oc fucks girls from naruto start good and then the main character start to call girls whore and then the fics become unreadable)

    But at the same time the option of milf Hinata, young Hinata and so on with all types of girls in the fic could be really interesting to read (even with just 1 character there's a lot you can explore). Also something that will bother me if you make a timeskip or you start to add more girls, how will he pay for their food and basic needs?

     

    Last thing, cand you post this story in fanfiction(dot)net, i wanna add it to favorites so i can now every time you update this story. Hope to see more of you soon ;0


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  • From Ras933 on October 08, 2019

    Great story! I hope that you might use the other options in the controller, it would be amazing to see Hinata having different personalities or wearing differen types of clothing.


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  • From ANON - Y-Guy on October 08, 2019

    Loved it and i hope you continue it...not enough stories that take characters to our world.  Keep up the great work.


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  • From ANON - on October 08, 2019

    Looks promising! Hope to see more busty girls like Samui, Tsunade, Hotaru, etc


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